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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 9 months ago
Yeah…I know…I’m wondering if I can get it to the point where Saevus learns that the castle basically has its own powers, and he’ll end up challenging the castle itself lol
Saevus looked at this youngster long and hard. The fact that he looked back and didn’t look down because he couldn’t take anymore was shocking. Saevus had never met anyone like this before. But first things first. He must not crush him, that could come later, when was no longer of use. He must first find out if he was useful…but-
“And what might yours be, young man – I’m sorry, sir?”
A question! Except for asking him about things they didn’t understand, No one but Lord Magus Foedus and General Durun Sollers had asked him questions!
Saevus leaned forward slightly. “I…am…SAEVUS!”
He then held his arms out from his sides and began creating a flaming effect, making it seem like he was surrounded by a wreath of flames. This was also helped with flames coming out of the seams of his armor, creating a terrifying effect.
That last part was really weird to write let me know of a better way to write that please.










