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  • #122431
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

      @mischievous-thwapling,

      I don’t know what to say, except you already know about what’s going on with me, so I get it. 🙁 Don’t worry about it; I totally get it. Praying for you, amiga!

      #122432
      Joelle Stone
      @joelle-stone

        @wingiby-iggiby @winter_rose @melodyjoy,

        Ok, guess what I learned about in government? DIPLOMACY. Perfect, right? I’m kind of in a sad mood right now, so I’m probably not going to write a bunch (odd for me, I know), but here’s the main gist of what I learned. Maybe we can incorporate it into the games.

        1. Diplomacy is the conduct of relations among nations.

        2. Ambassadors, public ministers, and consuls are all important people in diplomatic tradition. Ambassadors are the highest ranking official representatives from one country in another. Consuls are representatives of a government who works in another country and assists individuals and businesses who are from the consul’s home country.

        3. Diplomatic recognition (saying that one government believes that another foreign government is legitimate) is VERY important.

        4. Diplomacy involves a lot of careful handling of situations.

        5. Nations generally act out of their own self-interest, and diplomacy is used to align the foreign nation’s self-interest with the home nation’s interest.

        Just thought I’d point that out. 🙂

        #122440
        Mel
        @melodyjoy

          Oh my goodness, you guys! I was gone for what? 12 hours, sleeping and school, and I have like a whole page to read! And it’s all important stuff too! Wow!

          Edits her post a super long time later due to reading:

          Ummm I don’t know where to start. Great brainstorming guys!

          • This reply was modified 5 years, 4 months ago by Mel.

          Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

          #122442
          Mel
          @melodyjoy

            @winter_rose


            @wingiby-iggiby


            @joelle-stone


            @mischievous-thwapling

            First off, Thwap,
            Praying for you! Hope all the details and stress can be worked out. We’ll keep tagging you, but take all the time you need!

            Joelle,

            Wonderful! Amazing! (How do you do that), and those names were so hilarious, and me as the Historian, LOL!
            mom: “why are you laughing?
            me: “umm, I’ve been promoted to historian?”

            Anyway, great list. there was a ton of question marks in that, but now that it’s all in one spot together, we can work on smoothing out details.
            Nice pictures! Fantasynamegenerators? Awesome website, that’s what I created my character pics on, except mine aren’t in color. How did you add that? Mine don’t have hair either or eyes, but I don’t think that’s from the website, is it? (Ope, back to my questions again!)

            Wingiby-Ingibby,

            Filler characters would be great! Maybe just a few main ones that interact on a regular basis, idk?

            Yeah, that sounds like a good idea.
            Good point, the Ronnie Kix father Elite Unit thing might be complicated to develop. Let’s smooth out pg. 33-34 of this post thing first.

            Winter Rose,

            answering your comments chronologically as well.
            1. No, I don’t need him to be a winner, 2 of my characters are already main, winning characters. I mentioned that because, since at this point, all of our characters that are main are winning the Cullings, we thought before that we should have one main lose, to get an insight into that side of things, which is why I developed him in the first place. We don’t have to. That was an idea from a super-duper long time ago. Let me know
            2. I only have 4 extra ones in my notes, do you have more?

            And then all the input you guys put into games, I don’t have time to add in my own, so we can work those ideas through. All of them sound good though. Thank you! (Wing and Winter Rose)

            Joelle, all your cool diplomacy stuff, is that to aid us for our diplomacy branch? My brain is pretty exhausted, and I’m kinda sick right now (yeah, the struggle is real) so all I’m going to say is COOL! You do the rest! (wow, I’m lazy, sorry 😉

            This is what I’ve gathered as a to-do list for the last page and a half I just read 🙂
            (Yeah, I think that’s my job, put together lists of what we need to develop, lol!)

            1. Work out Mr. B and Andor stuff
            2. Work out games info

            Bye guys! MELODY

            Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

            #122450
            Winter Rose
            @winter_rose

              @melodyjoy

              1. I’m fine either way, so you can decide whether or not you’d like to write him in.

              2. Girl, I got way more. Some are my own that I have, alas, neglected to share, mostly because they needed sorted and processing. I also grabbed literally every other character I saw in the posts, so right now all together I think we have thirty, maybe more players.

              What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

              #122452
              Mel
              @melodyjoy

                @winter_rose

                1. I don’t know, depends on what everybody else thinks. GUYS! WHAT DO YOU THINK! (In case you don’t know what the questions is: should we have a MC who is a loser of the Cullings (thus making us have 9 main characters- the one loser and the 8 winners???)

                2. Okay! Cool! Umm, maybe sometime in the next few weeks you can post your extra ones. Just let me know!

                Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                #122461
                Winter Rose
                @winter_rose

                  @melodyjoy

                  1. I think it’d be cool if you decided to write him, just to give a different perspective on the games. Are we still doing the losers-are-enslaved thing? Because if so someone on the inside would give a much-needed viewpoint.

                  2. Ok, I’ll try to get mine up and also see if I can find a complete list of all Cullings players.

                  What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                  #122463
                  Joelle Stone
                  @joelle-stone

                    Let’s see… I think I developed 4 or 5 extra “filler” characters (Lalel, Jabal, Irad, Mista & Mar, etc.) Vika will win TOU, and I was going to have Aleck lose so we could have an inside POV (plus he could learn to take losing more graciously, lol).


                    @melodyjoy
                    ,

                    Ha ha, glad you liked it! I put Blurter in and realized that Wing and I were the only ones with “official” names, so I made some up. ( @winter_rose, you’re the Mental Whiz, in case you didn’t figure it out. :P)

                    Yeah! Well, actually, rollforfantasy.com. But close enough. And no, the facial stuff and color isn’t part of the website (although I wish it was), I added that myself (or tried to, lol) with a program on my computer. 🙂

                    And yes, that was the idea (I forgot to put the purpose in *facepalm*). I was going to develop some other game ideas/answer your questions on the previous page, but I got sick of my computer and went outside for  while. 😉 We’ll see if I can get that done today.

                    • This reply was modified 5 years, 4 months ago by Joelle Stone.
                    #122474
                    Winter Rose
                    @winter_rose

                      @joelle-stone

                      ( @winter_rose, you’re the Mental Whiz, in case you didn’t figure it out. :P)

                      Lol, I picked up as much. The name would be a little ironic if I hadn’t. 😂

                      What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                      #122481
                      Mel
                      @melodyjoy

                        @winter_rose

                        Yeah, I think we are doing the slavery thing. And we do need that view point.


                        @joelle-stone
                           and the rest of y’alls!

                        Yup, everything you said sounds good 🙂

                        Main Characters 

                        Vika:  wins TOU branch (Joelle)

                        Nori:  wins Diplomatic branch (Wingiby)

                        Allor: wins Scientific branch(Thwapling)

                        Sikya: wins Military branch (Rose)

                        Osiris: wins Technology branch (Rose)

                        Aleyda: wins Medical branch (Mel)

                        Rikiar: wins Judicial branch (Mel)

                        ^^ so that is 7 main character winners and then:

                        Ryumon Polit: loses

                        Aleck: loses

                        ^^ and we have 2 loser main characters

                        So we have 9 main characters.

                        MELODY

                        Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                        #122482
                        Joelle Stone
                        @joelle-stone

                          @melodyjoy,

                          Looks good! Should I make a list of all the filler characters we came up with?

                          @winter-rose,

                          I didn’t think about that. XD That would have been funny. 🙂

                          #122487
                          Mel
                          @melodyjoy

                            @joelle-stone

                            Go ahead!


                            @winter_rose

                            is posting all her filler ones with the details on here too, because I haven’t seen them 🙂
                            (Oh, and don’t worry if that post is super long, we don’t mind 🙂 )

                            Thanks guys!

                            MELODY

                            • This reply was modified 5 years, 4 months ago by Mel.

                            Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

                            #122515
                            Joelle Stone
                            @joelle-stone

                              Answers to Mel’s Questions:

                              1. Yes.
                              2. Yeah, I think that’d be useful. Perhaps we should make the same amount, if not more, filler characters that we have main, if that makes sense? Maybe we could have 20 contestants developed and 9 of them are main?
                              3. Oh boy. 😛
                                • Military Branch: I like it how it is. If we completely change it to a mental thing, most of our games will be mental instead of physical, which kind of gets rid of the point of having this huge arena. 😛 We could also have two phases for this one, since it’s kind of important. Like maybe #1 phase is The Living Battle, and #2 phase is the top two contestants picking sides and having a full out battle with strategy and all that good stuff. Of course, Rose is winning this, so maybe she should make all the decisions. 🙂
                                • Scientific Branch: Looks good! I’m not a science-y person either (my best type is probably physics, but more levers and gears and stuff instead of gravity and atoms, that kind of thing). Looks like Thwapling wins that branch, though, so maybe she can choose the most prevalent type?
                                • Technology Branch: Once again, looks good to me!
                                • Diplomacy Branch: Yep, I’m on board for the Race-is-a-ruse thing. Maybe the contestants have to talk someone into something, or talk their way out of something, or, like Rose said, giving a speech or settling a planned argument. 🙂 Andor discovering his favorite 8 here also sounds like a good idea.
                                • Judicial Branch: Yeah, this one is hard. One idea I had was having them go through an imaginary (or virtual reality) court-room trial with them as a judge. *shrugs* Or maybe they have to judge other contestants as they fight and make sure they act according to whatever rules those trying out for Legislative make up (maybe a dual-games thing?), then come up with punishments if a person slips. *shrugs again* I honestly am just blurting my ideas out (I am in the esteemed Blurter Club, after all.)
                                • Legislative Branch: Hm… another tricky one… We could go with aforementioned idea, which sounds kind of cheesy now that I look back on it, or we could have the mind-puzzle the winners have to solve involving the laws of certain galaxies or something?
                                • Medical Branch: IDT the discs will work, unless each disc is color-coded to match a certain disease or wound that you have to know the cure for before being able to attach the cured disease/wound on another player? Maybe you swap discs, and you try to give your cured one to someone else so you can get an un-cured one and work on that? That way you have to solve it fast before your un-cured disc is swapped with another? Kind of odd and confusing. Rose’s idea would work well too!
                                • TOU Branch: Looks good! We could incorporate Rose’s idea as well. I had an idea that maybe while Vika or another character is running through this course they happen into some of Andor’s men, and, thinking that they might need a piece of information the men are supposed to “give out”, eavesdrop, thus hearing about Andor’s select 8 and maybe replacing one of them? *shrugs yet again* Just another idea. 🙂
                              4. Yep, I think the Hetsu (*wipes nose on Kleenex :P) is good for our (more like your) planet! I can develop more game builders if that’d be helpful. 🙂
                              5. Resolved.
                              6. Kind-of resolved. 🙂

                              Ok, I will work on a list of filler characters ASAP. 🙂

                              #122516
                              Joelle Stone
                              @joelle-stone

                                Filler Characters:

                                ( @melodyjoy )

                                Name: Roderick Galvez

                                Gender: Male

                                Age: 16

                                Appearance: Black, buzz-cut hair, dark, piercing eyes. Tall and skinny.

                                Personality: very critical of others, bitter, not someone who is enjoyable to be around.

                                Country: Uflistan

                                Located on the planet Anzoria, Uflistan is bordered between frozen mountains to the North, a huge lake to the South, tall mountains to the East and a huge ocean to the West.

                                Uflistan itself is mainly covered in swamps and has a stormy climate, which has lead to a tightly concentrated population, despite the number of people.

                                The country’s landscape is hideous; dry, barren fields, rocky beaches and smelly, overgrown ponds are just a sliver of the crudity Uflistan has to offer, which is why the country is hated among foreigners.

                                The people of Uflistan are unpleasant towards foreigners and tend to welcome them with nonchalance. They feel foreigners could ravage the country’s well being.

                                 

                                Name: Josune Estrada

                                Gender: Female

                                Age: 20

                                Appearance: Brown, stick straight hair, flowing all the way to her hips. Brown eyes, short for her age.

                                Personality: snappy when agitated, which can be often. Popular, and outgoing.

                                Country: Uflistan, on the planet Anzoria (same as Roderick G.)

                                 

                                Name: Raiko Aasmae

                                Gender: Male

                                Age: 14

                                Appearance: Brown, short, spiky hair. Brown eyes. Short and small.

                                Personality: the kind of kid that gets picked on. Clumsy, and shy.

                                Country: Thiebar

                                The country of Thiebar, located on the planet Sitania, is a small, humble country with a population of 157,904.

                                Bordered between a volcano to the North, a huge forest to the South, desertland to the East and a marsh to the West, the country of Thiebar mainly lives off mining, leatherworking and war.

                                Thiebar itself is mainly covered in uninhabitable wastelands and has a wet climate, which has lead to a sparsely spread population.

                                The country’s landscape is sinister; creepy, aquatic wildlife, rushing rivers as well as drying riverbeds are just a sliver of the dysphoria Omen has to offer, which is why the country is evaded among foreigners.

                                The people of Omen are kindhearted towards foreigners and tend to welcome them with heartiness.

                                 

                                Name: Elis Kallaste

                                Gender: Female

                                Age: 19

                                Appearance: Long, curly, auburn hair. Average height. Brown eyes.

                                Country: Thiebar, on the planet SItania (same as Raiko A.)

                                 

                                (@me)

                                Name: Mahalalel Kenan (goes by Lalel)

                                Gender: Female

                                Age: 19

                                Description: Beautiful, tall, and willowy with a slender frame and graceful movements, one would almost think that Lalel was a woodland sprite. Her blonde hair sweeps past her waist, but has a slight spring to it that makes it difficult for Lalel to tame. Her eyes are a pale periwinkle blue that seem to reflect the sky. Extravert.

                                Strongest Virtue & Vice: Optimism; Arrogance

                                (Once again, I don’t enjoy worldbuilding, so since Mel’s great at that and seems to enjoy it *wink wink*, she can come up with it if she wants. If not, I will think about it and come up with some cheesy planet. )

                                 

                                Name: Irad Telem

                                Gender: Male

                                Age: 14

                                Description: Thin and wiry, Irad prefers games that involve speed and wits rather than brute strength. This is probably because he’s never been a very physically strong lad, but his mind is like a steel trap. His hair is a plain brown, but his eyes are a strange electric blue color. Freckles are scattered across his fair complexion, and his nose is round. But when he smiles, his mouth curves up pleasantly. Extravert.

                                Strongest Virtue & Vice: Encourager; Viciously Competitive

                                 

                                Name: Jabal Accad

                                Gender: Male

                                Age: 15

                                Description: Jabal is pretty much the complete opposite of Irad. He’s build like an ox, tall with broad shoulders and a well-muscled body. His father always pushed him to get into the Cullings, and Jabal did as he was told. Secretly, he enjoys drawing, but his father would consider that weak, so he never reveals his favorite hobby. His black hair constantly falls into his eyes, and his nearly black eyes glitter with intelligence. His skin is a dark brown; Jabal blends in well with any dark setting. He’s an introvert.

                                Strongest Virtue & Vice: Obedience; Gullibility

                                 

                                Name: Mista

                                Gender: Female

                                Age: 16

                                Description: Mista has beautiful golden-blonde hair that she is very proud of. Her eyes are a clear blue. Like her brother, she is tall and strong, used to fighting and determined to win the Military Branch. Although Mista is headstrong and stubbornly determined to beat any boy, she clings to several feministic traits.

                                Strongest Vice & Virtue: Vanity and generosity

                                 

                                Name: Mar

                                Gender: Male

                                Age: 18

                                Description: Mar is shy around other people, but tends to emerge from his shell when around people he knows and trusts. His goal in life is to make the world a better place, and, although the Cullings was not in his plans, he figured he could work them in. His hair is a golden-brown, and his eyes a deep brown. He tends to look at the world as a broken place that’s not beyond hope of fixation (thus his legislative aspirations).

                                Strongest Vice & Virtue: Perfectionism & caution

                                Both Mista and Mar (they are siblings) are from the country of Norstis, in the planet of Tiras.

                                ——————————————————————————

                                And I don’t think anyone else came up with any contestants. @wingiby-iggiby did do our 16-20 (IDR the exact number) game judges, but I didn’t count those since they weren’t contestants. So we have 9 filler characters, and Mar wins the legislative branch, so IDK how many more we need. 🙂 I can make up more if needed. 🙂

                                #122521
                                Mel
                                @melodyjoy

                                  @joelle-stone

                                  **skims paragraph and sees the “wink, wink”. Hmm? OH!! Joelle wants me to make a planet. Gotcha!**

                                  Yeah, I can try to, soon. I’ll let you know.
                                  I’m going to compile a list of all the ideas we all have blurted for the individual games, because I’m lost. If you guys are anything like me, you’ll see how long the post is and skim over everything, but I’ll try…

                                  MELODY

                                  Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

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