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  • #150425
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Sounds interesting. Hopefully it’s good,”

    “You know, Julian,” Ellie said, “You should just be happy with whatever you get at this point.”

    He shrugged and sat down on the log as Ellie passed the fish around.

    “Oh, here, we can eat my berries,” Julian said picking up his bag where he had put them

    Lacey was actually awake now, “Wait,” she said as he was pulling a handful out for himself, “Are those safe?”

    “Lace, I’m sure they are,” he said rolling his eyes.

    She raised her eyebrows and crossed her arms, “Last time you gave us be-”

    “Okay, okay!” Julian interrupted her, “Do any of you recognize these?” he asked holding his hand out to the foreigners.

     

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150431
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia looked at K’Nika. She was the local, even though she was pretending to be Kallun’s sister.

    The girl gazed at the berries. “Well.. it all depends..”

    “How?”

    ”they have to be perfectly ripe to eat, and they look unripe. They are red. But if they were half red and half blue, then they’d be perfect.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150455
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Julian’s poisoned us with berries before, so I don’t trust his judgement,” Lacey said.

    “Just tell the entire world, would you, Lace?” Julian rolled his eyes.

    “Maybe next time,” Ellie said kind of laughing at her friends.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150460
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    “Yeah… I wouldn’t eat those.” K’Nika replied.

    Kallun nodded.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150513
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Julian sighed and threw them over his shoulder.

    “Sorry Julian, we just don’t want you poisoning us again,” Lacey mumbled

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150515
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    K’Nika smiked And ate an onion.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150516
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Dude I just gave Kallun an actual sister and he doesn’t know he has one at all.)

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150561
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (that’s epic!!! how does he find out about her?)

    After everyone finished breakfast, Finn stood. “Shall we head forward?”

    (He’s very much a leader, so look out XD)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150562
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (I have no cluee Lolol XD)

    Pia stood and grabbed her pike.

    K’Nika went to clean her pot and Kallun watched the sky.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150576
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Ellie loaded up all her stuff and Julian put out the fire.

    Finn looked around trying to decide on what direction to continue in.

    Lacey sighed and got up still not fully awake.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150578
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    “We go north, then?” K’Nika asked.
    “yes.” Pia nodded. “We follow the path the wizard left us.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150595
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “You sure he went north?” Finn questioned

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #150600
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia stared at him for a long moment, “We aren’t blind.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150601
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    (Kallun’s sister’s name is Isolde, which means Ice Queen, which I want to link into her character. They are half siblings through their mother, but have different fathers and she’s older. Her father is a king, which makes her secretly a princess, although she won’t find this out until later. Yeah. That’s all I have for her so far.)

    (also I’m graduating today. Like high school. It’s crazy.)

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #150607
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Finn held up his hands in a “don’t hurt me” manor. “North it is then,” he said then started walking in that direction.

    (Woah, cool! She sounds like an epic character!)

    (Hey, congrats!!! I bet you’re excited! That’s so cool)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

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