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RAE replied to the topic Characters who are causing headaches right now. Help! in the forum Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
New characters causing a headache. Alpha and Grathmere. If you’ve seen my other posts about them, then you will know they are father and son. You will also know I’m trying to end the long thing with Grathmere since in FA (Fettian Age) he is kinda weak since Alpha and the Assassin Clones defeated him and he’s been causing some trouble ad the…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
Grathmere is a hard character to read. He’s a Wondian Nameless Thing making a little harder for me to put on my Character Cloak. He has never tried to kill Leahae, and she didn’t even know he was such a monster until he was defeated for a while my Alpha and the other Assassin Clones. He has almost killed Alpha more than once, on purpose, but I…[Read more]
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RAE's profile was updated 2 years, 9 months ago
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
I mean I can hint to it… And I did actually already hint to something but it’s so secretive…I bet you’ll never figure it out until then. **Knowing smile creeping over face** Oh and it turns out alright in another book! At least completely alright. So if you stuck to your waiting you would be missing out on a wonderful part that I’ve got…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
@inkhorn
Dropping Igua (i-goo-uh) in a fashion show will be hard…He would basically wear his everyday stuff, leather belt, Mithweve tunic and pants along with, of course, his cloak and gloves. But the other problem is he doesn’t like fashion…I’ll try but thanks for the invitation! -
RAE replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
Hi! I’d like to kinda just hop in here. My character I’ve already posted about before but not here. Shall I repost this while changing some stuff?…yeah since Igua is the only one actually talking to me right now (Something about shattering one characters’ finally perfect life, making another blind, and the rest are just refusing me to put on my…[Read more]
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RAE joined the group Publishing and Marketing Nerds 2 years, 9 months ago
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
You’re not the first person to want to know what his father’s last words are! I purposefully omitted them from the text in that one spot since in a later scene that you will have to wait until Chapter 23 for, he tells someone those words and also mentions he has never told another person before. The funny thing for me is the use of the quote f…[Read more]
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“You’re not the first person to want to know what his father’s last words are! I purposefully omitted them from the text in that one spot since in a later scene that you will have to wait until Chapter 23 for, he tells someone those words…”
Figured. Nuts, what an evil author thing to do🙃. “Here’s an interesting tidbit . . . just kidding! Now…[Read more] -
I mean I can hint to it… And I did actually already hint to something but it’s so secretive…I bet you’ll never figure it out until then. **Knowing smile creeping over face** Oh and it turns out alright in another book! At least completely alright. So if you stuck to your waiting you would be missing out on a wonderful part that I’ve got…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
Ummm….I think it might have just sent you an email that just has your name…Sorry, I don’t know what I was doing but anyways…you should now have access.
Yes, I am looking for feedback. What kind? Your kind. I have a reader who I email that usually notices how well I explain things and worldbuilding, another one I email who gives me various things.…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
No, it is not my complete first draft, that is all handwritten and…well in a few words I was figuring out what writing really was at the time. Not my best and has some HUGE outdated mistakes. i have the second draft up and typing but also in writing so, if I do show you handwritten, it will be the second draft from my digital notepad in my fast…[Read more]
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RAE joined the group Historical Fiction Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@abrielle would you like to join my Google docs for Guardian Angels?
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Sure! Is it your complete first draft? Do you need my email? Thanks for asking! I look forward to reading it!
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No, it is not my complete first draft, that is all handwritten and…well in a few words I was figuring out what writing really was at the time. Not my best and has some HUGE outdated mistakes. i have the second draft up and typing but also in writing so, if I do show you handwritten, it will be the second draft from my digital notepad in my fast…[Read more]
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Cool! Well, my email is globetrotter12406@gmail.com. Question, are you looking for feedback? If you are, what kind of feedback?
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Ummm….I think it might have just sent you an email that just has your name…Sorry, I don’t know what I was doing but anyways…you should now have access.
Yes, I am looking for feedback. What kind? Your kind. I have a reader who I email that usually notices how well I explain things and worldbuilding, another one I email who gives me various things.…[Read more]
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RAE posted a new activity comment 2 years, 9 months ago
Ru from the now present just poking something in. A common sample of Igua’s slang is, “The effe (ef-ee) woul’e dest.” Translation: “The effect would be devastating.” Now you can see why his Cloak Circle BEGGED him to learn how to speak normally!
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RAE started the topic Characters who are causing headaches right now. Help! in the forum Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
So my main character is this guy named Nahim (pronounced nay-him not nah-him). All of his friends and family died when he was 15-17 mostly. Since then, he’s gained one friend by the name of Mandin and later gains almost 52 others when he ends up in a squadron in the Space Squads called the Boomerangs. He was raised to believe in God but now doubts…[Read more]
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 Love the address!
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RAE posted an update in the group Poets 2 years, 9 months ago
Wild Mustang
A grazing stallion.
A breeze comes sweeping down from the mountain,
Wading through the grass.
“Be free! Beyond there are grasses and brooks.
Be free!
Let your hooves pound in the open meadows and let your shadow mingle with that of the tree,
Beyond there is freedom. Be free…”
It whispers over and over in his ears.
A swe…[Read more] -
RAE joined the group Poets 2 years, 9 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
I use Startpage.com for research just because it’s private.
One note: when working with fantasy or sci-fi you can speed up the healing process via herbs like athelas in Lord of the Rings or via tech. You also have liberty to make up diceases like the Black Breath also from Lord of the Rings (though it’s more of an effect like stress which has…[Read more]
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RAE's profile was updated 2 years, 9 months ago
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RAE posted an update in the group Sci-fi Writers 2 years, 10 months ago
So I’ve got a problem, I like to plan out stories like crazy and many of them I will never write down but will just be added to my mind’s archives. One of theses stories will be the death of Grathmere, my hidden Antag for Guardian Angels and the following 3 books (What can I say? I wanted a complete story). The problem is, after he is defeated by…[Read more]
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Hi RAE! I have returned. I shall now proceed to pepper you with suggestions good, bad, and downright awesome. (Teasing. I promise I don’t actually talk like this in real life.)
Anyways, about Grathmere. There’s always the standard ‘badguy turns good, saves goodguy, and dies’ trope. However, I’m not sure that this trope would really make much of a…[Read more]-
Grathmere is a hard character to read. He’s a Wondian Nameless Thing making a little harder for me to put on my Character Cloak. He has never tried to kill Leahae, and she didn’t even know he was such a monster until he was defeated for a while my Alpha and the other Assassin Clones. He has almost killed Alpha more than once, on purpose, but I…[Read more]
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My mom thinks a prophet should show up at the final duel and preach forgiveness. Or all three should die.
Anyways… So, did Grathmere accidently give Alpha the disease or was that on purpose? I get that Leahae is a sweet person and all, but if her brother kills Grathmere when she was just beginning to get to know him, it would probably cause…[Read more]-
It’s a tough one. I like the prophet idea but getting one…hard. I also can’t see Alpha breaking down and crying, neither can I see Grathmere. All three…that would spiral into chaos for a Realn clan and a entire kingdom Leahae rules.
On purpose. It does not last forever but when he’s under the effects, he’s helpless. It can. Last hours or…[Read more]
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Alpha doesn’t really have to break down and cry. Neither does Grathmere. They just both need to decide that it’s not a good idea to kill each other right now. That doesn’t mean the relationship is going to be completely healed on the spot, but it can at least open the way for it to begin.
Yeah, that last idea works. But if you don’t like it . . .…[Read more]
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