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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Critique for my poem “The Sky Realm” in the forum Poetry Discussions 6 years, 2 months ago
*puffs in on foot, praying it isn’t too late*
Sorry it’s been so long! Starscream may be hiding from me because I told him he needed a bath, so now I have to get places on foot. Honestly! *huffs*
But I LOOOOOVE this poem!! Besides that typo that was so helpfully pointed out by someone much more prompt than myself, it was perfect. It took my imagination to new places, and now I yearn to explore the skies. Oh, if only we could all be Winuli!
Actually, your poem reminds me of a rainbow I saw yesterday. I thought it was kind of fitting. 😉













