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  • #146948
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Julian smirked. He liked this girl’s thinking.

    “Well miss snake, you might be of some help to us”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146949
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    She smiled, “I left my snake at home with my brother. Unfortunately.”
    “That’s why we call her Snake, because she’s almost always carrying that thing around.”

    Pia smirked, “and as for help, im if more use to you than Kallun.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146971
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “I must thank you at once for not bringing it,” Eliana said quickly, “we would love it if you helped us.”

    “Yeah, anything is more helped than Blue Ha- uh, Kallun”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146973
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia smirked at the princess, but then turned to Julian with a shrill teasing laugh. “Blue hair.” She turned thoughtfully to Kallun and mussed his curly blue locks.
    He flinched, “Stop that.”
    She smiled, “Why?”
    “because if you don’t I’ll take you to your father.” His voice was cold.
    Immediately she paled and backed away. She didn’t reply, but grew tense and angry and looked away.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146978
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Kallun, don’t scare the girl” Julian snarked

    Eliana spoke up again, “um.. we should probably get going”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146979
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    “I don’t- fear- my father!” Pia snapped at him.
    Kallun only frowned and watched her. He nodded and turned into the woods with Eliana. “Let’s go then.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146993
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Sorry…” Julian mumbled.

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146995
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia didn’t reply, but began to follow the others at a distance.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #146997
    Erynne
    @erynne

    “Is she ok?” Eliana whispered to Kallun as they walked through the forest

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #146998
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun shrugged, “The emperor of Thabia, her father, hates her. To him, she isn’t there, and so she might as well be dead,” He glanced back at Pia, “It’s a sensitive subject.”

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147026
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Eliana gasped, “I’m sure it is. That’s awful!”

    (my dad stood behind reading what you said in a dramatic voice then said “what? that makes no sense! Why would she look back at Pia?”)

    (then saw me typing that and said to say “my dad stood behind me and laughed at my stupidity” and then continued to speak in that dramatic voice as he walked around the house saying random things)

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147027
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Kallun nodded and slowed his paced to match Pia’s, gently taking hold of her hand.

    (hahahahaha)

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147046
    Erynne
    @erynne

    Eliana turned her head to see what he was doing. “Hm.”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

    #147052
    Emma Walker
    @emma-walker

    Pia didn’t say anything or look up at Kallun. He squeezed her hand, knowing it would take a few minutes for her mood to shift.

    "If your goal is purity in heart, be prepared to be thought very odd." -Elisabeth Elliott

    #147096
    Erynne
    @erynne

    (*gasp* I just thought of some really cool ideas for this story… prepare for something totally unexpected after you respond to this *evil grin*)

    Julian, who was ahead of everyone, turned around to face the crowd while walking backwards, “hey, New Princess, Blue Hair, said you knew the way around here. Where are we going?”

    Be weird. Be random. Be who you are. Because you ever know who would love the person you hide.

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