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@jared-williams

I just posted critique on CW!

@jared-williams

“Womanizer”

HA! That’s the best one yet😂 Ku’Aya has certainly taken a disliking to Lorcan. So far her descriptions of him have made me laugh pretty hard🤣 I am loving this!! So so funny 😆

haha… did you just compare him to a damsel in distress? haha. I wonder how he’ll feel about that.

I completely agree! So many people try to capture success, and it just can’t be done. All of our society seems obsessed with it. No tropes because tropes are typically over done. But they are overdone because they work and are well liked and…[Read more]

@ajstoryteller Cool.

Samatha looked around, bewildered. What just happened? Where am I?

She had been headed back home to Frappeli, when the storm hit. Home, to her father and her little boy. But she couldn’t remember what happened.

She clutched at the hilt of her rapier that hung at her waist, her insides twisting and making her feel si…[Read more]

@inkhorn

Right?! Enough of this sad endings stuff, eesh! (Okay, okay,guilty as charged!)

I only hope I can make him a character to match her. *scrunches up face in doubt and confusion*.

@emily-waldorf

Mmm-hmm. And a certain someone… 🙂

My heart is singing with joy! We all need characters who have happy endings. 🙂

@rose-colored-fancy

Thanks! Sounds good: whenever you get time.

Aw, yay!

I don’t know if what happened back there was entirely clear so here’s a short of it:

Isella held time–and hence, the cloud–still for about a minute. Enydd ran up and was going to touch Issa, but that could result in disaster, so Isella told her to run. May and Halmar were able to get up, but they’re sick from getting so close to the cloud and…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Ooooh, that was AWESOME!!! I can’t write a reply soon though 😭😭 I’ll try but probably not before Sunday.

Okay, so Idk how Isella escapes the effects of the cloud; if some of Ku’s bugs are immune and can help, or if her connection to Time does something…idk, but she’s not dead, just so you know.

If anyone wants to keep going until…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Thanks! And YAYYAYAY. Poor Daire. he couldn’t have chosen a hero more reluctant to be worshiped.

@inkhorn

Mmm-hmm. And a certain someone… 🙂

@jared-williams

Well I know, but I don’t understand why people want big-brother SCs instead of MCs. Whatever *shruggs* they also don’t like adjectives or tropes, and I…[Read more]

Isella

She could feel herself blushing. Stupid thing to do. Lorcan’s quick eye glanced her up and down. He saw, and didn’t care. He treated it as something normal. Of course. He’s handsome enough he’s used to ladies blushing when he talks to them.

She cursed herself and blushed deeper with embarrassment, then tried to force the color out of her…[Read more]

ENYDD

A look of panic overtook the girl’s face. “No, no, no,” she whimpered, her eyes staring into the distance.

“Is everything all right?” I asked gently.

“No! We must run. Now!” she yelled.

I whirled around, expecting to see some hideous monster looming over us. There was no monster aside from the dead beasts. What was wrong?

The clo…[Read more]

@annabelle-batie

I don’t actually know those languages, lol. I’m sort of learning Spanish, but…yeah.

Cool! Do you have mermen, too? Those one-word titles can be so gripping! I’m currently working on two WIPs, When Morning Comes, a story about two brothers whose relationship has stagnated through a tragedy and their journey back to mutual…[Read more]

K’Nika climbed In the small tree nearby, partial to sleeping in a tree than the ground. Kallun stayed sitting by the fire, poking at it with a stick.

@jared-williams
That’s fine! And I’m glad I got Ku’aya’s reaction right. 🙂

I’ll write Enydd’s reaction to the trap tomorrow. It should be fun. *evil grin*

Haha! great job! that is such a Ku reaction. Sorry I didn’t include it in my post… I was writing my post while you were posting, so I didn’t see it until after I posted mine… hope that’s okay.

“That it has,” Ellie agreed.

Julian got down on the ground and felt around a little bit to make sure the grass was dry, then laid down resting his head against the log.

haha. sorry. dichotomy means two things that are in contrast. usually, big brother characters are side characters, not the main protagonist… though there are exceptions. so I just used dichotomy to highlight that although he is the protagonist, he is also the big brother character of the story.

haha. this made me laugh.

Abirami

Ku was…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Oh, thank goodness! She needs to live a life filled with joy and peace and…other good, wonderful things. XD

ENYDD

The shocked energy that had been flooding me suddenly drained away. I was stuck in a room with strangers from different worlds. From different worlds! And, clearly, I was the most defenseless of them all. I…[Read more]