Alabama Rose

@bama-rose Sorry! Just a little delayed in posting it. Here it is. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_7fcU9bi72PoRIK6c3Iv-lpu8Ph1kjFsHJfTv2LLEJs/edit?usp=sharing

@eden-anderson @literatureforthelight @noahlitle @r-m-archer @cassandraia @germaine-han

@daeus-lamb @bama-rose

Okay thanks!!

@eden-anderson Thanks 🙂 I guess I learned that to some degree, I can write an emotionally charged conversation. I’ve always been scared to do it before.

@bama-rose Yeah, I think the nod at the end added a lot of power to the ending 😉 It was a good touch!

@bama-rose Yeah, check out Librivox.

Hey, guys. Sorry I’m so late. I made a few suggestions. I hope I’m not too late.

Looks good, @literatureforthelight. I couldn’t have written it better. The only thing I would change is the order, but that’s just my personal interest in non-linear narrative showing through.

I hope we win! (NEW WESSEX…[Read more]

@bama-rose I don’t know. People. Some people may not know the difference between the two, and use the wrong format to make their comment. Maybe I’m just being pessimistic. But I have seen it before, where people reply to a comment when they mean to make their own comment, and I’ve seen people comment when they mean to make a reply.

But, like I…[Read more]

@bama-rose Don’t worry about it. We all learned something new, which is great 😀

@daeus-lamb I’m going to sleep over here, so here is the draft as final as I can get it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12GYU8Kcy0Iv6D6ZFs2E39JjkKOFFFIPC8alipiZfx5s/edit

If anyone sees grammar or wording problems, please just go ahead and edit the document…[Read more]

@bama-rose

Haha! It wasn’t your fault if I felt stupid. 😆 No worries…

@bama-rose

Okay, now that I know I am not the only one who has just discovered this, I don’t feel like such an idiot! 😜

@literatureforthelight

Awesome! I’ll take a look!

(Oh, and thanks for the links!😁)

@bama-rose

Yeah, that makes sense. 🙂 It probably got old after awhile.

Well, if you do decide to change the name, I hope you come up with something you like! ❤

Hey guys, I’ve just finished going through the draft again. The ending is slightly different, and a bit about the bracelet has been moved to the beginning, so if you want to check it out and see what you think?

@bama-rose @cassandraia @eden-anderson @noahlitle @germaine-han

@bama-rose I think what I’m using are em dashes, and I’m using them…[Read more]

@bama-rose

Thanks for your input! 🤗

Personally, I think Alabama is a cool name for a person and a blog. 🙂 Some of my ideas weren’t too creative either…*cough*

Hey everybody, sorry I haven’t been helping recently…I’ve been gone. 😔

@bama-rose

Honestly, I didn’t know what you were referring to at first. 😛 I’ve only ever heard of dashes and hyphens, didn’t even know there were such things as en dashes and em dashes…so sorry, I can’t help you. 🤦‍♀️

Can anybody else help us…[Read more]

Hey guys, I’m sorry I didn’t get too much done today, but I’m hoping to go over the whole thing a second time and tighten up the wording in the next couple of days. If there’s any place you were confused, you think we could put in more/less information, or anything, please go ahead and comment, and even use the suggesting tool to directly edit the…[Read more]

@bama-rose Thanks! I don’t really know the culture either, but I’m doing my best since I follow figure skating and know a bit of what they do.

And I’ll think about them glancing at each other. My reasons for not including anything like that (yet) are that since we’re trying to make it non-cliche, hopefully the peace that Min has after being…[Read more]

@bama-rose oh, not at all!! I know there were a lot of comments to go through. XD I’m glad I was able to help! <3

@literatureforthelight

I agree with @bama-rose ‘s comments. Everything looked good. The only thing I would change is the actual writing – the sentence choices. You seem to tell a bit here and there.

Another thing that I would kind of like to change (this is totally up to you, don’t be afraid to say no) is the order we get the story in. With your…[Read more]

@bama-rose

Oh! I hadn’t even thought of using my Facebook page. Sure, that should work!