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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Move! You’re in the road!”
I recoil from the blaring noise coming with the annoyed screams.
“Oh shut up you dirt-eater! Can’t you see I’m blind?!”
What’s this punk talking about “in the road?” This ain’t a road. Roads are steel and electricity suspended two bodies’ high in the air! Ya’d be an idiot to get on them. It’s impossible to get [Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
K’Nika grinned And filled her pot with water, then tore the leaves in half and dropped them in, nestling it around the coals.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Wow, that was quick,” Julian said, surprised.
Ellie pulled the fish of the fire, “These are done, the fire is yours.”
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“What is this…?!” The boy whispered at Arsene. Evidently, he wanted explanations.
“Are you implying I had something to do with that?” Arsene answered with all the innocence he could muster.
But he was never good at being guiltless. “I’m not implying, I’m saying you DID put these into my pockets. Are you trying to bribe me into trusting you?”…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Arsene feigned a yawn before saying, “What’s your name?”
Alessio wasn’t about to tell him, but he really needed information. Seeing him pause, Arsene smirked.
“Then my name is not your business.” He said “If anyone were to ask you who I am though, my name is Raoul Leblanc.”
“And what if I tell them your name’s Arsene,” Alessio said stubborn…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
*Nithel jumped back when the giant cart zoomed up and almost careened into the blind man. He didn’t know whether to bolt, or stay, and the glass dust still stung his feet.
The blind man shouted and waved his stick more.
Nithel’s eyes widened. Wait… They were on a road? “We’re… out of the building…” He whispered.
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Getting out of the pile of glass would be a wonderful start punk.” The man shook his shirt, and larger chunks of the shiny stuff fell from his shoulders and hit the floor with tings or cracks. “I sure don’t want to fall face first in it.”
So the glittery stuff was ‘glass’. Nithel’s brow furrowed, and he debated leaving the wall to walk towar…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams started the topic Ending Scene… Too sudden? Help appreciated and desired! 23K words in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
The book is 61k words =) A small novel, but I like it… just rough draft right now… This scene is just after the final major, massive, epic battle scene that lasts for 11k words!!!! (yeah… I know….) Would love to hear what you think. Especially about the kings talk with Aefflaed ( the protagonist), if it makes sense, if it flows, if it…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Arsene yawned, before asking. “What’s your name?”
The boy glared. “None of you business.”
Smirking, Arsene answered. “Then my real name is not your business. If anyone were to ask you who I am though, my name is Raoul Leblanc.”
“That’s not your real name is it?”
“Who knows?” Arsene responded.
The boy did not look happy with that answer. Actually,…[Read more] -
Joelle Stone replied to the topic Young boy with awkward speech. Thoughts? Help Please. in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Ahh I loved that!! Great job! And yep, made perfect sense. 😀
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Emma Walker replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Dandelion leaves. In Thabia, we drink tea made from the leaves. But I don’t know what K’Nika was planning.” Pia said.
Kallun nodded. “If we had a pot we could cook the leaves down.”
Pia nodded.
K’Nika soon Returned with a flash and held up a small stone pot.
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Erynne replied to the topic RP2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“What is it?” Finn asked.
Ellie arranged the fish over the fire and repeated last night’s process with various spices.
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
ooh… what’s this darkness power?
*Cackles evilly* This is the way that Mori plans to take over the world. XD The Darkness is the power that’s taken over Mori’s world and those who serve the Darkness get to “play” with it. The extents of what it can do are unknown, but Mori is especially good at wielding it. One thing he can do (wh…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
all good. =) too be expected. Lol. I kinda wrote my piece expecting that =)
ooh… what’s this darkness power?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Haha don’t worry! Mori is a happy little character who will find a way to murder everyone so just… don’t worry. XD
Mori
Ha.
Metabolism of a horse.
Yeah, well the idiot wasn’t wrong.
The idiot was a horse. And a bear. And about fifteen other things.
The elephants had been especially amusing.
But frustrating.
The i…[Read more]
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Catholic Creed replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“What do you need help with?”
Well, that brings back memories. That I don’t want or have time for right now.
“Getting out of the pile of glass would be a wonderful start punk.” I shake my shirt and hear the faintest series of ‘plinks’ on the floor. Tile then, of some form or fashion. “I sure don’t want to fall face first in it.”
I swing…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
It felt like a needle was being jabbed into Nithel’s side as he raced- But he missed it. He missed it! The strange cart had zoomed past two seconds before he made it. Nithel almost threw himself off the roof, in a vain attempt to land on top, but skidded to a stop. He would miss. His bones would break on the tile below, or he’d be skewered by a…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
For a second the entire room was quiet.
Then Arsene slowly turned, a smirk stealing across his face. Alessio instantly had misgivings.
“Oh, woe is me.” He crooned, slowly stepping back toward the window.
“Wait, w-what are you doing…?” Alessio stammered. What kind of trick…?
“Woe is me. I guess I’m the ultimate embodiment of evil. I probabl…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
Hmm, interesting! I’m going to change it slightly, but that was an interesting development!
I don’t have anything for Mejt yet XD I know what her great fear is, but I don’t know how to create a scenario around it XD
So… here we go again.
Halmar
They were still staring each other down. There was nothing I could do except w…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years ago
“Bilateral carotid compression.” The boy said abruptly, causing the other to pause a second. “if I blocked the jugular veins in your neck you would be unconscious before you could make a sound. If I shifted my grip to restrict air from the arrestee, you would die in a matter of moments.”
Arsene was impressed at how the boy knew this.
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