@ariella-newheart
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Re-introducing Characters? (in a series) in the forum Characters 6 years, 8 months ago
Hey, @edmund-lloyd-fletcher! I understand the struggle. There are times when recapping is inevitable, even helpful, but lengthy introductions do tend to drag down the story and make the reader lose interest. Try to find a happy medium. Maybe weave in the details gradually. Even adding a few previously unknown facts could help retain interest in…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 8 months ago
Ha aha great! Two of your favorite stories? (As in ones you’ve written?)
Aye! One is an Aetherlight fanfic, one is my first fantasy book.
Anyways. I’ll try at least.
That’s the spirit! You never know what will happen when you “at least” try. Sometimes it turns into something marvelous. 😉
I will be praying for sure. <3
Thank you! <…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 8 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Good to see you too!
I’ve been brainstorming a new WIP that’s post-apocalyptic sci-fi. The change in genre has been a fun break, so I’m going to keep at it for a bit before diving back into Dahop’s Ember.
Cool! I have had a couple ideas for post-apocalyptic stories, but they never went anywhere. Fantasy is my primary genre.…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Hey, Guys!! It's Been A While! in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 8 months ago
@dekreel WELCOME BACK! *tackle hugs* (Sorry I’m late…)
I’ve killed about ten characters so far this year. It’s a wonder my heart is still intact.
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 8 months ago
Hello, peoples! I’m back…for a little bit. While I haven’t been absolutely swamped with schoolwork, I’m still adjusting to my new schedule and haven’t been able to catch a break to see y’all. How goes the writing? Are there any ways I can pray for you guys? 🙂
@steward-of-the-pen @anne_the_noob14 @evelyn
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic I'm Back. in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 8 months ago
Welcome back, @taylorclogston! Apologies for my tardiness. I’m glad to hear that you’re doing better. Small steps, right?
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Ariella Newheart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 8 months ago
@april-j-rhys Yes, those comments did come through! Thank you so much! I haven’t gotten around to replying to them, but I did read them.
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Ariella Newheart posted a new activity comment 6 years, 9 months ago
@april-j-rhys Thank you so much for reading! I’d love to hear your general thoughts on the story, characters, and the theme, if you can pick it out. 🙂
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen I haven’t gotten much done except editing since school started. 😛
@anne_the_noob14 Your WIP sounds interesting! It reminds me a little of Monsters Inc., but it’s more somehow. What are your plans for it?
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
@elisha-starquill Book two continues Ariella’s journey in the world of Reimira. She’s getting chased by people and there is the introduction of a new enemy, whose character I will have to develop some more.
You’ll be in my prayers. Have you been homeschooled your whole life?
Thank you! Yes, I have been homeschooled my whole life except for one y…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
I’ll be praying for you for your first day of school.
Thank you so much. I really appreciate that.
Going from homeschooling to private must be a pretty exciting transition.
Exciting, yes, and a tad bit nerve-wracking. I’m not quite sure what to expect. At the very least, I’ll be able to do some research for writing! *clicks p…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic It's Me! (@writercatherine) in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions 6 years, 9 months ago
Welcome back, @writercatherine !
What’s going on for all of you? How’s life? How’s writing?
Life is good! I’m starting school tomorrow. I haven’t written much lately, just been editing the second book of a series.
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
@elisha-starquill I just read the summary of your story and I immediately liked it! It’s a cool concept. 😉
@steward-of-the-pen Since it was supposed to be a controversial topic, I chose to do my research paper on vaccine safety. 😛 We’ll see what my teacher thinks of it. (I’m starting school tomorrow.) I have also been editing a little on book…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Flaws and Quirks in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@countryboy77 Wow. Jayce has a really interesting story! I’m curious to know where it goes. If you ever need a beta reader for your book, let me know! 🙂
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
@elisha-starquill Thank you!
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Hello, I'm new here 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 9 months ago
@emberlin_authoress Heya! Glad to see you on here! Well, you can make your own introduction topic, if you’d like. Go straight to “Introduce Yourself” and click “create new topic.” 🙂
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Character Flaws and Quirks in the forum Characters 6 years, 9 months ago
@countryboy77 Hm. I’d like to hear about the Key Keepers of Archia version. (I assume that’s your WIP?)
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Writers' Corner in the forum Accountability & Achievements 6 years, 9 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen My goals for August aren’t very lofty. I hope to finish a mini research paper in the next week and edit a little more on book two this month.
@evelyn Congratulations to your brother on such a felicitous engagement! (His wedding 😛 )
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Login Issues in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 6 years, 9 months ago
Thank you, @daeus-lamb!
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Login Issues in the forum Guidelines & FAQ 6 years, 9 months ago
@daeus-lamb This still hasn’t been resolved. Should my friend send another email?
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