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Sir Leeds replied to the topic For All Those Who Want to Help but Don’t Know How in the forum Poets 4 years, 5 months ago
Hey @dakota , this is definitely uplifting in a worship music song lyrics kinda way. Is that what you’re aiming for?
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Dakota started the topic For All Those Who Want to Help but Don’t Know How in the forum Poets 4 years, 6 months ago
Hey sister there a lot I could say
Bottled up inside of me. A well over flowing, never empty
But I can’t. It just seems like there’s no way
Words are just too weak. My phrases fail to meet the needI’m burning with desire, all consumed with this fire
Of wanting to do something to help
I’m standing right here watching as you struggle
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Cat Thompson replied to the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 7 months ago
Yess, love it!
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Cat Thompson replied to the topic Say and Think (a poem) in the forum Poets 4 years, 7 months ago
I like it!!
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So excited to be here!!
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Dakota replied to the topic Say and Think (a poem) in the forum Poets 4 years, 7 months ago
@sparrowhawke I like this! It’s raw and honest. I don’t think I would change anything in it. Keep writing! 🙂
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Dakota replied to the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
Lovely!
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Bethania Gauterius started the topic Say and Think (a poem) in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
Rough draft of a poem I just wrote today. Probably the rawest thing I’ve written, which isn’t saying much lol.
by B. Gauterius
I cannot say what I think
And I cannot think of what to say.
When my better judgment restricts
What my heart begs to convey–
I’ll pretend I didn’t hear you.
But I wish that I could tell you
And hear what you would…
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Bethania Gauterius replied to the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
I like it! There are a couple lines though that throw off the meter though. But otherwise, it’s great!
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Kylie S. Pierce started the topic Writing Is Like Dancing in the forum Poets 4 years, 8 months ago
My latest poem.
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Writing is like dancing.</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>My words flowing on a page.</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Each powerful emotion</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>Fitting in it’s place.</p>
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Avery_Diagham posted an update in the group Horror Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
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Avery_Diagham posted an update in the group Horror Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
Hello fellow gouhlie lovers im Avery and im so excited to join!
Do any of you guys know how to make my own colab page thx
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Brian Stansell posted an update in the group Horror Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
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@this-is-not-an-alienCathy and Hannah,
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Brian Stansell posted an update in the group Horror Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
So, since I have some spooky thriller stories, I thought I might post one here.
It is unfinished by comes from a dream…nightmare…hard to describe. Doesn’t seem to fit in any of the 52 Challenges, but…here goes.
Written Jan. 28, 2011
“State of Panek”
A man stood in the middle of the dirt road, legs firmly planted, breath steadily chugging…[Read more]-
*staggers in super super late* I’m here!!
Wow, that was a good shortstory. It was intense and left a lot to the readers’ imagination, the imagery for the theme was very vivid and clear but not gratuitous and it had a very punchy pace that kept me riveted until the end. At first I wasn’t sure the descriptions didn’t confuse rather than complim…[Read more]-
Thanks, Cathy! It was something I was kinda kicking around trying to see what it would be like to write a creepy suspense thriller, but I was distracted from ever writing more on it. Just had some collections of ominous images and a few scenes, but that was it. I was calling it “State of Panek”, with the villain’s last name being “Panek”. It…[Read more]
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Ooh I would read that! I loved the images like the mirror and the snappy dialogue. It would require a lot of deep characterization to really tap the theme which from the sample is already quite nicely laid. Maintaining intensity throughout would require a lot of emotional variety and range, I think that aligns smoothly with your current writing…[Read more]
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You know, I never really thought about the vocabulary, until I started doing NaNoWriMo back a couple of years ago. I believe I am a panster, but there were some stories that I actually did an outline for…and generally followed. I guess it all depends. Sometimes the story dictates how I come at it. Sometimes it is merely a series of images,…[Read more]
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Oh same here! I am 100% a panster in the first draft and get more and more planster in the subsequent drafts (I mean ya can’t edit a blank page ;). My mom’s always like ‘Why can’t you write happier stories?’ And I’m like ‘No but my subconscious won’t let me, the Angel of Muse is very strict (oh, have you seen the Phantom of the Opera?).’ Writi…[Read more]
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