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Hey, guys, so I know you have all been popping in and out of the doc. I finished a draft of the story, but I kind of stink at endings. What do you guys think? Do you have any changes you want to make or is there anything you don’t like? Can you think of a better ending or do you think this one is okay?

By the way, I moved the draft to the top and everything else down to the bottom so we can revise more clearly. Also would love to know what the rest of you guys think too! 😉 Oh, and anyone have an title ideas?! If there’s one thing I’m worse at that endings, it’s titles!!

If I missed anyone, please tag them!

@brandon-miller I know you can’t contribute to the story, but are you allowed to tell us what you think without offering critique? It’d be great to hear whatever you have to say, to the extent that you’re allowed.

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