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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years ago
I am just figuring out that Niarok’s ‘feral mountain lion’ is Qatar. I am dying over here, girl! This is just getting better. Also, great job writing Qatar.
Lol!!!!!! I thought that would be a good way to describe him after reading your first description, and then it kinda just stuck and now I love it so much!!!! And thank you. I try. He’s like my favorite kind of character ever, so…
Thank youuuuuuu! That means so much to me. I was/am super scared I’m going to nail the jerk part and skip the sympathetic part.
You actually did a great job of this! He keeps doing heroic things, but they’re all done in a jerky way and it’s JUST SO PERFECT!!!!!! I love Qatar. *Gets dreamy face*
Okay anyways…
rose-colored-fancy
LOL, Liorah and Niarok would hate each other so much XD And Liorah and Qatar would be just as bad! XD (Liorah can’t get along with anyone, apparently XD)
OH MY GOSH I WANT TO SEE THAT SOOOO BAD!!!!!! And then writing Yila’s reaction would literally be the most hilarious thing ever! Niarok hasn’t yet felt comfortable roasting anyone in the group yet… but I’m going to die when he does!
It worked really well! It’s actually a very natural reaction, it feels really authentic!
It felt authentic when I wrote it, so I’m glad I wasn’t going (as) crazy!
Oh, just wanted to clear up, I think I was vague about it before, Acyn wasn’t the one helping Yila. Sahar was, she’s the one who got on the other side of Yila and helped support her. Acyn was just kinda trailing after Niarok, trying to get him to talk XD
Ooooohhhh…
Yeah, sorry about that…
Ohh, MBTI! Acyn is an INTJ-a and Sahar is an ENFP-t! (I think I’m INFJ-t )
YAYYYY PERSONALITY TYPES!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah, I’m an ENFJ-a.
Which means that most of the people I meet in person get knocked over by the force of my general exuberance.
Which might be a problem…












