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RAE posted an update 3 years ago
@abrielle would you like to join my Google docs for Guardian Angels?
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Abrielle posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Fun! I like.
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Abrielle posted a new activity comment 3 years ago
Hi RAE! I have returned. I shall now proceed to pepper you with suggestions good, bad, and downright awesome. (Teasing. I promise I don’t actually talk like this in real life.)
Anyways, about Grathmere. There’s always the standard ‘badguy turns good, saves goodguy, and dies’ trope. However, I’m not sure that this trope would really make much of a…[Read more]-
Grathmere is a hard character to read. He’s a Wondian Nameless Thing making a little harder for me to put on my Character Cloak. He has never tried to kill Leahae, and she didn’t even know he was such a monster until he was defeated for a while my Alpha and the other Assassin Clones. He has almost killed Alpha more than once, on purpose, but I…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard started the topic Need help with short story planning in the forum Historical Fiction Writers 3 years, 11 months ago
Hey everyone!
I’m new to the forum, and I have a few questions for this short story (and it possibly might even turn into a book) I’m planning…
Basically I came up with this idea to write a story about a United States Marine Corps soldier who goes on a combat patrol, gets pinned down by enemy combatants, and has to make some serious decis…[Read more]
Sure! Is it your complete first draft? Do you need my email? Thanks for asking! I look forward to reading it!
No, it is not my complete first draft, that is all handwritten and…well in a few words I was figuring out what writing really was at the time. Not my best and has some HUGE outdated mistakes. i have the second draft up and typing but also in writing so, if I do show you handwritten, it will be the second draft from my digital notepad in my fast…[Read more]
Cool! Well, my email is globetrotter12406@gmail.com. Question, are you looking for feedback? If you are, what kind of feedback?
Ummm….I think it might have just sent you an email that just has your name…Sorry, I don’t know what I was doing but anyways…you should now have access.
Yes, I am looking for feedback. What kind? Your kind. I have a reader who I email that usually notices how well I explain things and worldbuilding, another one I email who gives me various things.…[Read more]