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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
Heeeey! I think we’ve got plenty of room so you can jump right in! Would you like a quick brief on the current characters and what’s going on?
Awww thanks so much!!! I’ve got two characters who need some serious development. I’d looove a brief on characters and plot I’m sooo lost!!!!
Oh my gosh that’s really sad…[Read more]
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
That’s so awful about mono, poor thing!
Yeah, it was pretty bad; I had to relearn how to swallow like a normal person afterwards (that was an experience).
Wait you mean an actual official diagnosis?!
Yes, I have severe attention-deficit type ADHD. So severe my inattentive symptoms are almost off the scale. It went com…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
After making the deal with Joel, Max quickly left the ally. You idiot! why did you do that? He thought to himself, not paying attention to where he was going.
“If you plan to stay here, I would tell this place would be that,” A female said as she pushed past two more figures. Turning slightly back to them she said, “Name’s Sloane, mayha…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Showing Internal Conflict in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
YAY!!! Go you!! That’s fantastic, congratulations on finishing your first draft!! Most people don’t manage to draft a book in a lifetime and you did it in like three months!! Great job!!
I appreciate it. 🙂
As long as there aren’t TOO many typos
That’s why I’m doing the quick polish, hopefully that will make it readable. xD
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Rose replied to the topic Showing Internal Conflict in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 12 months ago
Waitwait. Three. Months? Drafted…three…WHAT!?! HE FINISHED HIS FIRST DRAFT IN THREE MONTHS????? YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST DRAFT IN THREE MONTHS NOAH?????
Dang…*is very impressed but determined to find some quip instead of a compliment* Shoot! That’s actually pretty epic!!!Wait till you hear this! It isn’t just a novel-l…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
First of all, this entire exchange was HILARIOUS!! XD Y’all have the best senses of humor XD
Why thank you, Cathy does have quite the ability to take a conversation to the next level. 😄
Oooh, that’s odd! In fact, it isn’t particularly American. (Not arguing! Just adding my weird bits of knowledge 🙂 ) I’ve heard it often and I’m…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 12 months ago
I do hope that Sahar and Yila can become friends…
Yila secretly admires Sahar’s knives!
If it’s up to Sahar, that’s a yes! XD Let’s see how that works out…
I LITERALLY AM GOING TO SCREAM YILA TURNED INTO A PERSON OF HER OWN AND I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT’S HAPPENING AND AHHHHHHH WHAT JUST HAPPENED???????????
I was just calmly…
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Skylarynn replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
@this-is-not-an-alien @joelle-stone @kimlikesart @millenium @anne-the-noob14 @irishcelticredflowercrown
Sorry about the prolonged absence. I was down with mono for all of August, and then school started September and I’ve been pretty wrapped up in that (and getting an ADHD diagnosis. And possibly having an eating disorder). Yeah…been bu…[Read more]
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Nightraven slipped through the dark allies, Dawnthrush melting in behind her. She smiled savagely and licked the blade of her dagger.
And then pulled up short in front of a strange girl with mismatched eyes.
Who was standing in a really dumb pose.
Like she thought she was cool.
Dumby.
“Hey. Do you happen to know where the nearest torture…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
BRING HIM IN BRING HIM IN BRING HIM IN!!!!! I’m sure Niarok wouldn’t mind having one more person with sense, and Yila won’t care since she’s too busy chatting with a rather cute guy named Lorcan….
Awesome! Glad y’all are happy with the idea!
And I actually love that idea! Although I would kindly suggest we wait until Yila can…
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
No you idiot, babies are born with this pet called blue. It’s an alien with purple horns and it eats obnoxious guys who ask dumb questions.
You, Cathy, have one forward and imaginative tongue on you, though I believe I might have mentioned that already once or twice. 😉 That was fun to read. 🤗😄
it’s a Yankee turn of phra…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
AWW!!! That’s so cute!!! That was the most adorable and satisfying ending possible!!!! 😀 😀 I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!
Lol really? *tilts head comparing Chantara and Rosario* huh. But Rosy isn’t dreaming and philosophical…like at all…huh…LOL that’s neat!
Yep, you’re totally right there. I think that if I tried her personali…[Read more]
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
OK, it makes sense now! Thanks for telling me about the crossed out sentences. That was sweet, and I don’t even know these characters as well as others who have been here longer. 🙂 You employed lots of vivid colors to aid your descriptions–good move!!
it would be scary if anybody did live in an area of…[Read more]
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Noah Cochran replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
baby blue
Do people have blue babies where you live? That can’t be a good thing…xD
🙂 I’m assuming you are using that adjective to mean the sky is young.
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Haha I know right !!
LOL, for some reason the philosophy always gets pulled out with Acyn, Faye, and Chantara (For some reason?? She’s a villain?? Why?)
Thank youu, he is my favourite character. I get excited just thinking about him! One can only hope that Liorah stays out of his life permanently so that she can’t p…
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Emily Waldorf replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Good writing! I like this scene. And I was actually just thinking of this song!!! But this is prettier than the version I heard. The Spanish is a good touch. (I didn’t make a fool of myself and get the language wrong, did I?!)
Why do you cross certain sentences out?
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
And Kongar is very creepy *
LOL, he really is though!! Talking about that… since everyone is shuffling around characters anyway, I want to take out Kongar and Chantara, (I have them figured out) and put in one of the characters from my upcoming project! (The Edwardian pirate vs. spy thingy one!) He…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
@denali-christianson
Hello welcome I’m so glad you’re here!!!Ooh, they sound so cool!
This castle has been kinda inactive because Calidris is currently busy and taking a break and I’ve been busy with other stuff but it’s awesome you’re here!
The current characters are Cathy’s Meira and Sloane, my assassins, Kongar and Chantara, and Calidris…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Aww, Lorcan is finally starting to soften a little! That was so cute!
Lolll I know right! He’s super edgey but he’s so sweet at the same tim😄
Dwaaaaa. Way to melt my heart. 🙂 Quin’ has to make a friend out of Locran before he leaves the castle (whenever that may be)…just has to!
YESSS THATS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS T…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
Wow, y’all were busy!
Aww, Lorcan is finally starting to soften a little! That was so cute!
Lol don’t worry, they’ll live! (Probably!) *checks pillowcase*
Thanks! (I love how your princess was so annoying our resident assassin Lorcan nearly cried for joy when she disappears LOL! That was the fun… - Load More












