Anna S.

@kayla13892 Wow, that’s longer than me! I understand that. I’m working on my first full-length novel and I have no idea what my process is yet. XP

Howdy, Kayla! Nice to meet you! (I’m a pantser as well.) I’m trying to finish my draft as well…it will be my first full-length novel because I haven’t been able to stick to anything in the past. XD

How did you start writing?

Hi, Kayla! I’m new here as well!

I’m also working on my draft… almost done with my first edit and it’s taking forever! Mine is contemporary Christian romance/women’s fiction. I really don’t know the difference between the romance and women’s genre myself… they seem to blend into each other a lot. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy @k-a-grey

Thank you both so much! I use repetition/refrain often for songs, but lately I’ve started using it in regular poetry. I was concerned that repetition would bore people.

It’s nice to meet you as well, K. A. Grey, and thanks for the stanza tip. I did fragment the lines for emphasis, but that is a good point on readability.

@e-n-leonard Hey there, fellow poet! Nice to meet you!

This is beautiful!! Nice use of repetition.  My only critique might be to split it up into stanzas to make each “I am a …” stand out, and perhaps combine some lines instead of fragmenting it to make it easier to read.  But splitting up lines can also add more emphasis too, so it’s up to y…[Read more]

@e-n-leonard

Fair warning, I’m not at all a poet, I’ve never written poetry.

However, I loved this! It gets a clear message across, I love the format with a repeating pattern!

@k-a-grey

sorry for the late reply.

lol. it was close. Most of the differences are just me being exceedingly nitpicky. =)

The differences:

– red scales instead of green

– the front fins are near perfect except the three fingers come straight out of the curve of the fin, so there is no hand-like connection between the fingers and the…[Read more]

@jared-williams Thanks!  (How close did I get to what you imagined?)

That’s awesome!

@jared-williams Just gonna put these here 🙂

@kaytlin-phillips

Good morning, Katylin! Hope you’ve been having a good week.

I set my story in the fictional town of Pineville, near the foothills of the mountains. I was originally thinking of calling the book Kate’s Journey, but there’s another book with the same title. The books aren’t anything alike, though. I suppose it doesn’t matter that…[Read more]

@jared-williams Okay, thank you! An email is on its way! 🙂

@k-a-grey

don’t worry about it! I can post my email. That’s fine!

jwilliams.logos@gmail.com

@jared-williams Well, honestly, I’m not really comfortable with sharing my email here.  Could you give me an address where I could email you? But then again, you might not be comfortable with that either….😅

Or maybe you would be okay with sharing the link, but making it so only people who are signed in can see it? If you’re not okay with that,…[Read more]