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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 13 – Arachnoid Terror!! in the forum 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey everybody,
I haven’t finished up my plan for these activities moving forward, but thanks to all of your REALLY AWESOME feedback on my topic last week it seems that the picture prompt activity was by far the most popular, so I thought I’d spin another of those together.You need to write a short scene. Source of conflict? The glass w…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Regrouping in the forum 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys!
So I’ve been having an issue lately… coming up with a new one of these every week is hard. That’s my excuse for not posting one this week.
Sorry. I know it’s lame.
However. I’m going to take this week to put together something of a long-term plan that will (hopefully) help me communicate and use these activities to really be h…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic VERY IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENTS in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys,
We’ve got two big things going down this week.
First, FEEDBACK FORMS. The Story Embers staff and Guildmasters are looking to make these guilds even way more better. To do that, we need your guys’ thoughts. So, we’ve put together this short survey for everyone to go through instead of doing an activity this week. Please take a few…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller replied to the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys results are posted.
I’m running out of ways to say this but… Avensbeck won again. 😐
Anyway, we’ll get them next time. I want to heap praise on @wordsmith and @graceabounds2129 again because they were awesome. Nice work everyone with the ideas too, that was cool.
I’m not sure when our next guild war will be. We’re going to be fi…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Week 12 – Mood in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
One strength that descriptions have is their ability to set the mood for a scene. For example, if my character is walking in the woods I can describe either the spring breeze brushing through the trees or the hollow, cracking leaves whisping through the eeire silence. In these descriptions I’m describing the same thing, but I’m creating a t…[Read more]
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graceabounds2129 replied to the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
Anyone up for quickly writing a scene? I believe today is the due date… and to my knowledge we only have ideas…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 7 years, 9 months ago
Okay so the last Guild War Prompt was a little heavy. That’s okay, sometimes life is heavy and stories must be honest.
ON THE OTHER HAND, we don’t want to leave everybody feeling low, so this time around we’ve got a more… light-hearted prompt: “Write a scene from the point of view of a five-year-old who has an engaging character voice.”
Due…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 11 – Scavenger Hunt in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey Everybody,
I have some important announcements so I’m going to give them their own topic.
This week’s prompt is a scavenger hunt. Open up your favorite book and find a description you love. Once you’ve got it, share it here along with a short explanation of why you like it or how it works.
Can’t wait to see what’ you’ve g…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 10 – Break in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey Guys,
I’m working on some other stuff today so we’re gonna take a well-earned break from activities this week. (If you’re feeling let down, you could always swing by the critique board and help a fellow Lumenite out.)
Also, one of the things I’m working on is a guild feedback form so keep your eyes out for…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 9 – Opening Detail in the forum 7 years, 9 months ago
Hey Guys
Um… no announcements today.
Cool.
And the assignment I have in mind is pretty chill too. I want to try to keep making these so that they help you write your WIP (is that what you guys want, or do you want a weekly break from your WIP?) so… this week we’re literally going to write your WIP.
Go to your first scene. That opening s…[Read more]
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Sarah Inkdragon replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@r-m-archer @aster @anyone else because I’m lazy and I don’t feel like looking up y’alls tags…
So, here is the rough*cough* very rough *cough* version of my first few paragraphs of my novel, Firemaster. And dudes. Pick apart the first line piece by piece, please. I’m one of those people that likes to have an epic-ly confusing and inspiring…[Read more]
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Brink replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@esjohnson @princess-foo @elizabeth @aster @r-m-archer
Are these your whole first chapters? Most of them seem rather short. Not that my chapters are very long, or anything.
Here’s mine. These actually are the prologue and pre-prologue. My first chapter is still in work. The pre-prologue is not having much to do with the rest of the story, but I…[Read more]
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ESJohnson replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@aster a school for villains, eh? This is about to get very interesting, if I do say so myself. Invisibility cloaks? I’m hooked. 😉
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R.M. Archer replied to the topic Post the first paragraph of your WIP here and get feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@aster You have a couple of extra commas in there, one after “I dropped my case to the ground” and one after “I picked up the case.” I’d also reword the line “entered the gate” to something more along the lines of “pushed open the gate” or something else that more clearly indicates that she stepped past the gate; what you have is fine, it’s just…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 8 – Description Video in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey Guys!
How was the week without me? Seems like Rolena did a fantastic job of keeping everything rolling smoothly. (Big shoutout to her for that.)
We have three new members (yay!)
@star, @graceabounds2129 and @wordsmith
y’all know how to give them a proper welcome.
Finally, this week’s activity is easy.
yay
I found this great K.M. We…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic 2018 Week 7 – Death Scene Details in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey, guys, so I know you have all been popping in and out of the doc. I finished a draft of the story, but I kind of stink at endings. What do you guys think? Do you have any changes you want to make or is there anything you don’t like? Can you think of a better…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield started the topic 2018 Week 7 – Death Scene Details in the forum 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey Rillumenites!
It just so happens that our beloved guildmaster is away for the week (doing many exciting, writerly things). So, a thousand pardons, but y’all will have to put up with me again. 🙂 So if you have any questions over the week, go ahead and direct ’em my way.
This week’s activity will be simple since we’re working hard to finish…[Read more]
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R.M. Archer started the topic To tone down or not to tone down? in the forum Themes 7 years, 10 months ago
(This might make a duplicate, in which case I apologize, but I think I accidentally deleted the original trying to edit it to get a tag right. XP)
My main character makes a lot of bad choices as part of her arc (negative and then recovering from that negative arc) and I have two themes that I want to emphasize: 1) People need people. 2) Bad…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Death Scene Battle in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
@rolena-hatfield *weeps* Meee tooo!!
Yeah, this group is full of great ideas!!!
@pookiemonster made a good point: our days are dwindling. I listed out all of the ideas I found in the doc thus far and came up with seven ideas. So, if you guys want to go on over and take a vote, I think that would help get the ball rolling so we can start an…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Death Scene Battle in the forum Announcements 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey guys,
NEW GUILD WAR CHALLENGE! This time we’ve got two weeks to come up with the most emotional death scene we can write. Here’s the dirt:
Max words: 2,500
Due: 6/18/18
Topic: Death sceneSo, last time we did this we wrote two (really good) stories and ended up having to choose only one. Not only was it hard and sad, it also wasted ha…[Read more]
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