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Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP

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    Kylie Wingfeather
    @kylie-wingfeather

      Sylvie sighed as she scrambled up to a high branch. Why, oh why, did she have to be so shy around people she didn’t know! She stared out at the group of people, trying to remember who those two boys were. She knew Larnik had been friends with them for a while, and that they had even come over to the farm once. She hadn’t met them because she had hidden herself in her room. Then Sylvie almost fell out of the tree as she realized who they were. The Throne Warden and the High King of Anniera, people from her true home. Sylvie then jumped again as a voice drifted up to her. “Syl-vie! Sylvie! Where are you?” The young girl sighed again. Larnik was looking for her, and chances were that he would have the Warden and the King with him.

      #119445
      Kylie Wingfeather
      @kylie-wingfeather

        I guess everyone has run out of creative juice?

        #119450
        Mischievous Thwapling
        @mischievous-thwapling

          @kylie-wingfeather

          I guess so, lol!  Part of the reason I stopped was b/c I didn’t know how to proceed… Would you like me to write a post where Kalmar says Hi to Sylvie to kinda get the story moving? Or what do you think? 😀

          "May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~Gandalf

          #119465
          Kylie Wingfeather
          @kylie-wingfeather

            I guess you could. And also: Don’t worry! Sylvie will get over her shyness eventually, it just might take a while. And the plot. What should we do? I’ve had a couple of ideas:

            1. Bonifer Squoon/Spidifer isn’t dead and wages war (again) on the free peoples of Aerwiar.
            2. An unknown villain starts ravaging Skree and the Wingfeathers, Sara Cobbler, Oskar Reteep, and Sylvie head over to help Maraly and Gammon (aka Shadowblade and the Florid Sword.) with him/her/it.

            So, what do y’all think? Number one or two? Personally, I like 1 better, but each to his or her own preference.

            #119477
            Mischievous Thwapling
            @mischievous-thwapling

              Oooh, I like the Bonifer Squoon/Spidifer idea I suppose.  But the helping Shadowblade and the Florid Sword also sounds really fun.  What do the rest of you think?

              "May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~Gandalf

              #119509
              Joelle Stone
              @joelle-stone

                Yep, I have no idea how Gammon & Maraly are supposed to meet up with everyone in the Hollows, so I’m just kinda waiting. Although I do kind of want to be Arundelle… @wingiby-iggiby, aren’t you Artham? So we’d be acting together again (which I’m fine with if you are). 🙂


                @kylie-wingfeather

                We could do both ideas: Bonifer Squoon is the unknown villain who starts ravaging Skree. Although I kinda feel like Squoon didn’t survive the trolls… :/ Ooh! We could end up in Plonst! Maybe Oood is having trouble and we have to help him? Or maybe the trolls migrate to Skree for some reason?

                "A writer's life consists of either writing their book or thinking about writing their book." ~?

                #119512
                Mischievous Thwapling
                @mischievous-thwapling

                  @joelle-stone

                  (read in deep, slow voice, like one a troll would have) Thwapling think that very good think!!  Very good think.  Thwapling like it.

                  "May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~Gandalf

                  #119541
                  Wingiby Iggiby
                  @wingiby-iggiby

                    He he, yeah, here I am now 😀

                    THE JUNGLES OF PLONST NEED TO BE EXPLORED. Also, Podo was there once…. but how did he get out?… Maybe they could uncover something about Podo there, but I have no idea what it might be….


                    @joelle-stone

                    Yes! I’m Artham 😉 You can be Arundelle, totally! 😀

                    And I hope we can get Gammon and Maraly back with the gang! Maybe they could be invited to Anneira or something, maybe for a wedding or just for a big party, lol

                    We both started laughin' when the sky started to rain -- Get Along

                    #119653
                    Kylie Wingfeather
                    @kylie-wingfeather

                      Another brainstorm:

                      What if there is an undiscovered island somewhere out in the Dark Sea of Darkness and while the Wingfeathers are sailing (maybe the boat could be called the Silverstar II? :)) and they spot it? Ooh! Maybe there are some magical creatures there? What do y’all think?

                      #119686
                      Kylie Wingfeather
                      @kylie-wingfeather

                        Ahhhhh! I! Have! The! Best! Idea! What if when Yurgen ate Podo, he swallowed him whole, and when the evil dragon melded with Gnag/Davion, Podo was still alive, then when Yurgen was just a skin Podo was able to tear his way out and swim to the mysterious island! We could have Podo Helmer again!

                        #119687
                        Mischievous Thwapling
                        @mischievous-thwapling

                          @kylie-wingfeather

                          Another great idea!! Though what if we combined that with some of the other ideas?  Like if we do one of the other ideas above, and they discover that island?  So we would still have the possible Bonifer Squoon and Oood idea, and so they’re helping/taking care of that, but while they’re sailing to get there, they stumble across that island?  Y’know how books can have multiple things going on?  It could be kinda like that 😛  But, that was just a rambled suggestion.  I’ll do whatever, ’cause with you guys, anything we do is gonna be fun!

                          Wait!  Just saw your new idea!! That sounds cool, let me read it then give my thoughts!

                          "May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~Gandalf

                          #119689
                          Mischievous Thwapling
                          @mischievous-thwapling

                            @kylie-wingfeather

                            Hmmm, the Podo idea is intriguing, though I kinda want to leave his sacrifice alone.  I mean, after all, he died to save everyone he loved and everybody in the Green Hollows, and so forth.  I feel as if us making him alive would take away his act of love, but y’know, we can do whatever 😛 It would be fun to have Podo again.

                            "May the wind under your wings bear you where the sun sails and the moon walks." ~Gandalf

                            #119707
                            Audra E. S.
                            @backwardslivewriter

                              Umm.. Sorry for being late.. But I just joined Story Embers, and can I pop in?

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                              I am not a stone. I am not unaffected. I am flesh and bone, affected by the love you rain down on me- ?

                              #119709
                              Audra E. S.
                              @backwardslivewriter

                                I would like to be Sara, but I can throw in my imagination and create-I don’t know yet, someone… Two characters each after everyone’s chosen one, right?

                                I am not a stone. I am not unaffected. I am flesh and bone, affected by the love you rain down on me- ?

                                #119712
                                Joelle Stone
                                @joelle-stone

                                  @backwardslivewriter,

                                  Great summary of The Warden & the Wolf King! And yeah, I think you can join and be Sarah. We kinda need more peoples. 🙂

                                  "A writer's life consists of either writing their book or thinking about writing their book." ~?

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