Dakota

@andrew  @tdprince Thanks guys!

And to tdprince, yours was great! Thank you for posting!

@jane-maree I am planning to. Right now I am finding a theme, characters, etc. I’ll keep everybody updated.

@ellen-blanc

“Well,” Megyn began, “I THOUGHT I lived in these mountains but I have never found this place before. My friend and I were hiking together when I lost footing and slid into a canyon I couldn’t get out of. Stella promised she’d find a way down and help me out, but I’ve been wandering since two o’clock and haven’t seen her.”

She…[Read more]

@emma-starr   Well . . .  the flow is alright, word choice was good, so I think that the ending is too abrupt and hopeless. Also, the whole poem is sorta  . . . not like reader could really feel the emotions of the person. There’s something missing. . .

Hope this is helpful! 🙂

@parker  @evelyn @andrew   @libby  @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt  @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @serenity @the-fledgling-artist   @katthewriter  @e-b-raulands  ( please tag some others who think might like this)

This is one I wrote a long time ago but just revisited and revised. Enjoy!

The Music of Creation

I sit here underneath this old tree
Lis…[Read more]

@ellen-blanc (I’ll be here a minute more, then I’ll be getting off.)

“I’ll do my best, but I’m not very familiar with this area of the country. However, I specialize in helping lost travelers find their way and I happen to know of a cozy corner where we could chat.” Ignis motioned in the direction from which she just came.

“Thank you.” Megyn s…[Read more]

@ellen-blanc

“Might I be of service, Miss?”

Megyn open her eyes and tried to focus on the girl in front of her. A very tall girl crowned with an enormous purple hat, arrayed in purple and orange clothes, and- just generally purple and orange, except for her golden hair and lively green eyes.‘She might be able to make sense of this.’ “Thank You…[Read more]

@emma-starr Stumbled onto this page while snooping around. I hope you don’t mind if I say something too.

I would agree with @kate that is needs a smoother ending. But otherwise I really like it!

Sorry if this post is too long, but here my beginning scene in the  role play.

Megyn stepped over another rock and then another. When she had begun her hike, the sun stood high in the sky. Now it had sunk into a furnace of crimson and gold. It burned as the last torch of the day, as mysterious shadows gathered about her. Only by its flames…[Read more]

@tdprince  This is wonderful! Thank you so much for posting your hymns to this thread!! So far this is my favorite one.

@jane-maree As of today, my word count is: 3,653. I did post it through the official page.

I’ll get on and start my role play later. Bye!

@ashira If that means that I say I’ll read it as you write it, than okay. Just let me know and understand I try not to get on here all the time, so it may take up to a week for me to respond.

I think we are sorta starting. Just getting used to each other’s characters before the story begins.

@scarletimmortalized Who’s character is yours interacting with?

@ashira and  @selah-chelyah I like your characters! I always liked captured by Native Americans idea. And I like what they both can do.

@kari-karast I’m so glad it helped her. I’ll be praying for her.

@parker Thanks. I hope things get un-crazy for you soon. Praying.  🙂

@andrew Thanks! Your poem was cool. Keep writing! 🙂