@beth20
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay. Thanks!
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Beth replied to the topic New Character Art + Bio and backstory in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 6 months ago
Your welcome!
Hope this helps! https://johnmuirlaws.com/drawing-scales/
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you!
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Beth replied to the topic New Character Art + Bio and backstory in the forum Art Critique 6 years, 6 months ago
Love your drawing!! Wish I could draw that well!
Your character sounds fun! Love those kinds of characters!
The only thing I noticed is that your viper looks hairy, not scaley lol! Not really sure how you’d fix that. But yeah other than that it’s awesome!!
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Do you guys use pen names when you write things?
I was just trying to decide if I want to use one myself.
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Beth Darlene posted an update 6 years, 6 months ago
Just a little thing I want your opinions on, 🙂
Just then, his 11-year-old brother, Tim, came crashing out of the house.
“That sister of ours sure is something!” he said, slamming the door.Just then, his 11-year-old brother, Tim, came crashing out of the house, slamming the door as he went.
“That sister of ours sure is something!”Which…[Read more]
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I sorta like the first one the best. I find that sometimes if your character is doing too much in one sentence, it sorta detracts from the rest of the sentence. (I’m not like a superb writing by any means, but just something I thought of as I read your bits of story above.) But both are good, so either one works fine! 🙂
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I like both 🙂
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I think the first one is smoother, but it slows things down. If you’re going for a chaotic feel, I think the second one is better.
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Thanks you guys!
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Personally, I like the first one better because it seems to flow better, but either one would work fine 🙂
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Okay, thank you! I’ll prob go with that one since that’s the one everyone seems to like better!
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Yup, your welcome! 🙂
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you!
Yes that might be a good thing to consider (the names.)
And yeah the responded thing is a good critique! Thank you, I can always count on you for good criticism lol 🙂
-Beth
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! Yeah, warriors is a fun series!
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 6 months ago
Welcome, welcome! 😉 lol
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Hi there!
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Thank you! That’s funny, I can see why that would be confusing lol! I was thinking Acorn more as color haha!
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Aww, thank you!! I love the Warrior series!
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey!
Your story sounds like something I would read lol! Sounds fun!
You should post it on here! Though I totally get your… hesitation (if that’s the right word) lol! So don’t feel pressured, but if you did I’d read it!
Also, I tagged you in a story I wrote!
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Beth replied to the topic Hello! 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Hey!
Yes, they are very good authors! I’m actually the second youngest, but it’s fun! I like having older siblings to do things with haha! I have one younger sister to boss around lol 😉 jk she doesn’t listen to me anyway haha! 😉
I tagged you in a story a wrote!
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Beth replied to the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Gonna tag you too lol 😉 @emily-maynard
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Beth started the topic Another Short Story! 🙂 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Hello!
Here is another short story! Hope you guys like it, tell me what you think!
Acorn shifted her paws nervously.
What if he doesn’t like me? The words rang menacingly in her head. Her tail was twitching uncontrollably.
“Relax!” came a voice behind her.
She turned around seeing her two brothers looking at her. The bigger one, Blaze, see…[Read more]
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Beth replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 years, 6 months ago
Oh haha! I still really like it though lol 😉
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Beth replied to the topic Popping in to Say Hi 😉 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah pretty sure they did!
Idaho is really nice. Very beautiful! We live in the ‘mountains’ so it’s very wild up here! Right now it’s pouring rain and thundering! My fav!
N.D.Wilson (a guy lol) writes fantasy fiction! Here’s a link to his web site. https://ndwilson.com/ definitely check out his stuff!
I’ve heard of all…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 6 years, 6 months ago
Okay! Thank you! I’ll have to read them sometime!
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Beth replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, you should post them as you go! I think that’s what I’m gonna do lol!
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