@consciousdreamer
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Guild War 5 : WORD WAR in the forum Announcements 7 years, 6 months ago
I got 1094
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn You should! It was really good! And actually, this week is her official launch week with a blog tour and everything, and I think the ebook version is 40% off for the week. 🙂
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn Hmm that is really weird. I’m glad you could still see the poem, though. 🙂 And thank you! I don’t know if you know Annie Twitchell from a few writing groups on Facebook or anything else, but I wrote that after I finished reading her debut novel, Through the Pages, which she wrote as a birthday gift for her mother.
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn It depends…I used to write only poetry that rhymed, and it would be about anything (I wrote one about my brothers, one about my best friend at the time, one about jewelry–leave me alone, I was like eight). I tend to write more free verse now, both because I find it easier and also because it fits more what I’m writing about. As an…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@julia Here’s the link to Beautiful Murder, as promised. Let me know what you think, and I hope you like it! 🙂
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1npZxZIJnyFmb2FLWAUijOC9zvptdd_oAkOn9zhdopms/edit?usp=sharing -
ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Parimi Bards anyone? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn I write poetry sometimes, but not super often. I have to be in the right kind of mood. The last time I wrote a poem was after finishing reading a friend’s debut novel, actually, because it was so good XD
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@julia Thank you! And actually…if you’re interested, I have a group of people that are reading Beautiful Murder as I write the first draft, you can totally join it if you want. 🙂 I am super excited about this one, as Beauty & the Beast is pretty much my favorite fairy tale ever. (I already wrote one retelling, then there’s this one, and I’ve…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic WIP Discussion and Help in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
All of your guys’ WIPS sound amazing! I’m almost a little intimidated here haha XD
Anyway, I have two main ones that I’m (sort of) working on right now. (By sort of, I mean I’m a little stuck on both of them. Which is not good.)
You’ve probably heard a little bit about the first one, Beautiful Murder. This was inspired by this comment on Chase…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Lesson 14 : Character Descriptions that Don't Slow Down the Scene in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@j-a-penrose Thank you so much for doing this! It’s much appreciated. 🙂
This is a little thing from a scene that will happen in my WIP Beautiful Murder (which I talked about last week). I don’t know if I’ll use this piece exactly, since I’m not there yet, but it is kind of what’s going to happen. It is a little more than 500 words, but I hope…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Prologue: The Ember Dies in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Physical appearances are a trouble spot…I always feel stupid with that, so I don’t generally do it (which is a problem). And just description in general lol I tried it in a scene once and it felt super awkward and didn’t read very well.
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Prologue: The Ember Dies in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
This was a fantastic prologue! I agree with everyone else here–give me more please!! I love your general style of writing, although it seemed a little strange to me in some places. I think maybe it was because a lot of the sentences seem to be around the same length? I don’t know, I can’t quite put my finger on it. And I also agree with @j-a-penro…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Lesson 13 : Plotting with Purpose in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
This is for my main WIP, Beautiful Murder, so here goes.
1. The Characteristic Moment
I guess this would be like when we first see Isabelle (the MC) murder someone, and then she’s not repentant, exactly, because it’s not her choice. She can’t stop herself, so I guess it’s more she’s just sorry for what she’s done and exacts penance from herself…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic On the Night of the Fire Moon in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
This is honestly one of the most beautiful things I’ve read recently. Brilliantly done. It’s a little bit staggering how connected and invested I feel with Zillah even through such a short portion. I think that’s something I kind of struggle with even when I have an entire book to do it in, so kudos to you for doing it in this snippet!
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
These are all fantastic ideas! @writercatherine @coggleton Maybe another idea for the whole elite side of things could be a sort of stigma attached to the different kinds of dragons? Like, it’s not a big deal if you’ve got a wyrmling/dragonling, because they’re super common, but if you work with a Great Dragon, then everybody thinks you’re all…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
Welcome, everyone!
@wonderland7 Your blog looks amazing! I also would live in a bookstore, except I have a feeling I would never get anything done and my friends would never see me once I go in, so…that’s kind of bad. haha But it would be a lot of fun!
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Passport Checking Anyone? (Introductions) in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Quick welcome to everyone new! We’re glad to have you!
I am sooo happy there are other people who love Lindsey Stirling and Taylor Davis as much as I do! I’ve really only ever met one person who likes either of them even remotely as much me haha. XD When I first started learning violin three years ago, Lindsey Stirling was my inspiration lol she…[Read more]
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@evelyn those look awesome!
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Out of the Darkness, a World Rises in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Those are great!
Also, random question–how do you put pictures in your posts?
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ConsciousDreamer replied to the topic Guild War 1 in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
I really like the ideas regarding the letters, and also your first one @ariella-newheart If we choose that one, I feel like it would be more emotionally impactful if the characters with brothers.
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