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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
*Hurries in way too late* Greetings people! I have sort of survived XD I have some catching up to do…
It’ll be fun to see Conroy again! I don’t remember much of him, but I look forward to seeing what you’ll do with him!
Hi Ethan! Welcome! Saevus is really cool! I love that art of him!
My characters are Ophelia and…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
oh, and @ethan-leonard
…. wasn’t sure all the abilities Saevus had, so I just went with best educated guess from what I’d seen so far… hope that’s okay. Change the fight scene to your whims if you wish…. =) I tried to do him justice…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
hahahhaha!!!!! oh, that’s great. and…. gives me a wicked idea. (mischievous grin from ear to ear, putting the grinch to shame)
hahaha! so funny.
haha. that was awesome!
Okay…. so, this is gonna be……… interesting.
Hopefully this is good with you all, but I’m really going to throw a wrench in the works.
(oh, and just in case,…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@inkhorn @jared-williams I’m going to change a few things from Val’s POV!
@inkhorn feel free to change Conroy’s parts đ
âWhatâs your name?â
âI canât tell my name to strangers,” the boy answers abruptly. I pause. Is this some kind of joke?
âAlright then. What would you like me to call you?â
âYou can call me CF if you want.â
CF?[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Jade
Ugh.
Her plan had been as perfect as circumstances would allow. Everything was even ready. But as Jade stretched at the back of the stage, a wrench threw himself into her plan. Given the weird metal clothing the guy wore, âwrenchâ described him perfectly. In and of himself, he wouldnât have been a problem. Now that he was staring down Abira…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Saevus stared at the wolf-thing which had just sprayed him with ice. Roaring out âI will make you my pet, beast!â He charged forward, swinging his sword. Abirami jumped out of the way, and Saevusâ sword swooshed over head and blasted into the wall, creating a huge explosion of rock and dust. One wave of his hand, and dust clear…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
And then I realize that Abirami is a wolf, not a human at the momentâŠ
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Lol YES Totally within character, though maybe something more like âI shall make you my slave forever, scum!â
Saevus stared down at the fool who had dared start an argument with him. âI will make you my slave forever, scum!â He roared. He charged past Kit and swung his sword at Abirami. He dodged, and the sword s…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
There we go…
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Ethan Leonard started the topic Need help with short story planning in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey everyone!
Iâm new to the forum, and I have a few questions for this short story (and it possibly might even turn into a book) Iâm planningâŠ
Basically I came up with this idea to write a story about a United States Marine Corps soldier who goes on a combat patrol, gets pinned down by enemy combatants, and has to make some serious decis…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Hope you don’t mind Abirami crashing your introductions…. but, no way would Abirami sit back and do nothing with such a dazzling, dangerous display (especially with the fire. hehe)
lol. Saevus is not going to like Abirami. hehehe. Â (Abirami transformed into the flying wolf – the aemirok…. so perhaps Saevus will…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
eh…. what happened to my post???
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@ethan-leonard</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@calidris</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>Hope you don’t mind Abirami crashing your introductions…. but, no way would Abirami sit back and do nothing with such a dazzling, dangerous display (especially with the fire. hehe)</p>
<p style=”text-align: left;”>lol. Saevus…[Read more] -
Ethan Leonard joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
YeahâŠI knowâŠIâm wondering if I can get it to the point where Saevus learns that the castle basically has its own powers, and heâll end up challenging the castle itself lol
Saevus looked at this youngster long and hard. The fact that he looked back and didnât look down because he couldnât take anymore was shockin…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Alrighty thanks!
King Miles Regulus:
Looks: Tall, young adult, robust, dark-blond hair, blue eyes, a rough beard growing on his chin, and a very noble look.
Character: Noble hearted, brave, loves a laugh, defensive of others (like, will give his life to save someone he just met), and deeply cares about his friends and family.
will post…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
hope that works. if anything is out of character, feel free to change it. =)
An aemirok is a massive wolf with wings coming out of his back. His claws are like sheaths  – the come down to a point, like normal claws, but then double back  over the tops of it’s toes like miniature shields. It has a long lion-like tail, and it’s ears are slightly c…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
lol. lot happened in a short time… whew!!! Just fyi… fire sword breaking through a door, armored man comes through…. Abirami is going to be on high alert! …. meaning watch out! đ
Grinning from ear to ear, dragging Ku by the hand, ignoring her constant whining and pushback, I led the group into the auditorium with it’s elegant tables…[Read more]
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Ragnarok replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Of course. Just post a character bio and a world bio.
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
CONROY
A woman walked up to me and gave me a small smile. I smiled back, making note of her curly hair, brown eyes, and how eerily similar her clothes were to an Extranei. However, there were multiple other people who were wearing foreign clothes as well. But then it could be to blend in. Or it could be to distract me the actual traitor.
âI d…[Read more]
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