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  • Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @nobody-in-particular-just-shouting-to-the-void Ehud’s an ENFP-t and Rosario’s an ISTJ-a! I like listening to Like Morning Follows Night by Jeff Williams for them! 🥰

    It all starts to fade around them.
    Fade into a sky above.
    The monster and the webs just start to dissolve.
    Everything is getting dim gray…

    His
    ‘Is this all…a dream?’
    Ehud landed…[Read more]

  • He is not an ex Marine. Klein is an active duty Marine Special Operator attached to the Marine Raider Regiment.

  • Qatar

    “Set her on the floor next to the wall over there, please.” said Niarok

    Qatar set Yila down as gently as he could on blanket her brother had laid for her on the hard stone floor.

    He looked from the haggard face of the brother to the sister’s, flushed with fever, and to her arm, swollen and discolored.

    She’s dying.

    without another loo…[Read more]

  • Great!

    Yeah that’s an idea. Idk if receiving help is something Locran is fond of though? Sorta doesn’t seem like he’d like that too well…

    It could also just be slow forming friendship–like a guy bonding thing–no help involved. Whatever you think would work best!!

  • @emily-waldorf

    Denali, same-o. If you don’t like this, please feel free to change anything.

    NOOOO IT WAS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love seeing this side of Qatar! It’s like he’s so kind somewhere deep beneath all the anger and sternness and even he doesn’t realize it but it’s there and auuuugghhhh!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!

    Niarok

    Niarok paced b…[Read more]

  • Neasa replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @denali-christianson

    As they walked, he found himself eavesdropping on the conversation between the new boy and Acyn. It appeared that new boy had mocked Acyn’s arrogance. And Acyn decided to take offense. Lorcan rolled his eyes. Will children ever learn?
    LOLLLLLL!!!!!! THIS IS SO GREAT!!!!!

    Aw thank you so much XD that is literally my own inner v…[Read more]

  • Yeah…I hate to think the kind of mess they’d make together. And all three of them??!!! Yikes.

  • Yay.

    @rose-colored-fancy

    Thank you!!!! I’m so pleased that you like Quin–I do too. the poor guy just has to get over some things and he’ll be fine. Yeah, a heroic jerk–good description of Qatar. 🙂

     

    Qatar

     

    The man looked at him, boring holes into Qatar’s shoulder until he turned and met his eyes.

     

    The man’s stare seemed to say, “Th…[Read more]

  • @emily-waldorf

    I am just figuring out that Niarok’s ‘feral mountain lion’ is Qatar. I am dying over here, girl! This is just getting better. Also, great job writing Qatar.

    Lol!!!!!! I thought that would be a good way to describe him after reading your first description, and then it kinda just stuck and now I love it so much!!!! And thank you.…[Read more]

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    Oh, yay! I’m so thrilled, because I struggle to make real characters, so I’m glad you like him

  • Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @emily-waldorf

    Aww, I love Quin so much! 🙂 I just adore him, he’s so sweet! I think Qatar has some… issues but I’m sure he’s an overall nice person! (Characters with issues are just the best though!)

    Here folks, I thought of something else I wanted Qatar to do… sorry for posting so much.

    Don’t worry about it! I love reading your stuff! I’m j…[Read more]

  • Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    Oooh, I need y’all’s help naming him!

    Here are the options: (With meanings because I love some symbolism 🙂 )

    Cencio (Victorious)

    Ciro (Like the sun)

    Fausto (Man of luck)

    Fiero (Proud)

    I’m currently leaning toward Fausto, but I’m really not sure yet! What do y’all think?

  • Rose replied to the topic Villains’ Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    @denali-christianson

    And Kongar is very creepy  *

    LOL, he really is though!! Talking about that… since everyone is shuffling around characters anyway, I want to take out Kongar and Chantara, (I have them figured out) and put in one of the characters from my upcoming project! (The Edwardian pirate vs. spy thingy one!) He…[Read more]

  • Thank youuuuuuu! That means so much to me. I was/am super scared I’m going to nail the jerk part and skip the sympathetic part.

     

    NIAROK, GIVE DENALI HER COMPUTER BACK!

    Yay! I like Niarok, and I can’t wait to see what a Niarok’s Niarok-ish way is!!!! Also can’t wait to see what you/we come up with for Qatar’s…[Read more]

  • @rusted-knight, aha! the enigmatic Klein. I think it’s cool that he’s an ex-Marine.

    @denali-christianson

    I am just figuring out that Niorak’s ‘feral mountain lion’ is Qatar. I am dying over here, girl! This is just getting better. Also, great job writing Qatar. 🙂

  • @emily-waldorf

    YAYAYAYAY! I’m so glad you like Qatar! I’m having a bit of trouble with him, and so I’m highly pleased that you like him. I’m trying to make him a jerk, but a human jerk, troubled jerk, who hates himself as much as everybody else, ya know?

    HE’S LITERALLY MY FAVORITE KIND OF CHARACTER AND I LOVE HIM TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also you’re…[Read more]

  • YAYAYAYAY! I’m so glad you like Qatar! I’m having a bit of trouble with him, and so I’m highly pleased that you like him. I’m trying to make him a jerk, but a human jerk, troubled jerk, who hates himself as much as everybody else, ya know? (and despising people is kinda just where he’s at right now, Niarok…don’t take it personally. As though…[Read more]

  • Klein looked up at the night sky. It was so much like it was on Earth and Mars. Stars twinkled and shown in the black abyss. Peacefully they would drift over the sky through the night. Few would notice that. It was taken for granted that simple things were often the most beautiful. While he admired the view Klein recorded it. His suit’s computer…[Read more]

  • @emily-waldorf

    YESSSS I LOVE IT SO MUCH I CAN’T EVEN RIGHT NOW!!!!!! And don’t worry – if anyone is overposting, it’s me.

    Also, would it be cool if maybe Niarok saved Qatar’s life at some point? I literally love Qatar so much and I feel like Niarok and him should have some kind of friendship at some point, but it seems like Niarok has a long way…[Read more]

  • Now Alessio wasn’t certain but he was pretty sure the wolf was glaring at him. Not that he was scared or anything but he backed away from the bars just a little. Actually he had a bit of a phobia for the giant wolf which, while it looked very different from the pack wulfs in the Surreala Guild, it was still close enough to make him nervous.

    Lupa…[Read more]

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