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  • #150609
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    She gave him a silent nod, then turned North.

    (yeah that’s all I have for her right now lol)

    (yeah I cried a lot. Thankssss)

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150617
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Lacey jumped up from the ground and went with the others. Julian picked up a stick to use as a walking stick, and Ellie went with the crowd.

    The sun was already beating down, “Whew, it’s a hot day for this time of year,” Julian said wiping his forehead.

    (Wizard’s curse btw)

    (She sounds cool! Yeah, I bet it was an emotional time. I’m sad I won’t get to experience that moment being homeschooled, but at the same time I’m not sure if I could handle it. I hate change like that)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150620
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Pia literally grew up in a desert she’s fine XD)

    Kallun shedded his coat and draped it across an arm. “Hate sun.” He muttered under his breath.

    K’Nika said no complaints, even though she was hot as well.

    Pia was not fazed, and led the way as they walked.

    (yeah…. As soon as I find a good face claim for her I’ll jump on the CUCG.

    Yeah, it was crazy. )

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150621
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Oh and I was homeschooled, it was a homeschool graduation with other homeschoolers

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150622
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “This is strange,” Ellie agreed.

    “And quite miserable,” Lacey added.

    Finn walked on in silence not acknowledging the heat. This wasn’t anything new to him, so it was hot but tolerable.

    “I don’t remember it being so hot at home,” Lacey started again, “except that time we had the festival with that huge fire and Julian got way too close. Finn had to splash him with water because his clothes started to light up.”

    Julian rolled his eyes and Finn smirked.

    “Good memories,” Ellie smiled.

    (that’s so cool that you get to do that even with being homeschooled!)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150623
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    K’Nika laughed Softly but the other two remained silent.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150624
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Yeah, it’s really something!

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150627
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Does anyone know what’s ahead?” Julian asked smoothing back his sweaty hair.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150628
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    “Oh…” Pia stopped and turned, “Bridging’s Sea? If we keep going north we would reach the village of Chacla… which… which neighbors…” She paused and squared her shoulders, lifting her chin in agitation. “Which neighbors Thabia.”
    K’Nika’s eyes widened.
    Kallun wrapped an arm around the small girl, as much of an older brother as he knew he could be. “It’s alright, K’Nika.”
    Pia let out a frustrated breath of air. “It’s like the wizard knows the one place we don’t wish to go near.” She muttered.

    • This reply was modified 2 years, 6 months ago by Emma Walker.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150632
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (Haha, great idea 😉 )

    Finn frowned and looked at Ellie. She shook her head and whispered, “K’Nika’s people don’t get along with Thabians…”

    “Oh,” Finn nodded.

    Julian sped up to get close to K’Nika, “it’s alright, they won’t recognize you.” He told her.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150644
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Yayyyyyyyy XD)

    Kallun nodded. “Because she’s my sister.” He stressed the words pointedly at Julian and Ellie.
    K’Nika hugged Kallun and walked over to Pia. “Does that make us near sisters?”
    Pia stared at the girl, obviously caught off guard by the question. “I-I don’t- I’ve never had a sister. I don’t know what a sister does.”
    K’Nika only shrugged. “Well, for starters… sisters are friends.”
    Pia nodded, watching the tears forming in the girl’s eyes, realizing that K’Nika was thinking of her real blood sister and what had happened to her.
    Pia’s expression softened. “I-I can do that..”

    Kallun smiled as he watched them, watching K’Nika hug Pia and Pia almost hesitantly wrapping her arms around the girl in return.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150675
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (Woah, I am so sorry I haven’t been here! I completely forgot!)

    Finn put his arm around his own sister realizing quickly that K’Nika wasn’t as lucky as he was.

    Ellie walked over to K’Nika and placed her hand on her arm, “I may not be a sister, but I’m still your friend.”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150676
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (It’s totally okay!)

    “Thank you, Ellie.” K’Nika smiled a little bit. “Let’s get going.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150684
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Yes, let’s.” Ellie said.

    Finn went forward so he was in the lead, and the others followed

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150692
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia also took her place at the front, pike gripped in one hand.

    Kallun walked in the back, figuring if they were attacked from behind he’d be the best at combat there. K’Nika walked Beside him.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

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