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Veraza Winterknight replied to the topic Spec-fic set after defeat of evil? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
Oh!! Yes it does!! Thanks for tagging me @e-b-raulands
So I’m not sure I can point you towards any specific books, but the Star Wars Expanded Universe/Star Wars Legends books… like half of those take place after the Return of the Jedi. So… the X-Wing series, it’s after Return of the Jedi, and they’re trying to retake…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Spec-fic set after defeat of evil? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 2 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen If you look at it the right way, technically Harry Potter is set after the ‘defeat’ of evil (only to discover that it wasn’t in fact defeated entirely at all). Other than that, nothing specifically comes to mind.
While I can’t think of many fictional examples, it might be a good idea to take a close look at the aftermath of…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
Yay! I was going to write something today if nothing else had appeared, but this is looking fabulous!
Everyone else? Please jump in and edit at your…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
*crash-lands on griffin with unkempt hair and torn clothes*
Hey, guys! What’d I miss? *checks page* Oh, yikes, I’m late in the game. Seems we all are. When do we need to have this thing written? Doesn’t look like we’ve even decided on a final storyline! We might need some Penrose intervention, here.
If I may provide an example of…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
We probably ought to decide on something in the next day or two so we can move towards writing a draft. What options are you all leaning towards?
I think we should do a young child’s conversion because that’s the option we’ve talked about the most.
@julia @evelyn @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @writercatherine @trufflehunter @rebecca-…[Read more]
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Macey Bourque posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Hi. 😛
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…well this is random. xD But hey, what’s up?
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Just being a weirdo and playing around on SE. xD xP
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Writing Life : Bundle of Betas in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion 7 years, 2 months ago
Hello Parimis! We have another lesson from Daeus today, and it’s on Beta Readers! Woot! We all love Betas, and Beta-ing is equally as awesome. Let’s see what Daeus has for us today.
Beta reading is a great way to make friends, help others, and even polish your skills.
Today, I want to give you some tips so that, when you beta read, the friend…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 2 months ago
@silverclaw-bonnetfolly I like the first idea, but I could only see us writing a scene where the character is reading out of the Bible and has a lot of internal dialogue about the content of the verses. While it could still work, I’m not sure if it’s interesting enough.
@writercatherine Those are some great ideas! The thing about the fourth one…[Read more]
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Catherine Roche replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
@j-a-penrose @evelyn @julia @ariella-newheart @rebecca-w @steward-of-the-pen @trufflehunter
Well, here are some options, I guess.
- A gentle (or very not gentle!) character whose heart is touched by God
- A stubborn character that watches someone martyred for their faith and wants to have the same humility & strength as them.
- A proud character…
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J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
One of the things that’s coming to my mind regarding stakes, it that ultimately, the stakes are as high as they can get already. The quiet moment of handing over your life to God when you’ve grown up in a Christian home but have only just truly felt that overwhelming peace, as well as his majesty, is just as powerful as someone who surrenders to…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Writing Life: Arranging Alphas and Betas in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion 7 years, 3 months ago
For those who don’t know, we are now starting to work together to post the annual theme discussion, and this time around, it’s on the exciting art of the Writing Life. This course/section won’t be super practical for right now, but maybe we can be using it later, and being sure to build up and appreciate the amazing relationships with other…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
@trufflehunter @steward-of-the-pen Ooh, my story is like yours, too. I grew up in a Christian home and can’t exactly remember when I got saved because I was so young. I rededicated my life to Christ several years ago and haven’t looked back since. 🙂
I agree that it should have stakes (beyond the obvious stake inherent in conversion).…
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Julia replied to the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
@j-a-penrose *gives you coffee* *hopes you like coffee because there’s controversy on that subject* I totally relate; I guess we’ll have to push onward together 😛
Woo-wie! This is a toughie! I’ve never written this sort of thing before. We should make it very emotional. Like, life or death maybe? My immediate thoughts are that we need to give…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War : A Believable Conversion in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
Oooookay. So, I think there is a war going on. Not 100% sure, because there are high levels of chaos in the guildmaster realm, but here we go.
Prompt: “Write a believable conversion scene”
Time: Monday 11th – Monday 25th
Word Limit: 2500
Level of Freaking Out by Guildmaster: High
For those who are new to Parimi Alca Guild Wars, or if you j…[Read more]
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J.A.Penrose started the topic Cue Your Scatter-Brain Guildmaster Kicking Herself in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
It’s been forever since I’ve said anything. And agh I am so sorry.
This time, I was aware that I wouldn’t be about. However, in the hectic mess of life, I had assumed I had asked someone to step in until things at this end were sorted out. So, either I totally forgot to do that, or no one actually took it on and it got forever lost in the…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Fantasy Novella Alpha Readers Needed! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen Thanks for all you’ve been able to do! Good luck with everything else on your plate.
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anne_the_noob14 started the topic Help?? This needs to be fleshed out a lot… in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
So. I have this REALLY BAD habit of not putting anywhere close to enough stuff in my chapters. I know I need to flesh these two out in particular, but they’re so short I dunno really where to start. Any critique at all is appreciated at this point…
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Chapter three
The next morning, after Kiel had woken up, he cautiously stepped…[Read more]
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Cassie Hartfinh started the topic Introducing…The Dhilorwis Saga!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
*clears throat* Is this thing on? *taps microphone*
Screeeeeeeech!!!
Yikes. Don’t do that, Cassie. You’ll scare everybody away. And you can’t afford to do that. You need these people.
But why?
Because how else can you create the next greatest fantasy series if you don’t have a bunch of beta-readers giving feedback?
Hmm. You’re right. Scaring…[Read more]
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Taylor Clogston replied to the topic Fantasy Novella Alpha Readers Needed! in the forum Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@steward-of-the-pen So sorry for taking all this time to get back to you!
So, uh, I wasn’t really aware there was any symbolism, foreshadowing, or depth to the story, but I’m really glad it comes across that way =P
Would you mind pointing out where you’re seeing foreshadowing? Aside from that, this was good feedback, especially about my n…[Read more]
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anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic Guild War : A Happy Ending…Minus the Cliché in the forum Announcements 7 years, 3 months ago
AHHHH I’VE BEEN GONE SO LONG SORRY GUYSSS!!!!
Yay! I’m gonna go read the finished product in a sec. I’m sure we’ll win!!!!
@steward-of-the-pen Lol you’re welcome! I have lot’s of random prompts floating around in my brain, so I’m glad you liked one!!
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