Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP
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Ha, you read my mind! XD
JOELLE!! N O! I may kill off a number of characters, but that’s because they’re in a W A R! NO KILLING!
…I sound like a demented version of Batman, don’t I?
Could one steal past those watchful dragons? I thought I could.
-C.S. LewisNO!!!!!!!! If you kill Arundelle or her and Artham’s kid… No, just an absolute, complete no! Do you hear me?! N-O. NO. Way to soon for anyone in the story to die, for writing purposes or not! Artham and Arundelle have had WAY too much suffering in their lives! DON’T MAKE THEM SUFFER MORE!!!!!!!!!
*yells across the forums*
WINGIBY!!!!!!! GET YOURSELF OVER HERE!!!!! JOELLE’S TRYIN’ TO DO HARM TO CHARACTERS!!!!
(Sorry-but-not-really for the rant. I just really think Artham and Arundelle need some peace in their lives after the past nine/ten years. I mean, Artham went crazy, Arundelle got turned into a tree, then Arundelle turned back into a human, but only at the cost of Artham’s nephew! Please, please don’t make them suffer more!)
"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
Audra, you said that your idea you had earlier wouldn’t work, but out of curiosity, what was it?
"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
*grins* (I actually haven’t seen any of the Batman movies, so IDK. :P)
*another grin* While I may not actually kill the poor kid, I think I found a reason why Arundelle may be having problems, something that the doctors won’t be able to explain other than that their kid died. So… a little scare? *evil grin*
BTW, what does your quote say in English? 🙂
@kylie-wingfeather I’m afraid I’ve forgotten! At least I can remember what it was I forgot… *shakes head at a certain Gryffindor with a smile*
Could one steal past those watchful dragons? I thought I could.
-C.S. LewisIt means “He was still. And he was loved.”- The Warden and the Wolf King in Scots Gaelic. Whether it’s right or not… (I used google translate). What is the possible reason for Arundelle’s fall and endangerment of the baby?
Who is this certain Gryffindor that is mentioned?
"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
Ah, cool!! (I love that scene.)
Oh yes, who is this Gryffindor? *props elbows on floor with head on hands* *swings feet in air behind self*
Neville Longbottom, I was referencing Harry Potter and the Philosopher’s(Sorcerer’s) Stone.
Could one steal past those watchful dragons? I thought I could.
-C.S. LewisAhhhh… That makes sense; I wasn’t thinking.
What’s your idea?
"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
SYLVIE’S POV
Sylvie chased after Guildmadam Elinia, but lost her in the crowd. She huffed in annoyance. She wandered around for a few minutes, trying to figure out which covered pavilion held the Wingfeathers. Sylvie soon ran into Larnik, who was looking worried.
“Ma wants you.”
He turned around and ran to a pavilion, the same one that the Wingfeathers were in. Both siblings skidded to a stop inside just in time to hear Mrs. Bronin say “…You can stay with us.”"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
When Arundelle awoke, she was being carried. Artham’s wings were wrapped around her, feathers tickling her nose and making her sneeze. He halted.
“Arundelle?” he asked, the panic clear in his voice. A moment later she was on the ground, with Artham’s wings behind his back and the clear blue sky above. Until it was blocked by the head of her crazy blue-eyed white-haired husband. “Are you okay?”
Arundelle nodded as calmly as she could. Her hand went unconsciously to her slightly protruding stomach as a grimace flitted across her lips. She would not lose this baby. She couldn’t bear any more loss. “Where are we going, Artham?”
He took her hand, his thumb rubbing it as he often did. “A Hollish woman offered to house us with her family. She has two sons and a daughter, but no husband that I know of. We were out of options.”
Arundelle nodded again, this time more weakly.
“Can you walk?” Artham asked. His blue eyes sparkled with caring concern.
With another nod, forced herself to her feet, Artham’s arm around her shoulders. Dizziness took over her head for a second as darkness closed in, but it soon cleared and she forced herself to take a few steps, then a few more, and a few more, focusing on the muddy ground in front of her as Artham led her.
“Mama.” Leeli’s soft voice drifted from somewhere behind Arundelle. “Is Aunt Arundelle going to be okay?”
Arundelle didn’t hear Nia’s answer. All she knew was Artham’s support, the baby in her womb, and the need to put one foot in front of the other.
One step at a time.
Fabulous as always! One thing I would correct:
“She has two sons and a daughter, but no husband that I know of.”
Actually, the Bronin family consists of three boys (Larnik and two brothers who are eighteen and twenty) and three girls (Sylvie and and one sixteen year old sister and a 4-5 year old one), plus Mrs. Bronin. Sylvie’s ‘father’ is dead (died in the Battle for the Hollows; this will come up later, I think). The two older boys (names???), while old enough to move out, stuck around to help with the farm after Mr. Bronin died. I came up with this a while ago, but was too lazy to post it. Also, what does your new signature mean?
*Tries to decipher it*
Okay, so It’s Quenya or Sindarin, I think. Calad means silver– or is it light? And that would be the only word I got out of it. Help!!!!
"I read that book, and it affected me." ~my sister, about the Warrior Cats.
Aha! I was going to ask you about that in another post, but I completely forgot. XD
Yep, calad means “light” (celeb is silver). It means “Flame light! Flee darkness!” It’s a battle-cry. 🙂 Are you learning Sindarin?!
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