@ariella-newheart
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Thank you so much for the prayer, advice, and support. I’m guessing you guys are going overย Steering the Craft?ย One of my favorite craft books. As far as content warnings in LoH, there is a sex scene between a married couple which isn’t at all detailed, and I believe there were a couple instances of strong language and some s…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
Hey hey hey, it’s been so long wow. ๐
Thanks for starting this @anne_the_noob14
I’m sorry to hear that you’re going through a hard time. I hope that you find peace. ๐
I am also going through driver’s ed thingys. (*high-fives*) It’s taken a long time because my family has been so busy but now that I’m older and have places I need to go,…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart Okies! Sounds good ๐ No problem! I’m excited to read it!!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yay! Sure! No problem! Any deadline for reading/commenting? Also, I presume I’ll have commenting power? Asking my routine questions here XD
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart Ok lol I wasn’t sure. My brain has been all but fried this past week XD
Ah, true… What we could do, and this may also get confusing, is have two topics in the fantasy group, with two different… settings I guess… so when we have a good amount of members on one, we can have people move to the other? Idk, that might be messy.…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Parimi Alcans, assemble! (8/20 check-in) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart Hey, no problem! I don’t want it to die, either! ๐
Ooh, nice! Dunno if you still want a beta-reader, but I’d be glad to be one if you’d like! If not, so worries lol. I have enough other things that it won’t break my heart if you say no XD
Nice, nice! Hopefully you get the job!
Thank you! <3
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yay! What I’m gonna probably do is start up where I last left off. *shrugs* No clue where that is lol but that’s my plan ๐
Ooh yeah, what if we all exchanged our current characters for new ones? (maybe that’s what you were saying lol) Refresh our brains and all. Like kinda just restart the thing? Or… something?
Oh actually…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 3 months ago
*rediscovers this thread*
Anyone want to help me revive this?
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Warden replied to the topic Beta readers for my novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 You can comment directly on the document.
@ariella-newheart If you have time, I’d love it if you read it!
@phoenix I’m glad it interested you! I hope you have time to read it!
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
*puffs in on foot, praying it isn’t too late*
Sorry it’s been so long! Starscream may be hiding from me because I told him he needed a bath, so now I have to get places on foot. Honestly! *huffs*
But I LOOOOOVE this poem!! Besides that typo that was so helpfully pointed out by someone much more prompt than myself, it was…[Read more]
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Evelyn replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@ariella-newheart Of course! (:
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Evelyn replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@ariella-newheart Not to be a broken record with everyone else, but lovely poem! I liked the imagery and the pace. It all works together very well!
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
Just wanted to say…I really love this poem, and especially all the imagery in it ๐
Hope the competition goes well xD
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 4 months ago
@ariella-newheart – I’ve never actually *studied* poetry before, so I won’t be able to give very helpfulย critique, but I will say that as a general reader, I absolutely LOVED this poem. The imagery was exquisite, the rhyming and rhythm pleasant, and it overall made me feel as if I was wandering in the skies.
One little typo: I think you mean…[Read more]
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Daeus Lamb started the topic Introducing GROUPS in the forum Announcements 6 years, 5 months ago
Hey SE people!
We’ve launched a cool new feature on the forum called groups.
You can find them in the nav bar like so:

Groups are hubs for writers to gather around something they share in common. They include a Facebook-like feed and most of them also include their own forums.
So far there are three types of groups:
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 5 months ago
@ariella-newheart @elisha-starquill @anne_the_noob14 @christlover
Happy New Year everyone! I’m back with another entry.
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Runawin shivered as Lucas’s footsteps faded behind her. She waited a moment, hoping he might come back, but only silence met her ears. Sighing, she trotted towards the hallway she’d smelled. A hole appeared in the…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@ariella-newheart Cool! I’m homeschooled and don’t really have tests or anything, but I did take some when I was working through chemistry last year and early this year. I hope you do/did well!
*hugs Caedon* Omw I love how brave he is ๐ I love his whole character!! And I’d love to read the story he’s from if you’d want me to…[Read more]
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Flash Fiction in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@evelyn @anne_the_noob14 @steward-of-the-pen – Thank you so much! ๐
@ariella-newheart – Thank you!! Silly me, how on earth did I forget to include Rylan’s name? That would’ve helped clarify his gender. xD
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Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
I love everything you all have written! I sense a conflict coming. This could get really interesting really fast. ๐
Sorry I haven’t been around much, I’ve been super busy! I’ll probably have more time after Christmas.
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A quiet voice broke through the uncomfortable turmoil in Raclevaโs head.
โThank you.โ
The simple words made her glanc…[Read more]
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Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Flash Fiction in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 6 months ago
@elisha-starquill @ariella-newheart I echo what the others have said! Great job, guys!
Hopefully I will share one soon. I’m not sure exactly what I’ll do with the prompt yet, but I have a couple ideas. ๐
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