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@rose-colored-fancy

The story is about 91k long. (The shortest one in the trilogy, I’m already at that with book 3 and I’m still in the second act

Oh, I feel that. I have a small problem with having my writing grow longer and longer as I write. xD

This feedback is just about the biggest issues, plot, world, and character. So, let me know when you…

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@noah-cochran

All of that happened before I even read a single word. Craziness. xD

Ohmygoodness that gave me such a laugh XD I literally laughed out loud, that’s hilarious!

I’m assuming they liked it, considering how quickly everyone read it XD It’s awesome, the sequel is even better! And absolutely, the Audible version is amazing! That’s how I…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

So I’ve read some of the Letter for the King, but I thought you would find something that happened rather amusing. I requested it for purchase at our library, and as I was waiting for it to be delivered, my sister saw it. She then got it on audible and began reading it. My sister than told my mother, and the latter started…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

You do that.

I’m going to try training it first (I want a dragon mount to rush into battle with) but if that doesn’t work, bring a sword just in case 😉

That sounds excellent! I’m looking forward to seeing it.

I look forward to finishing it XD It’s going to be lovely but it’s also an embodiment of my vast overconfidence in my a…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

I’ll call you when I find a dragon

You do that. 🙂

On another note, the Delphine dress is making good progress! The whole dress is put together, I’m just working on the embroidery. It’s going to take a while, there are 24 ivy leaves besides the vines and one leaf takes me about 40 minutes. I’m going to be working on it for a w…

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@noah-cochran

I love that. It’s always great when characters’ internal conflict or struggles present themselves in ways like that.

Exactly! Sometimes characters just write themselves and it turns out even better XD

You never know. Perhaps you should go dig in it for a while and find out.

I’ll call you when I find a dragon 😉

On another note, the…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

Whew, that’s like four countries far XD I can never quite conceptualize how massive America is.

No kidding.

It originally started out as a “LOL, Liorah’s being stupid and impulsive” scene, but when I actually wrote it it was surprisingly sad. She’s trying so hard and pushing herself beyond her breaking point to make that miss…

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@noah-cochran

Yep, like 13 hours or something.

Whew, that’s like four countries far XD I can never quite conceptualize how massive America is.

I think one reason I can write for longer periods is that I give the quality of my prose…significantly less thought than most people. xD

Hah, same. XD I often reread only to find I’ve forgotten a word or w…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

One google search later* That’s a really long road trip! That’s from here to Italy! It sounds like you all had a good time!

Yep, like 13 hours or something.

You finished? A l r e a d y?? Wow, count me impressed!!! I can’t wait to read it!

I think one reason I can write for longer periods is that I give the quality of my prose..…[Read more]

@noah-cochran

My apologies for the belated response, life has been busy, but in a good way. My family and I are on our way back from Georgia state, and all of its great weather, people, and tall pines.

Don’t worry about it! I’m glad to hear from you!

Ohh, that sounds like so much fun! *One google search later* That’s a really long road trip!…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy

How have you been? How are life, school, writing, and the weather? (You know, the important things

My apologies for the belated response, life has been busy, but in a good way. My family and I are on our way back from Georgia state, and all of its great weather, people, and tall pines.

Writing has been going well. I was able…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy Aww, thanks! It was fun to write. There’s a lot of winter-based poem inspiration around here, lol. Thank you for reading!!

@emily-waldorf

WOWWWW!!!! Emily, this is stunning!! It flows beautifully and your word choice is amazing!! I love the conclusion it reached, it was just awesome!! You should be so proud of yourself, you did such an amazing job!!!

@noah-cochran

Hey Noah,

How have you been? How are life, school, writing, and the weather? (You know, the important things 😉 )

We’ve had three massive storms over the course of six days. Respectively, Dudley, Eunice, and now Franklin. Eunice was the worst. We didn’t have any serious damages (A few things fell over and broke, a bunch of dead…[Read more]

Kimmi,

That is amazing and heart-wrenching.  Very evocative and poignant.  Great job!

Some pain can only be mitigated by being present and connected.

Be happy with those who are happy, and weep with those who weep. [Romans 12:15 NLT]