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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @steward-of-the-pen @cassie-hartfinh Great ideas! I already love Charlie the horse. Sarcastic characters are some of my favorites, both to read and write. (Also, I think it’s cool that you take horse riding lessons, Darth Pen!)
I had to look up a few old KP articles for advice about cliched endings. For instance, this one says…[Read more]
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anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic I know it's awful XD But can I get some critique anyways? in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
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anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Omg lol!! I love it!! XD
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 @j-a-penrose Yes! I am ALL for the idea of it being from the perspective of the prince’s sarcastic horse. Oooh, how about something like this?
- Prince and horse are best friends.
- Prince decides to rescue princess.
- Prince falls in love with princess and ignores horse. Horse is jealous. (And he’s also bemoaning the fact th…
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
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@silverclaw-bonnetfollyI would be VERY careful with the idea of a fairytale. It really is seriously likely to fall under cliché too easily.
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Julia replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh That’s awesome.
@j-a-penrose Okay! Let’s brainstorm! 😃
If it’s not bittersweet, it therefore must be conclusive. Have a solid ending, like Cinderella does or something. She gets through the hardships, gets her prince ‘and they live happily ever after’. (okay maybe not very conclusive but pffffft you get my point)
Okay, this is…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the ClichĂ© in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
Parimis. The first guild war of 2019 has arrived! And I’ve got a good feeling about this one. (As in, we’re going to love it and go crazy.)
Prompt: Write a story with an UnclichĂ©d Happy Ending. (BITTERSWEET ENDINGS DON’T COUNT.)
Word Limit: 2500
Starts: *awkward cough* Apparently Monday 4th EST
Ends: Monday 18th EST
(So s…[Read more]
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Selah replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
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Evelyn replied to the topic 23 Things Authors Say in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh That was great! xD
Wow!! #too-relabable đ
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The Deranged Ninja replied to the topic Crazy Writers, Artists, and Dragons in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
That was HILARIOUS!! And SOOOO TRUE!!!
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Julia replied to the topic 23 Things Authors Say in the forum Announcements 7 years, 5 months ago
@cassie-hartfinh That was so awesome XD #relatable
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Evelyn replied to the topic The Year of the Daisy ~ Critique please? (: in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@julia Wait… really? Wow, thanks! đ
@cassie-hartfinh Awww, yay! I mean… I’m sorry. xD *pats you on the head*
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Evelyn started the topic The Year of the Daisy ~ Critique please? (: in the forum Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey Parimis!
What’s up. (:
Well, I’ve been working on a short story for a contest and I was hoping for some feedback since I don’t write short stories that much.
It’s called The Year of the Daisy and is short (haha, most of my short stories aren’t short but this one had a word limit xD) It’s about 2500 words. Okay 2498. ;P
Anyways, I would…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 4 : The Other Side in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
A lot of the time, characters are written so that they are 100% good or bad. The protagonist is perfect, good looking, and maybe he has mild claustrophobia as a weakness. The villain is evil, kills puppies and shoots up old ladies in his spare time, and maybe every now and then he tortures someone who spilt his coffee instead of killing them.
If…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic A WIP Update and a Cry for Help in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 6 months ago
@julia Aw, thank you for the offer! I think that since I struggle with sticking with stories that I’m not personally connected to, it would be best for me to draw them from my own experiences. But IÂ really appreciate your willingness to share your ideas with me, so thanks so much! <3
@ariella-newheart Haha, well, I always have had trouble with…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic A WIP Update and a Cry for Help in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 6 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Firstly, I admire your courage in being able to ask for help about this! I have trouble with that because I usually tell myself I can do it all on my own and don’t need any help even though that’s really not the case.
Now, about recharging that creative power… I agree totally with @evelyn and @cassie-hartfinh. Pray, don’t…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen started the topic A WIP Update and a Cry for Help in the forum Accountability & Achievements 7 years, 6 months ago
Hey Parimis!
So, as some of you may remember, many moons ago I was working on a long fantasy series called The Alpha Saga, but set it aside towards the end of August for various reasons. I outlined those reasons here. I also mentioned that I was working on a new standalone novel, set some goals I had for completing it, and fully intended to te…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Characters | Lesson 3 : The Motive in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
The motive of your character is important. The motive is what drives your character forward, and makes every scene feel strong and meaningful. The character’s motive is what brings about the theme, and what pushes the plot along. Your plot is driven by your character’s motive. Therefore, the character motive could be the most important f…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston started the topic Check In – January Week 4 in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
What I read â Emmanuel by Angela R. Watts, some of The Fall of Gondolin by J.R.R. Tolkien, WAR by Sebastian Junger, Homeland: Legend of Drizzt: Dark Elf Trilogy, Book 1 by R.A. Salvatore, some of Haroun and the Sea of Stories by Salman Rushdie
What I wrote â Concept and some paragraphs of a short story I intend to submit to SE, some copywork of T…[Read more]
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CalebOnline replied to the topic Characters | Lesson 2 : The Basics in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 7 years, 6 months ago
I think that, along with what @cassie-hartfinh and @evelyn was saying, characters can be used as mirrors: you can put yourself in another situation or see aspects of that person in yourself, and it brings questionsâ what would I do if I was in their shoes?
It lets you see things in yourself that are usually in your blind spots and shows you t…[Read more]
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