Story Embers | Abrielle | Mentions https://storyembers.org/members/abrielle/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning Abrielle. Fri, 12 Jun 2026 08:35:11 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en 30 hourly 2 299a22e381872fb921454ce0f60718f9 Olivia (Livi Ryddle) replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105119/ Thu, 21 Sep 2023 20:10:21 -0400 @abrielle

Geez it’s been a minute since I was here xD Still passing all my classes though, so that’s good!

I would definitely be interested in reading your short story! And I totally understand the whole “books need a point” thing… I’ll keep you in mind when my WIP is ready for human consumption 😉

And yes! The Auschwitz Volunteer – Beyond…[Read more]

]]> 0 030d085a9dc0e9cda1f1f7ad7c0ed428 Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105075/ Fri, 08 Sep 2023 16:31:36 -0400 @abrielle Aw, shucks! I’m sorry; I forgot about that rule. :'( Make sure you come–I’ll be waiting for you! In the meantime, my email is emilywaldorf2021 at outlook dot com (at and dot are the appropriate symbols. Apparently spelling it out keeps your information safe from malevolent robots online??? IDK 😀 ) If you want to reach out. If not,…[Read more]

]]> 0 4550d2e4711d16be2b1b160a770b8dbd Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105066/ Wed, 06 Sep 2023 19:54:06 -0400 @calidris

@rae

@abrielle

@e-n-leonard

@lady-grace

@inkhorn

@wingiby-iggiby

@mischievous-thwapling

@millennium

@rusted-knight

@jasmine

@backwardslivewriter

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@emily-waldorf

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@jar…[Read more]

]]> 1 f6f035071fd0b732f05b8fa23d2109db Z B replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105056/ Sat, 02 Sep 2023 02:12:20 -0400 @ragnarok @this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner @abrielle @kimlikesart

 

As soon as the door clicked shut, Loray was made aware of faint music that was playing somewhere off in the distance. How large was this room? Clearly it was bigger than she’d assumed, but surrounded by the darkness it was impossible to tell.

Nevertheless, Loray’s cur…[Read more]

]]> 0 0902645fc0fe2fa25de65e1938f55137 Z B replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105043/ Wed, 30 Aug 2023 19:51:42 -0400 @this-is-not-an-alien @abrielle

@hannahrenner

I saw a suggestion in the comments of the announcement about having members of the forum moderate it instead of the site team. Maybe they’d consider doing that with enough feedback from all of us??

]]> 0 90735cd6aab8e8485af6bc7c8807aa48 Z B replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105035/ Tue, 29 Aug 2023 23:10:59 -0400 @ragnarok @this-is-not-an-alien

@hannahrenner @abrielle @kimlikesart

(Crashes in unfashionably late) Sorry for the delay all! Had a hard time deciding who to drop in here :p

 

Name: Loray
Age: 15
Job: Court musician’s apprentice
Species: Human
Appearance: Fair complexion, wavy dark hair, green eyes. Has a thin build and is…[Read more]

]]> 0 4a6ffa8a37c576a23d49a96490a4cfb4 Z B replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105034/ Tue, 29 Aug 2023 21:52:58 -0400 @this-is-not-an-alien @hannahrenner @abrielle

I just saw it ;-: I can’t believe they’re closing it!! And when I’d just joined too 🙁 Why??????????????????????

]]> 0 6904aa6eedf871f1fa2e4407199e6f44 Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105029/ Tue, 29 Aug 2023 01:24:31 -0400 @abrielle, @ragnarok, @this-is-not-an-alien, @kimlikesart, @reveriewriter

 

Can I cuss now? In protest? Because I am very upset! 😠 😡 😭 😢

 

Okay, I won’t actually cuss ’cause I’m actually getting better (small wins) but what the heck?!?!?! Why?!?!?!?

]]> 0 6192be7eb106c543c0cb2cd0d428cc9c Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105027/ Mon, 28 Aug 2023 00:34:14 -0400 *skids in late, trips on a rubber ducky and accidentally backflips crashing dramatically on a table*

*Sits up and casually sips a cup of coffee*

 

Hey everyone! Ok so most of ya’ll have a kinda overview of everything @reveriewriter if you wanna make a bio and just drop in your character you can choose the setting cos we’re about to reset I gue…[Read more]

]]> 0 7787ad65ac9729b3e76e2c72fbf889db Z B replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105026/ Sun, 27 Aug 2023 03:23:13 -0400 @abrielle

Apologies for the late reply! Honestly I haven’t given that much thought. I would like to make a story and have it published, but it’s not really one of my main goals/dreams.

]]> 0 afec024724d9dddb56b8b053d9da1dfe Z B replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105008/ Tue, 22 Aug 2023 00:20:58 -0400 @abrielle

I don’t read nearly enough lol. I don’t really have specific authors so much as I have favorite books. I remember one series I really liked was called the City of Ember. It’s a dystopian series so I don’t know if you’d be interested in that. As far as I remember it never got too gritty or dark, and there are elements of mystery in it,…[Read more]

]]> 0 c85aad796b5b685dc97305ec0628e473 Z B replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105006/ Mon, 21 Aug 2023 20:14:22 -0400 @abrielle

I remember one of my earliest ones was about a group of girls who got the powers of the four elements ( I think I had just watched Avatar The Last Airbender for the first time lol) it was literally one chapter and I never finished it. Most of them involved characters with superpowers fighting a very cliche villain.

I’ve thought about…[Read more]

]]> 0 e7c96039e28f9162424cb65cda1c8179 Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/105002/ Sun, 20 Aug 2023 19:14:46 -0400 @abrielle and @reveriewriter
Sorry for the late response.

(Especially to you @abrielle. And a frosty hello to time blindness, my old nemesis!)

Welcome to the chaos. We welcome more characters to interact with.

For the briefest rundown possible: there is a spider that the characters are running from: every time you kill it, it comes back bigger.…[Read more]

]]> 0 f4546a413ed81f6d1472b3ef3c9e3272 Z B replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104991/ Sat, 19 Aug 2023 18:28:00 -0400 @scoutfinch90 Both of your stories sound so cool! And the fact that you’re making them into comics is awesome! What gave you inspiration to come up with them?

Currently I have one idea I’m working on, but it’s brand new and it’s more world-building than a fully fledged story. It’s a small, peaceful community of herders that live in a polar…[Read more]

]]> 0 4022ff902a649c59a12f12c6472fe0a2 Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104973/ Tue, 15 Aug 2023 00:01:05 -0400 Nathair lets out a long-drawn sigh. Loudly. Where all the adults could hear his unfathomable discontent and boredom.

This day was never going to end and he was never going to understand half of it.

 

Alessio dashed after Arsene clutching onto the robber’s flamboyant jacket as he bolted through a whirring, colorful vortex into somewhere else e…[Read more]

]]> 0 fdade394db5436fcdd982b7ca7eb7fa0 93@ImperatorPenguin posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/103966/#acomment-104951 Wed, 09 Aug 2023 17:04:56 -0400 @abrielle
I’m about 2/3’s threw the Prequels. And trust me, when I do get to rewriting the Sequel Trilogy, it’ll be completely unrecognizable… for one thing. I already set up what I believe is a compelling sequel hook that basically involves my own version of Aliens Xenomorphs.

In reply to - 93@ImperatorPenguin posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers I’m new here. I have Aspergers. I like playing video games and watching cartoons. And I have anxiety issues. Currently, I’m working on a rewrite of […] ]]> 6640010989d664e788bae974b18440fe Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104947/ Tue, 08 Aug 2023 22:27:19 -0400 “There’s a what?” The shaggy black-haired stranger with the chilling-cold grey eyes demanded “Please explain to me exactly what this place is, strange dwellers of the maze.”

Alessio opened his mouth to yell back something like an explanation, but Arsene shouted over him.

“I’m DONE!” He yells dramatically. “Moreover, I am tired and lazy. So step…[Read more]

]]> 0 3e0fef188be3cc2a6cf02496ca419020 Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104927/ Wed, 26 Jul 2023 00:39:25 -0400 Alessio flew behind Arsene, and they dashed away from imminent disaster, crashing into moss and mummies with total abandon. That is until a stranger (Goya) wandered into the labyrinth.

“LOOK OUT!!!!!” The child screamed “THERE’S A GIANT SPIDER RUN!!!!!”

 

@abrielle @ragnarok

 

Nathair stood outside the door of the maze, bored, tired, sc…[Read more]

]]> 0 50ab439c2d7283fccab6584d7b6a5452 RAE posted an update: @abrielle I'm adding some stuff to the Google Docs, Warning! […] https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104913/ Thu, 20 Jul 2023 23:28:02 -0400 @abrielle I’m adding some stuff to the Google Docs, Warning! fifth and sixth chapters go to fast!

]]> 0 907d574f97871a07f7af9baa5ab809a3 Olivia (Livi Ryddle) replied to the topic Hello there! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104899/ Tue, 18 Jul 2023 21:18:42 -0400 @abrielle Nice to meet you!

Great question haha! I need to write up an actual synopsis at some point… It’s set in the medieval era, and it follows this lady who’s a midwife in this little town, who comes across a runaway boy who says he’s being followed. As the story progresses, we find connections between the lord of the land, slave traders,…[Read more]

]]> 0 a5a3818797701a528aa23ba1aeb5f539 RAE posted a new activity comment https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104897/#acomment-104898 Tue, 18 Jul 2023 18:22:35 -0400 Now it makes sense…Lol! Igua would HAVE to be led down the catwalk. He’s got too much pride to walk down in something ridiculous! Early Igua’s most prized possession was his book of Wondian history from his father but later Igua’s would be his sister but she really isn’t a possession… So it goes back to his book but he gave it to his sister…[Read more]

In reply to - Abrielle replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers @rae Basically, Lord Castle booms the ultimatum (give up your most prized possession or participate in the fashion show) so that Igua […] ]]> 2febe0b3944d26cbd70e513da3b0fcee Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104863/ Mon, 10 Jul 2023 14:06:18 -0400 @abrielle

My family is moving this summer, which proves to always be a major upset to my schedule. 😅

@lady-grace

Welcome back!

@rae

The worldbuilding you’ve done is quite interesting, especially concerning the shapeshifting metal aliens. You’re welcome to drop Igua Cloak (I keep wanting to add “na” to the end of his first name) into the…[Read more]

]]> 1 9bb425b8f4b66f584bdd003ce3baa025 Blooming Grace replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104859/ Sat, 08 Jul 2023 18:18:33 -0400 @abrielle
Here’s his thing from my blog 🙂

Yarrow
Age: 16
Appearance: Shoulder length, blonde hair, brown eyes, 5’ 10”
Yarrow may be an archer under Elvin, but Yarrow knows he could win against Elvin in a second. With the bow, anyway. But shall he win in something else?
We shall see…

Yarrow is the comedic relief character who makes me cry. He…[Read more]

]]> 0 3658cf0e59f5bd093283cc121f967271 Blooming Grace replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104853/ Fri, 07 Jul 2023 18:19:48 -0400 @abrielle

No, not really. He’s been in here since the fall 🙂
Do you want his bio thingy?

]]> 0 d77157b7bfdd87a82dfb9c181bcc0e84 C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104848/ Fri, 07 Jul 2023 17:19:41 -0400 I have made my account work!
Yes, I would love to do the fashion show with Yarrow. Or more, I’m going to have a… Fun time writing it and Yarrow is going to be thrilled XD

Also, @abrielle hello, and welcome to the castle!

]]> 0 326d2699331bf43e0e8456823d6f08b2 E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104847/ Fri, 07 Jul 2023 17:10:39 -0400 @abrielle

Ooh, so maybe greatest fears are up next?

@lady-grace @calidris

I know you two wanted to do the fashion show, right? Though I think Grace’s account wasn’t working.

]]> 0 618fa93e0cd6a67ebbf3c420421331c1 Aesira replied to the topic Hi! I'm new! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104831/ Wed, 05 Jul 2023 19:56:03 -0400 @abrielle

Hello Lydia! That sounds like a very intriguing story! Yes this is my first but I written a short story before so I understand the basics. I have about a chapter of it done so not much but I love it so far! It is about a young 17 year old girl in a society riddled with lies and deceit. After being kidnapped she and a friend will stop…[Read more]

]]> 0 f79b6b62b46f02a3066130d06f28efe2 RAE posted an update: @abrielle would you like to join my Google docs for Guardian Angels? https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104826/ Tue, 04 Jul 2023 22:48:54 -0400 @abrielle would you like to join my Google docs for Guardian Angels?

]]> 4 425975f818c6d75e3aa2ce97666bb19a E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104800/ Tue, 27 Jun 2023 18:16:33 -0400 @inkhorn @abrielle

My character has been raring to go for this XD

Mara

Where are all these new people coming from? This place is so confusing. I’m honestly glad Frey got pulled away because he made that even worse.

Then one of the new ones starts shouting about revolution, and I can’t help but giggle at her. Apparently the Nightingales are…[Read more]

]]> 0 f7703f88e249d48e94b92815e28d81a9 Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104799/ Tue, 27 Jun 2023 16:15:01 -0400 @abrielle

I apologize for not writing a post earlier. This summer is a bit more hectic than usual. 😅

CONROY

“Aha! The army has arrived!” screeched Rhianna with such force that Conroy nearly tumbled off the stage. He yelped, flailing his arms in attempt to regain his balance. He grasped the thick red curtains, pulling them around him to recreate…[Read more]

]]> 0 05842c25f86a2b5c26dc01b9c3f566e9 RAE posted an update: @abrielle Looking into Sanderson https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104786/ Sat, 24 Jun 2023 20:16:29 -0400 @abrielle Looking into Sanderson

]]> 1 68dcc95017d2cc5aa17eb14eed49ea23 Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104756/ Tue, 20 Jun 2023 18:37:54 -0400 @abrielle

Cahira is my main character while Conroy is a side character. Conroy’s backstory had been pretty underdeveloped for a while, but once I started diving in, it got heavier (more than I intended). 😅

CAHIRA

The dramatic entrance of the young woman diverted Cahira’s attention, which was soon captured by the woman’s declaration of freedom.…[Read more]

]]> 0 f229efa420527cf9db41b3afa3b5e92d Joshua Scheele replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104728/ Mon, 12 Jun 2023 04:07:41 -0400 @abrielle

Yess! I am dying to read Murtagh! I have not heard of those books before, they do sound intriguing. – adding them to my list

Dickens’s David Copperfield was a childhood favorite growing up.

Lol XD yeah Tolkien definitely sets a high bar. I may not be able to surpass him in everything but I am positive it will be at least 2/3rd’s and…[Read more]

]]> 0 d8253f24263a915488afbf43417a81df Sarafini replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104723/ Sun, 11 Jun 2023 19:51:22 -0400 @abrielle

Hi Lydia, I’m Sarafini (Sara). I write Sci-fi (a couple of my WIPs are in this genre) 1 fantasy/contemporary WIP, 4 Thrillers and I’m hoping to give His-fic and non-fiction a try. I will never write horror and the only romance will be on the side. I’m an adult homeschool graduate. How long have you been writing? What’s your favorit…[Read more]

]]> 0 b229830d6573069859ef8ed7d1a29978 Joshua Scheele replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Introduce Yourself https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104721/ Sun, 11 Jun 2023 04:21:45 -0400 @abrielle

Hi Lydia! I am Josh and welcome to the crew! We hope we can be a blessing to you and your WIP’s.

I am a huge fantasy and sci-fi fan. I am currently writing an ambitious WIP that starts off with fantasy but then turns into sci-fi, kinda like mixing Lord of the Rings with Star Wars. Lord of the Rings opened up my love for worldbuilding…[Read more]

]]> 0 95dc20620b79d30080851cd4a79cbbc4 Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104717/ Sat, 10 Jun 2023 22:20:54 -0400 @abrielle

We shall see if this works…

And may I just mention that Rihanna is quite the character (pun intended).

]]> 0 056f59f22e1e66d8caf05822425e5052 Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104707/ Tue, 06 Jun 2023 21:32:04 -0400 @abrielle

You’re welcome to come up with something different since the fashion show would probably work better with more characters. 🙂

Also, what characters do you plan on putting in the Castle? (If you need me to post my character’s profiles, I am more than willing to do so)

In addition to that I would like to mention that anyone else who is…[Read more]

]]> 0 b18b52fc7b7c64d61320ea5fa0d3bada E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers https://storyembers.org/activity/p/104703/ Mon, 05 Jun 2023 20:11:20 -0400 Hello, @abrielle ! I might be able to drop in for some CC antics every now and then 🙂

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