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@steward-of-the-pen So sorry for taking all this time to get back to you!

So, uh, I wasn’t really aware there was any symbolism, foreshadowing, or depth to the story, but I’m really glad it comes across that way =P

Would you mind pointing out where you’re seeing foreshadowing? Aside from that, this was good feedback, especially about my needing to develop Artorius and the description of the world more.

I have written most of the second novella following it, in which I tried to remedy some of these things. Would either you or @coggleton mind reading that and giving similar feedback?

Either way, thanks so much for your time!