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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
all good. =) too be expected. Lol. I kinda wrote my piece expecting that =)
ooh… what’s this darkness power?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Haha don’t worry! Mori is a happy little character who will find a way to murder everyone so just… don’t worry. XD
Mori
Ha.
Metabolism of a horse.
Yeah, well the idiot wasn’t wrong.
The idiot was a horse. And a bear. And about fifteen other things.
The elephants had been especially amusing.
But frustrating.
The i…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“What do you need help with?”
Well, that brings back memories. That I don’t want or have time for right now.
“Getting out of the pile of glass would be a wonderful start punk.” I shake my shirt and hear the faintest series of ‘plinks’ on the floor. Tile then, of some form or fashion. “I sure don’t want to fall face first in it.”
I swing…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
It felt like a needle was being jabbed into Nithel’s side as he raced- But he missed it. He missed it! The strange cart had zoomed past two seconds before he made it. Nithel almost threw himself off the roof, in a vain attempt to land on top, but skidded to a stop. He would miss. His bones would break on the tile below, or he’d be skewered by a…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
For a second the entire room was quiet.
Then Arsene slowly turned, a smirk stealing across his face. Alessio instantly had misgivings.
“Oh, woe is me.” He crooned, slowly stepping back toward the window.
“Wait, w-what are you doing…?” Alessio stammered. What kind of trick…?
“Woe is me. I guess I’m the ultimate embodiment of evil. I probabl…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Hmm, interesting! I’m going to change it slightly, but that was an interesting development!
I don’t have anything for Mejt yet XD I know what her great fear is, but I don’t know how to create a scenario around it XD
So… here we go again.
Halmar
They were still staring each other down. There was nothing I could do except w…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Bilateral carotid compression.” The boy said abruptly, causing the other to pause a second. “if I blocked the jugular veins in your neck you would be unconscious before you could make a sound. If I shifted my grip to restrict air from the arrestee, you would die in a matter of moments.”
Arsene was impressed at how the boy knew this.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
(ooh… hope I didn’t move too fast there… )
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
(please change anything that’s not acceptable, and I didn’t mean to inadvertently push Mori out of the story for a while… One idea I had was the magic of the room, you could have him face himself and then once conquering himself, he could wake up, regardless of the potent sleeping draft I shot him with…. but again, change whatever. =) )
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
oooh things just got interesting. lol … @denali-christianson , forgive me if I’m wrong, but Mori wouldn’t hesitate to try to stab Halmar…. right? hehe
and…
haha. this made me laugh for some reason. Poor Halmar, doesn’t know Abirami’s ability yet… lol.
But great job writing! It took me by surprise. Didn’t expect that…
Ku’Aya
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
You were not kidding when you said that Mori was a straight up villain. Two seconds in the castle and he’s already pulling knives on people!
ANOTHER WONDERFUL LORD OF THE RINGS QUOTE! (Any quote with the word “vittles” in it is awesome)
LOL, I didn’t expect Hal to start acting like the responsible e…
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
‘Your friend, I don’t have any idea who you are talking about.’
Alessio’s head pounded, he had no idea where he was. He was trying to get his bearings again, that crazy idiot–! It was Alessio’s fault, he should’ve seen the river. Should’ve reacted any other way, everything was a blur.
He was just scared. He was so so scared, he lost his frie…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
[Quietly steps in. Deposits pathetic writing snipping. Quietly steps out.]
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Well, I may have some trouble keeping up with certain punks, but not today, because today I’m doing my own thing.
Okay, okay, so today I fell through a hole in reality. It’s not my fault. I was just walking along, minding my own business and all the sudden I trip…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Maybe we will find them soon.” Pia took some of the fish from Kalkun and handed them to Ellie.
K’Nika followed from where Julian hand come from with an armload of something green. “Watch these, I’ll be right back!” She seemed almost cheerful as she ran to a tree and climbed it and used a vine to swing across the river again.
Pia picked up o…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Exactly. That still leaves me wondering what these pieces say. They clearly look like they go together, but there are still pieces missing.” Finn said trying to connect the sides.
Julian was now insight also, carrying onions and even berries.
Ahhhh what?? That actually fits his character really well but it’s also kinda funny XD
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