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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Editing a Post in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 5 years, 4 months ago
@melodyjoy @devastate-lasting @taylorclogston @winter_rose Sorry I missed this thread.
There is a time limit on editing posts. However, as a moderator, I have the ability to edit a post at any time, so if it’s important you can always tag me and ask me to edit a post.
Could one of you take a screenshot of what you mean by clicking “edit…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Forum and Guild Improvements in the forum Announcements 5 years, 4 months ago
@jasmine Hmm. I’m having trouble replicating that on my end. The fantasy writers subthread takes me where it’s always taken me, to a listing of topics under the fantasy writers header.
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Forum and Guild Improvements in the forum Announcements 5 years, 4 months ago
@jasmine The forum is running currently…if you’re talking about the guilds, those are permanently retired.
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Forum and Guild Improvements in the forum Announcements 5 years, 4 months ago
@kylie-wingfeather Sorry about that. We used to have them. They’ve been retired since.
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Daeus Lamb started the topic New book blurb – thoughts? in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
Hey guys 🙂
In preparation for launching my epic fantasy novel The Songkiller’s Symphony this year, I read a great book on writing blurbs called Book Blurbs Unleashed. It’s definitely the best resource I’ve found on writing blurbs.
Anyway, something he gave me a hankering for trying out an experimental style and I rewrote my blurb. I’d love to h…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Book Recommendations?? in the forum Themes 5 years, 5 months ago
Don’t forget Cry, The Beloved Country! 😁😁😁
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Book Recommendations?? in the forum Themes 5 years, 5 months ago
All the Crooked Saints
@sparrowhawke Oooh, I read The Scorpio Races by the same author. So this book is really good?
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Eulogies in the forum Characters 5 years, 5 months ago
I thought it would be fun characterization and description practice to come up with eulogies. I’ll start. Please join in!
“He was just such a man as always possessed the rapt attention of everyone who never cared for much in particular.”
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Daeus Lamb wrote a new post 5 years, 6 months ago
What makes a story memorable? One of the most popular responses from readers is characters. Characters give readers an emotional reason to care about the story. But this leads to an essential question: Are your […]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Finding your ember in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 6 months ago
@littlewolf Lots of my story ideas come when I read a really good book but think, “I would do that one thing differently.”
One cool trick that might spark some ideas is to try to imagine a story that’s a mash of two other stories. For instance, “Writer The Count of Monte Cristo meets Peter Pan.” Or The Brothers Karamozov meets The Lord of the Rin…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Help make Story Embers BETTER in the forum Announcements 5 years, 6 months ago
Hey friends,
SE is seeking is seeking your input. We set New Years resolutions each year for new endeavors and ways we can improve what we currently do.
We want to get to know you and how we can better serve you.
Would you help us by filling out this survey?…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb commented on the post, The Mind-Manipulation Approach to Writing Christian Fiction for the Secular Market 5 years, 6 months ago
Excellent points.
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Daeus Lamb commented on the post, The Mind-Manipulation Approach to Writing Christian Fiction for the Secular Market 5 years, 6 months ago
Everyone remember to watch the movie! It will deepen your understanding of this article.
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Daeus Lamb wrote a new post 5 years, 6 months ago
What does liberal entertainment share in common with Christian entertainment?
Both worldviews produce books and movies ranging from propaganda to deeply relatable stories. Most importantly for this […]
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Everyone remember to watch the movie! It will deepen your understanding of this article.
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Hey Daeus, great article about a great movie. I enjoyed how thorough you were with your analysis.
I think, in addition to the reasons you listed, two reasons that the movie’s gradual slide from tradition to progressivism is so convincing, especially to modern conservative Christian audiences, are that 1) the movie started at least a step to the right of where its intended audience was and 2) it used a stand-in belief system.
1) Since most audiences watching Fiddler likely believe that arranged marriages are an extrabiblical tradition of the past for the majority of people, it’s not hard for them to side with Tzeitel against tradition for tradition’s sake. I think we’ve seen how effective these arguments are in our world today. The conservative thinker has not taken the time to study his/her traditions, to find out if or why the traditions are important, so when the progressive thinker dismantles a tradition or ideology that was followed simply because “that’s the way we’ve always done it,” then it’s easier to dismantle other traditions or ideologies, even if they were based on something fundamental. As Tevye himself says at the beginning of the movie, he has no idea where the traditions came from, and I think that’s eventually what leads to his downfall.
2) As a Gentile Christian who loves Fiddler, I’ve felt conflicted by Chava’s marriage before. On the one hand, she deliberately disobeys her parents and goes behind their backs to marry someone outside of her family’s faith. But on the other hand, it seems that she may have converted to Christianity in the process. It could be viewed as similar to the conversion journey of the Muslim girl in the first “God’s Not Dead” movie. She deliberately disobeyed her father by converting to Christianity, but in that instance, she was praised for her bravery. I don’t believe that the ends justify the means, but part of the reason that the argument for the ends justifying the means is so strong in Fiddler for me at least is because it’s an end that I agree with. Had positions been reversed, I’m sure it would be easier to disagree with.
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Excellent points.
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Word War XIX Winners! in the forum Word Wars 5 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys,
We had some insane competition this week. Some people cranked out more words in a week than I thought possible. 😂
Let me present you with your winners.
Group 1: 54,882
Group 2: 21,329
Group 3: 14, 860And the individual with the most words? @the-golden-light at 22,828. 😱
Great job…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb commented on the post, How Should Christian Authors Portray Suffering? 5 years, 7 months ago
Hi Ari.
It sounds like you’re thrusting your characters into quite a mature situation. I suspect your characters will need an equal level of maturity to meet it. They won’t start off that way, but they can learn. Can they help others? Can their deaths glorify God? Comforts like these can be hard to swallow, but once accepted, I believe they’re…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb wrote a new post 5 years, 7 months ago
Editor’s Note: This article is the second installment in our four-part series on how to balance darkness and hope in fiction. To learn why we’re doing this series and how we’re approaching the topics, read our i […]

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This was an amazing article!
I am currently writing a book that has three main characters that are normal people with normal life experiences. Until stuff starts happening and they are running around fighting for their lives. At the end of the book, they will all be captured, and I want to kill off one or two of them because, in real life, they wouldn’t be able to survive. They don’t have any secret training or anything that should help them get out alive. If I were in their situation, I would die. Most people would die.
How would you suggest I go about making my book real, without killing the hope? The characters are all Christian, but how far can I really take their belief in the promise that it’s all God’s plan? Should that take them years? Is it possible to not lose hope when you watch a dear friend/significant other die and realize that you are alone against a huge evil organization?
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Hi Ari.
It sounds like you’re thrusting your characters into quite a mature situation. I suspect your characters will need an equal level of maturity to meet it. They won’t start off that way, but they can learn. Can they help others? Can their deaths glorify God? Comforts like these can be hard to swallow, but once accepted, I believe they’re real comforts. This is an opportunity for some serious character arcs. It sounds difficult, but plenty exciting!
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Wow! Really great thoughts Daeus! Especially enjoyed the section on depicting suffering realistically. You brought up some great points!
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Well done. I suppose if you are writing a tough scene and don’t weep as you write, you might need to dig a little deeper!
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Hi Daeus, I just found this article. It was a fascinating read, but I have a question. So, in terms of writing about suffering, how do you write about the aftermath of a betrayal?
To keep the long story short my character is a shapeshifter. Shapeshifters are outlawed and are to be put to death. And my MC’s best friend has just betrayed the MC to the authorities.
So, what now? I’m not talking about in terms of the plot (spoilers: she’s not going to die just yet), I’m talking about internally. What’s going to be going through her head? On the one hand, the MC does have at least some understanding of why her friend did it. Her friend is scared of shapeshifters (not just for herself but for what shifters have done in the past to her family), and to an extent so is the MC. But on the other hand, her friend did, in a way, just sentence her to death. To make matters worse, this isn’t the first time someone has detrimentally betrayed the MC’s trust.
How do I write about this? What will be the short-term internal effect of this betrayal? And (while I’m at it) what will be the long-term effects?
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Hi StorySeeker,
This really depends on your character. A few things are almost guaranteed: she will be angry and confused. Long term, she will probably develop some sort of wrong belief (maybe something bad about herself or overly sympathetic about her betrayer, or a sense of stoicism, etc.) Something that limits her as long as she holds to it. Trauma rests in the body and will probably express itself there too. Things like restlessness, mysterious aches, damaged immune system, exhaustion, mental conditions, etc.
Ultimately, you need to know how your character is processing this. Everything depends on that. Perhaps let someone good at asking deep questions talk to your character. She lives inside you, so you just need to stop filtering her answers. This video explains the process well. https://youtu.be/5ixw33ZJIgQ
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Daeus Lamb commented on the post, Life Isn’t a Hallmark Film, and Christian Authors Shouldn’t Pretend It Is 5 years, 7 months ago
Even though I’m contributing to this series, this article made feel like a new recruit fanned into flames for the cause.
I do have one clarification question. Were you implying that depression isn’t spiritual? Or that it doesn’t have to be spiritual, but can be one or more of spiritual, mental, and physical?
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Is this cultural appropriation? in the forum Plotting 5 years, 7 months ago
In my humble opinion, people are waaaaayyy too sensitive about cultural appropriation. People act as if they own their culture. As if somehow the aura of the wild west became my inheritance as an American citizen and if someone throws aliens into the wild west they’ve done the equivalent of spraying graffiti on my house and they’re suddenly an…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb replied to the topic Convention Tips? in the forum Publishing and Marketing Nerds 5 years, 7 months ago
This is the first I’ve actually heard of that convention.
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