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Hey everyone!

Sorry I’ve been inactive for so long.  The holiday season has been more crazy even than usual, as we flew home from CA to TN a few days before Christmas to deliver my dog’s litter of puppies.  We’d left her with friends and found out she was pregnant, so that changed our plans up a bit.  The puppies were born Christmas night, and I didn’t get a lot of sleep that week, so unfortunately you can’t blame my slackness on just being lazy 😉

Anyhow, I wrote a military action novella in the last few months, I just finished the second draft, and I’m looking for people willing to critique and help me edit it.

I’ve never written military like this before, unless it was very sci-fi, and I also have a Deaf MC, another thing I’ve never done before.

Any of you ever written handicapped or disabled characters before?  I could definitely use some pointers on where I got it wrong, because I want to be as accurate as possible.

I probably bit off more than I could chew, but I’m willing to put in the work to make it good, I just need help to get there.

Here’s the google docs link for it:  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_w50KbldZDZl3wGBJzpibPZoUXkimyYdF7fplCgjCWU/edit?usp=sharing

I hope y’all can help me, even with just general opinion on how it flows, feels, and whatever.

And if someone could share this with the other guilds too, I’d really appreciate it.

Thanks guys and gals!

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