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  • #120119
    Joelle Stone
    @joelle-stone

      That’s odd…

      #120162
      Mel
      @melodyjoy

        @joelle-stone

        So, I don’t really care what branch RIkiar and Aleyda win, they are both very warrior trained and stuff. Those branches sound fine for them 🙂

        MEL

        Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

        #120163
        Mel
        @melodyjoy

          @joelle-stone   What’s odd?

           

          Life is short, smile while you still have teeth!

          #120174
          Winter Rose
          @winter_rose

            @joelle-stone

            List looks good! I’ll have Osiris win that branch as long as nobody else needs their character to win.

            What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

            #120184
            Joelle Stone
            @joelle-stone

              Mel,

              The page did something weird. 🙂

              Rose,

              Ok, sounds good!

              #120211
              Mischievous Thwapling
              @mischievous-thwapling

                @joelle-stone

                Thank you! That was really helpful to see list of everybody’s stuff.  Since it looks like Osiris has the Technology branch, and Mista might have the Diplomatic, I’ll just have Allor win the Scientific. 🙂 (If nobody’s needs/wants it)

                "I threw stones at the stars, but the whole sky fell."

                #120339
                Joelle Stone
                @joelle-stone

                  @mischievous-thwapling,

                  Works for me! I might have Aleck use and make Mar or one of the other supporting characters can win the legislative branch. 🙂

                  #120346
                  Brooke
                  @wingiby-iggiby

                    HA! I AM FINALLY HERE AGAIN!!!!!!! I am so sorry I was gone for that long; I’ve been busy. I’ll try to stay more up to date. 😉

                    Ok, first of all, those side-characters sound SO cool, and is it all right if I put my blurting to good use and spit out a few more?

                    As for what branch mine will win…. well….. I was thinking Kix would apprentice under the leader of the EU, and that Nori would be in the diplomatic. But if Mista is going to do that one, I can think of something else, or she could be in the slave ordeal. 😉

                    I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                    Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                    #120374
                    Winter Rose
                    @winter_rose

                      @wingiby-iggiby

                      Yes, please, more characters!!

                      We have a ton of countries so far, but not nearly enough characters to compete for them. We only need characters now. If you already have a country/ country idea, it’s totally fine tho.

                      I’ll try to match up the characters with the countries best suited for them.

                      What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                      #120375
                      Brooke
                      @wingiby-iggiby

                        Thank you! I’ve got countries for them, drats! It’s totally fine though, I can modify. No worries! Just a matter of erasing the country’s name on their descriptions…… *evil chuckle*  😉

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                        I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                        Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                        #120376
                        Brooke
                        @wingiby-iggiby

                          *And I could churn out a few more without countries.

                          I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                          Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                          #120405
                          Winter Rose
                          @winter_rose

                            @wingiby-iggiby

                            Oh, you don’t have to dump the countries altogether! Like I said, if you already have them we might as well use them. I can always come up with extra characters that we need, so just gimme what ya got.

                            We also need a few of those sixteen other judges’ personalities, if it’s no trouble… I already have a few. We still need several more, but only if you’re up for it!

                            What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

                            #120406
                            Brooke
                            @wingiby-iggiby

                              @winter_rose

                              Oh, thanks! And I can literally just make short descriptions of others; I went a little wild with these three. I have such a hard time condensing things! *tries to give an annoying look at my brain*

                              I can try (with the judges)! Should I just put down a few words describing each? Are we going to go into detail with them in the story; or are they more of minor characters?

                              I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                              Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                              #120412
                              Brooke
                              @wingiby-iggiby

                                The Game Judges

                                —There are 2 judges for each of the 8 games in the Cullings
                                —There is one Male and one Female judge for each game

                                THE RACE:

                                Michael Adion (M)  —- is very optimistic and jovial, loves to joke

                                Cassandra Lovell (F) — shakes her head at Michael (but secretly she loves him, lol 😛 ); has a bit of a hard time expelling players, but follows the rules like she’ll die if she doesn’t. 

                                THE OBSTACLE COURSE:

                                Sebastian Rios (M) — sneaky, suspicious, and calm. Doesn’t have anything to hide, however, except for the private peppermints he keeps in his pockets.

                                Mariana Page (F) — very precise; takes tons of notes; and can turn up her nose at unsatisfactory people like she is a million times better.

                                INFECTION:

                                Decretas Cramner (M) — often looks bored and like he’s about to fall asleep: in reality, he’s watching every move and making detailed mental notes that he won’t easily forget. Folks often forget he’s there — watching, watching, watching. 😛

                                Sandie Lyonnais (F) — a typically happy person, but can have moments of sourness and can be sullen. She is easily agitated and offended. Come to think of it, she is not typically happy.

                                TOUCH:

                                Crypien Boisseau (M) — Is laid back and peaceful, but very dependable. He often says things very wise that makes people stop in their tracks. However, he is constantly stumbling in his speech. (slurs words together, gets mixed up)

                                Antoinette Dumont (F) — takes her job very seriously and will tolerate no ill behavior. 

                                THE LIVING BATTLE:

                                Thaliard Pions (M) — kind, but firm. Isn’t afraid to give scores, but will consider them carefully before expelling players.

                                Desdemonda Pandulph (F) — loves animals, but for some reason doesn’t seem to mind watching them be brutally killed. Pulls no punches and likes strict order.

                                THE MECHANICAL BATTLE:

                                Raoul Gareau (M) — very keen and quiet because he is carefully watching. He gives detailed reports and hates if he misspells something or makes a grammar error.

                                Katherine Sirois (F) — is very keen as well, but is also very outspoken about anything she thinks is important — and even stuff that isn’t.

                                THE FINAL BATTLE:

                                Matthias Larouche (M) — very skeptical; sarcastic; degrading toward others; hard as a rock and it is very hard to pass tests with him watching.

                                Amber Hansen (F) — softer spoken and tries to make up for Matthias’s behavior, but is still strict when it comes to grading (I got their personalities from American Idol’s judges, lol. I don’t watch the show, but I’ve seen clips).

                                THE LABYRINTH:

                                Rouke Hollander (M) — very stoick and is an engineering genius (he could be labyrinth’s designer and inventor?!)

                                Madelynn Kelly (F) — extra cautious about absolutely everything and is very anxious, speaks very fast and will sometimes stumble but you don’t notice because you can’t understand her anyway.

                                NOTE: Ok, these judges might be too wild, but I just quickly compiled a list. The girls seem more outspoken while the boys are more laid back, but I guess that’s just how it goes — however, I think it might be a little, well, too much that way. Any suggestions? Don’t feel afraid to express your opinion, and if you have a better idea for a judge, that’s awesome! I just sorta threw these out. Also, many thanks to my sister for coming up with Madelynn’s personality and Crypien’s stumbling. 😉 I was running dry 😛

                                 

                                I light the arrow, pull the bow,
                                Shoot that fire right through my soul.

                                #120416
                                Winter Rose
                                @winter_rose

                                  @wingiby-iggiby

                                  The judges sounds great!! If you feel the girls and boys are too polarized, you could maybe switch some of the personalities? Otherwise I really like them. The ‘wacky’ effect is golden for some side characters, and having those larger than life personalities always adds some fun to the story.

                                  What I know in my head and what I believe in my heart are two entirely different things.

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