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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guildmaster Vanishing in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello Parimis!
Don’t let the title scare you, I’m not totally leaving you! I’m just going to be away for a week starting…basically now. 🙁 My school is taking us on a ski trip so that we are out of the way of the poor year 12s who are sitting trial exams at the moment. As it is, I’ve asked @Jane-Maree to replace me while I’m gone again, so…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 11 : The Prologue in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 10 months ago
Prologues. I figured I’d do a post on prologues as it is one of those things that a lot of people get confused on, and often they get confused on it regarding pacing and suspense. (Plus, y’know, @steward-of-the-pen may or may not have asked about them.)
So without any further ado, here is how you can use prologues in your story.
Use them when…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 10 : Sharing in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello Parimis!
I’ve noticed that a lot of people are just scattered about at the moment and I think it may well be holidays elsewhere in the world, (or some sort of event) and people are fairly busy. So this is just an invite to:
– Share ideas
– Share what you’ve learned
– Share any resources
– Catch up on anything you’ve missed out on
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J.A.Penrose started the topic A Survey in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
A letter has appeared, carried by a small steampunk dragon. It drops it into your hand, flies aboround you a few times and then turns back to its home land. Your gaze drops down to the envelope and you see that it is addressed to you. You open it, and it reads:
Hello Patimis!
Us Guildmasters have been talking a bit lately, and decided that we…
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 9 : Description in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 10 months ago
Hello Parimis!
One thing that I’ve just had playing on my mind is similar to what we we talking about back at Choice of Information. (something that was asked to be looked into more.) And the thing I’m thinking of? Description. Or more specifically, over description. Shockingly, it is one of the things that will either kill a scene’s tension, or…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
Goodness! Yep, guys, it looks like Avensbeck did it again! Awesome job though, really good job…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 8 : Timing of Backstory in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 11 months ago
Hello Parimis!
One of the things that I gleaned out of the last lesson was that something I need to look at is when to release key information.
Often in writing, the character’s backstory is really important to the plot. Maybe the fact that Johnny spent seven years in prison is why he plans to betray the main character. Maybe Amy’s obsession…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
Okay guys! It looks like we are just about done! *gasps* I’ll be turning this in in about TWELVE hours. (Speaking in hours so that this makes sense internationally.) Any changes and/suggestions must be made by then!
Thanks everyone who has participated, and woot you guys are…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys!
After a few more little edits, we’ve gotten this draft just about done! All we need is to give the rest of you an opportunity to look at it and make any comments and suggestions that you can think of. I’ll be checking this fairly regularly to make sure that any ideas get checked out. Be sure to hop over to the doc and leave any…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 7 : Your Thoughts in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 11 months ago
Hello Parimis!
This week is a bit different again.
Our Annual Theme is Pacing and Suspense. And I’ve been doing a few little activities each week to help you get the hang of that. But today, I want to ask you what you want to know.
Just comment below regarding what you want to know about for Pacing and Suspense, or anything there that we…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys!
So far, it looks like the general consensus is for the young girl jumping off the train and being shocked by the world around her. I’m also thinking to get really nice character voice, we should go for first person (present or past) as that is a very deeply biased voice.
@Esjohnson has made a different suggestion on the doc, but I…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh Sounds interesting. One of the main things we need to be keeping in mind though is that we need the character voice to be amazing. Super unique and real. Often it is good to display this through, as @steward-of-the-pen suggested, something we’re all familiar with. Then again, we don’t all want to do the exact same thing.
I think…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War 2 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
PARIMIS AT ATTENTION!
War has been declared.
And we have responded with the affirmative.
ARE WE READY TO WIN?
The topic is: “Write a scene from the POV of a five year old who has an engaging character voice.”
The word limit is: 2500 words
The deadline is: 23.07.18
The beginning is: NOW!
Some ideas you may want to consider could be…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 6: Writing Emotion for Suspense in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 11 months ago
As you have seen in our last lesson, emotions have a HUGE impact of suspense.
And now you get to write about it.
Just cos you guys are awesome and I believe in your writing skills, I’m entrusting another snippet day to you! See if you can keep using past lessons to build suspense, as well as following a few of my own tips for this lesson, and…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 11 months ago
*sends out a messenger steampunk dragon with letters for you all*
We have two more guildlings, and I trust you’ll all welcome them!
@wishingwell13 @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @julia @evelyn @rayne @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @ariella-newheart @rachelle @sarah-vdh @steward-of-the-pen @e-jo3 @consciousdreamer @joseph-kolapud…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 5: Emotions in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 11 months ago
Welcome to our lovely frosty (or maybe sweltering, depending on where you are) first lesson of July! We’re going to be focusing on emotions in storytelling today. What do emotions have to do with pacing and suspense? Glad you asked.
It’s all very well to write a scene that has an insane amount of tension in the action. After all, he only just…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
Hmmm, indeeeeeeeed. The main thing is that I don’t know anyone, and I don’t think I can invite anyone into a cabin now… too late in the session.
If we can get 5 people interested, I’ll make a cabin. (If possible.) I will be in two cabins, but hey! That’s fiiiiine.
@wishingwell13 @cassie-hartfinh @esjohnson @aysia-serene @coggleton @julia @ev…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Lesson 4 : The Object in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 12 months ago
WOOT! You made it alllll the way to our 4th lesson! *hands out lembas* Good job. Now we’ll be looking at our beautiful little vectors. Those points that your readers have their attention drawn to. That thing that keeps being mentioned. It doesn’t have to be huge, but the mystery around it does. You need to keep feeling yourself get drawn into it.…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Okay all ye Parimis, it’s about time we found out why you signed up for a guild.
Here is where we can discuss our WIPs (Works in Progress) and get help and ideas from one another. So essentially, a thread full of flailing brainstorming! *cheers* I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone’s working on!!!
I’ll start us off with a quick…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Camp NaNoWriMo July 2018 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 8 years ago
Hello Parimis!
I don’t know how many of you are participating in Camp NaNo this year, but I’m making this thread so that if you want extra motivation or need quick help with something it’s just here.
Camp NaNo, for anyone who doesn’t know, is a virtual online writing camp that happens in April and July internationally. You can set yourself a…[Read more]
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