WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

Hi there, and welcome back!  I also sometimes disappear, but then sneak back on occasion to see what’s up.  I look forward to seeing you around!

Ps.  I love dragons too!!  I ended up needle-felting a bunch of those little critters and now they’ve sorta taken over my closet *haha*  *heeelp!*

Hello! Welcome back! 🙂

I have read The Importance of Being Earnest, but it was awhile ago. However, I remember really enjoying it, and would like to read it ago. Or, even better, see it performed.

From what you mentioned you’re busy with, I take it you’re studying theatre. Have you played in The Importance of being…[Read more]

Good morning, oh friend. I know thee well.

This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!

Rest in Him

I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
A…[Read more]

Here’s this week’s.

Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine

Blown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]

Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂

Thank You for Forgiving Me

Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more]

Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!

This week’s is one that I wrote more recently.  It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.

As usual,…[Read more]

Ooh! I’ve heard so much about Rachel Starr Thomas! I loved the article she wrote for us at SE and have been wanting to read her books ever since. ☺️

How far along are you with Adorning the Dark? I’d love to hear what you think of it once you…[Read more]

What are yours?

@ericawordsmith

Wow. I will have to look into these. Thanks!

(I will answer in a bit.) (:

Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A

And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂

My…[Read more]

Yurgen’s Tune is one of the most haunting and beautiful songs ever. Period.

And don’t you love My Love Has Gone Across the Sea? I almost cried first time I heard it, even though I hadn’t read The Monster in the Hollows yet. I don’t know how the Petersons do it, but they do.

All thumbs up everywhere should go to the Wingfeather fanning!!! XD

@ericawordsmith – *LOTS OF HUGS* It’s lovely to read your words, girl. And Pride and Prejudice!!! I’m reading it again for the eight-bajillionth time. 😀 I haven’t reached the part with Mr. Collins yet, but yes, he’s hilarious!

@wingiby-iggiby – Nice to meet you too. My favorite colors are…[Read more]

This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!

Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more]

Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]

Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]

Two poems this week!

This one is another ‘spontaneous inspiration’ one. As always, enjoy, critique and, if you want to, post…[Read more]

This one took me months to write, but I finally finished it. Critique and enjoy!!

Watchmen (Sound it Loud)

Watchman,…[Read more]

Hope you all are doing well.  As always, critique and enjoy! 🙂

Torchlighters

Go! the torch must be carried on
All the…[Read more]

@ericawordsmith That’s hilarious!!!! That’s exactly what I do! I pack all my clothes, but by the time I get all the books I want, I have to repack so my books are packed in the middle of everything so they don’t get injured.…[Read more]

This one was also one was kinda spontaneous, but I still have simiular feelins at the time I wrote it. Feel free to comment,…[Read more]

YIKES!! Sorry guys, I forgot to post this past week.

This one came from a sorta random inspiration. I was sitting, thinking…[Read more]

This a revision of song I wrote a while ago. Critique as hard as you want and enjoy!

The Surrendering

I’m down to my last…[Read more]

Okay, this one I just finished. I wanted to write this one ever since last fall but I just couldn’t get -get it! In the end,…[Read more]

Okay . . . *holds breath a moment* This is one wrote a while ago, but I wanted it to make it my best work yet. But ev…[Read more]

This is my very latest one! Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

Awaken the Dawn
Up the pale granite heights I climb.…[Read more]

This is not my usual style of poetry, but the inspiration hit so hard . . . I had to write it. Critique it heartless…[Read more]

I’m trying to pursue it this way, haha!

And I see. Very interesting. Hope it goes well for you. 🙂

Mmm, probably. Might need to do that then. I’ve really just been winging it in my mind–like always, heh–and it’s worked out so far. I think. XD

Define “normal” singing; and why can’t you sing that way–if you don’t mind me asking.

And very true–the…[Read more]

I’m not big on genre, whether listening or writing. 😀

I just… write it, as it comes. Naturally. And hope it works out. “Write with a rhythm, sing with a tune.”

And that’s awesome! You have the part I lack the most–the gift of singing. XD

All I do anymore is songwriting. I’ve finished one album so far, and I’m working on my second! I also wrote one separately–so I guess it’s a single? I’m still looking at ways to try and make them real songs, though.

This week’s a revision of one I wrote years ago. Critique heartlessly and enjoy!

The Surrendering
I’m down to…[Read more]

The inspiration for this song came to me around last Christmas but I couldn’t get it to work out until now! Enj…[Read more]

This one I just recently finished after about a month of struggling with it and forgetting about it. As always,…[Read more]

This week’s is very  . . . fresh, I’ll call it. I just wrote it the other day and I haven’t done much editing.…[Read more]