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  • #132970
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    He attempted to keep a straight face, looking down into her eyes with a steady gaze. He didn’t salute, but repeated slowly, “Yes ma’am…”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #132996
    Erynne
    @erynne

    She smiled again then shook her head and head off to her room.

    Once inside, she went to the bookshelf that sat directly across the room from the door. She pulled out a thick book and flipped through the pages until she found it. In small but still readable letters the words ‘Linea Realm’ stuck out to on the page. “Oh no.” she said after she completed the page.

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #132997
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Is intrigued lol)

    Kallun sighed and looked around the room. It was simple, but still royal looking. There was a bed, and a fireplace, and a desk.
    He soon figured he should rest for the long day ahead.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133083
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Early the next morning, Ellie woke in a hast. The sun was just barely coming through her window, but she was ready to go. She got dressed then rushed out of her room grabbing two leather packs and two canteens from a closet in the room with the weapons, then headed to the kitchen. In the kitchen she filled the packs with whatever she could find: bread, apples, oranges, and nuts, then filled the canteens with water. Afterwards, the swiftly ran to Kallun’s room. She was about to knock impatiently, for she was excited to see him again but she stopped herself. Remember your place, she told herself. She then knocked how she normally would- with patience and simplicity.

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133086
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun tried not to pounce at the door when she knocked, attempting to calmly walk over and open it. He smiled down at the Princess, “Good morning.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133106
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Without smiling back, she got straight to the point, “I have food here in these bags. Let’s grab the weapons and go.”

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133123
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    he nodded and grabbed hold of one of the bags. “Okay..”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133180
    Erynne
    @erynne

    She led him to the weapon room yet again, and she immediately went to the bow and arrow. She leaned against the wall with her arms crossed waiting on the blue-haired boy to get his.

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133212
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    He picked up a double-edged sword and sheath, as well as a small dagger.
    “ready.” He looked at her.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133248
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Ok, let’s go.” She got off the wall and walked out of the room slinging her bag over her shoulder.

    (Sorry it’s taking me so long to respond. I haven’t been getting any website saying you’ve responded the past few times.)

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133251
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun silently nodded and followed her.

    ( @Erynne maybe tagging you will help?)

    • This reply was modified 1 week, 6 days ago by Emma Walker.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133276
    Erynne
    @erynne

    She made her way to the entrance of the palace. She could hear Kallun following. She stepped outside and stared out into her kingdom.

    (That’s alright, I got it figured out! Somehow I got unsubscribed. Thanks anyway!)

    • This reply was modified 1 week, 5 days ago by Erynne.

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133278
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun looked around warily. So much destruction had already taken place.
    (lol oki)

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #133342
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “We better get started. Do you have any idea of where we’re going exactly?” She realized she had not even thought that far ahead.

    (I’m really sorry it’s taking me so long to answer. Life got really busy, but I should be better at responding now.)

    "There are no mistakes, only happy accidents."
    -Bob Ross

    #133403
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    “If we follow the path made by the destruction, we should come to the person doing the destroying.”

    Kallun pointed, “you can see the fire and smoke trail the kingdom in a line or path, starting on the west, then turning slightly to north-east. So we go northeast..”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

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