Abby Jo

YAAAS!!! @selah-chelyah, same here! 😀

Sorry it took so long to respond; the forum was glitching for, like, EVER. 😛 For some reason, it wouldn’t show Page 2. o . O Anyhow… YES! Which SH book is your favorite?

@kimlikesart

I think it’s a better idea, so people can comment on each chapter without comments being confused.

@eitan @beth20
<p style=”text-align: center;”>~a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted~</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>II</p>
Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant t…[Read more]

@eitan

Oh! Do you want me to start a new topic for every chapter?

@eitan

I’m sorry you had to start over. 🙁

Okay, pre-prologue has disappeared. 🙂  The Roman scene it is.

I watched the video you linked, and might again. (:

Another, smaller problem I had with the pre-prologue is the POV. As a general advice – don’t use omniscient POV.

So, you likely don’t want me to do this in the prologue (: First chap…[Read more]

Oh, I wrote a whole comment and then the electricity fell…

Your writing is really good! Descriptions, punctuation, etc., you do it great. Good job!

You’ve also portrayed good the relationships in the family. Malachi sounds like a real elder brother, and I say it as an elder brother 😉

The main problem with the pre prologue is that……[Read more]

@beth20

I think this is the one you already read. *embarrassed look* I haven’t edited yet. Sorry.

I’ll make sure to read this lol!

@daeus-lamb

Yeah, okay. That’s kinda what I was hearing. Thanks for the help. 🙂

@selah-chelyah On the novel marketing podcast, they talked about a form of book pirating where nefarious third party companies will take your book and create their own print on demand version, price it lower than yours, and I guess that sometimes let them steal the buy now button on Amazon, meaning people are buying from them, not…[Read more]

@jenwriter17

Thanks, Jenna! I found the place to purchase them and all, and learned about them, I just didn’t know what others’ experiences might recommend. 🙂

@selha-chelyah That’s so exciting that you’re publishing! 😀 I’m not published yet, but I hope some of the research I’ve done can help you… About ISBNs, you can purchase them from here (in bulk, even, which saves money). And I believe they have an option to buy barcodes as well. But if you’re publishing with Amazon, I think they generate the…[Read more]

@vic *grins* She could totally keep bees with a busy travel schedule. I’ll try not to go into a ton of unwanted explanations, but basically if she can find time twice a month (preferable more like four times a month) to check on them and stuff, she’s good. That changes a bit in the winter and spring (all times of year, really), and then later in…[Read more]