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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
(ooh… hope I didn’t move too fast there… )
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
(please change anything that’s not acceptable, and I didn’t mean to inadvertently push Mori out of the story for a while… One idea I had was the magic of the room, you could have him face himself and then once conquering himself, he could wake up, regardless of the potent sleeping draft I shot him with…. but again, change whatever. =) )
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
oooh things just got interesting. lol … @denali-christianson , forgive me if I’m wrong, but Mori wouldn’t hesitate to try to stab Halmar…. right? hehe
and…
haha. this made me laugh for some reason. Poor Halmar, doesn’t know Abirami’s ability yet… lol.
But great job writing! It took me by surprise. Didn’t expect that…
Ku’Aya
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
You were not kidding when you said that Mori was a straight up villain. Two seconds in the castle and he’s already pulling knives on people!
ANOTHER WONDERFUL LORD OF THE RINGS QUOTE! (Any quote with the word “vittles” in it is awesome)
LOL, I didn’t expect Hal to start acting like the responsible e…
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
‘Your friend, I don’t have any idea who you are talking about.’
Alessio’s head pounded, he had no idea where he was. He was trying to get his bearings again, that crazy idiot–! It was Alessio’s fault, he should’ve seen the river. Should’ve reacted any other way, everything was a blur.
He was just scared. He was so so scared, he lost his frie…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
[Quietly steps in. Deposits pathetic writing snipping. Quietly steps out.]
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Well, I may have some trouble keeping up with certain punks, but not today, because today I’m doing my own thing.
Okay, okay, so today I fell through a hole in reality. It’s not my fault. I was just walking along, minding my own business and all the sudden I trip…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Maybe we will find them soon.” Pia took some of the fish from Kalkun and handed them to Ellie.
K’Nika followed from where Julian hand come from with an armload of something green. “Watch these, I’ll be right back!” She seemed almost cheerful as she ran to a tree and climbed it and used a vine to swing across the river again.
Pia picked up o…[Read more]
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Exactly. That still leaves me wondering what these pieces say. They clearly look like they go together, but there are still pieces missing.” Finn said trying to connect the sides.
Julian was now insight also, carrying onions and even berries.
Ahhhh what?? That actually fits his character really well but it’s also kinda funny XD
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Dude I was reading some stuff I wrote where Kallun was a side character and dudeeeeeee Kallun plays the cello!!!! XD
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Pia nodded. “Right. We should all try to change something that the war brought to us. We can’t be enemies right now, because other people are getting hurt. We need to stop the true enemy.”
Kallun came walking back with an armload of fish.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Yeah, there was a war between our country and Kallun’s. When the countries were first founded, they had an alliance through marriage becoming one country, but it didn’t work out and they went at war with each other and split into two countries. Something about our country not trusting the magic of the others.” Finn explained.
“That’s why we were…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Thankfully, Arsene had shifted part of his body to avoid cutting major stab wounds. However, the van was, well, totaled. Currently, the boy was holding a knife at Arsene, demanding. “Where is my friend?!”
“Your friend,” Arsene asked, “I don’t have any idea who you are talking about.”
While this was true, the boy didn’t seem to believe him. Wh…[Read more] -
Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Oh, idk if I mentioned this before, but Halmar has gotten himself a place as a deuteragonist instead of a side character XD It’s going to be dual POV now, because they have opposite views on the theme!
Halmar
“The room just ahead is a room of mirrors, though be careful. The mirrors have a way of revealing your soul. To escape the room, you m…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
that was awesome. =) I like your characters. I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p
Lol thank you!!! That was immensely fun to write. I’m glad you like them!!!
This castle was some sort of demented.
THIS MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
not sure if that fits with your characters ability or n…
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Just had to share… in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
I’d be happy to beta read for you.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
that was awesome. =) I like your characters. I will write Ku’s dream later, but just a short fun ditty in response to Mori. ;p
Abirami
So bored.
I was lying on my back again, waiting for Ku to wake up. A while ago, Enydd had woken up and walked around a bit, asked me what next, but she had gone off somewhere…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Sorry, I didn’t see your post. I only got on late last night and didn’t refresh the page. I apologize for any trouble I may have caused. Do not accept my last post as an event that occurred in Character Castle 2.5. Continue with what you have written. I’ll try to see if I can get Sherlock to bump into Nithel, but you will be in…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
@everyone
HIIIIII I’ll respond to y’all like tomorrow when I actually have time. XD
For now, Niarok is insisting that I get him back to dad status. So here goes…
Niarok
This felt strangely familiar.
Painfully familiar.
The smell of smoke was almost enough to send him into a flashback.
Too bad he’d picked up Yila’s habit of p…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Sherlock witness everything, as he chased after Arsene. Most of all, he saw how Baron had tried to kill his brother. Drawing his handgun, Sherlock activated the targeting beam.
“Jacob Baron, get down on the floor this very instant!”
Baron tried to run, cackling madly. However, as he walked, a man, who was standing in the same path, tripped Bar…[Read more] - Load More












