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Brandon Miller started the topic Regrouping in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys!
So I’ve been having an issue lately… coming up with a new one of these every week is hard. That’s my excuse for not posting one this week.
Sorry. I know it’s lame.
However. I’m going to take this week to put together something of a long-term plan that will (hopefully) help me communicate and use these activities to really be h…[Read more]
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Sesi replied to the topic Well, hello… in the forum Introduce Yourself 8 years, 1 month ago
@evelyn Amen! We totally see eye to eye on this subject!
Favourite Nancy Drew?!?! I can’t say that I have a favourite, but The Mystery of the 99 Steps is pretty awesome. We have some new ones and old ones but I like the old ones the best.
Probably English or History (as we old fashioned homeschoolers call it).
@emgc Hello!
Probably my…[Read more]
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Rachel Rogers replied to the topic What a novel idea! (no, literally…) in the forum Rillumen’s Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@pookiemonster I LOVE retellings of fairy tales, but upon further reflection, I’m not sure I want to be that literal about the fairy tale thing. I think I may write something more along the lines of historical fiction with fairy tale flare (I’m not completely sure what that means yet either lol).
Working on both is a good idea! But I think I’ll…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic VERY IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENTS in the forum Announcements 8 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys,
We’ve got two big things going down this week.
First, FEEDBACK FORMS. The Story Embers staff and Guildmasters are looking to make these guilds even way more better. To do that, we need your guys’ thoughts. So, we’ve put together this short survey for everyone to go through instead of doing an activity this week. Please take a few…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller replied to the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey guys results are posted.
I’m running out of ways to say this but… Avensbeck won again. 😐
Anyway, we’ll get them next time. I want to heap praise on @wordsmith and @graceabounds2129 again because they were awesome. Nice work everyone with the ideas too, that was cool.
I’m not sure when our next guild war will be. We’re going to be fi…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic Week 12 – Mood in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
One strength that descriptions have is their ability to set the mood for a scene. For example, if my character is walking in the woods I can describe either the spring breeze brushing through the trees or the hollow, cracking leaves whisping through the eeire silence. In these descriptions I’m describing the same thing, but I’m creating a t…[Read more]
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graceabounds2129 replied to the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Anyone up for quickly writing a scene? I believe today is the due date… and to my knowledge we only have ideas…[Read more]
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Hannah replied to the topic Hey There! (Some of ya may already know me…) in the forum Introduce Yourself 8 years, 2 months ago
Nice to.meet ya!
HF is awesome, I struggle to get through fantasy books. 😬
Thanks for your encouragement!!
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Wordsmith replied to the topic POV Jump (is it okay and when?) in the forum Rillumen’s Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Thanks! That is helpful, and I will defiantly look more into those terminologies.
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Always Been, Chapter One in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@pookiemonster @scribbles @wordsmith
(hey, Wordsmith, sorry I never replied! I’ve been out of town a lot this month 🙂 I couldn’t seem to find your feedback. 🙁 I so appreciate your willingness to help this writer out!)
Hey guys!
Taking your thoughts and feedback from my critique partner I’ve rewritten chapter one.
If you’re interested in…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic A Fun War in the forum Announcements 8 years, 2 months ago
Okay so the last Guild War Prompt was a little heavy. That’s okay, sometimes life is heavy and stories must be honest.
ON THE OTHER HAND, we don’t want to leave everybody feeling low, so this time around we’ve got a more… light-hearted prompt: “Write a scene from the point of view of a five-year-old who has an engaging character voice.”
Due…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 11 – Scavenger Hunt in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey Everybody,
I have some important announcements so I’m going to give them their own topic.
This week’s prompt is a scavenger hunt. Open up your favorite book and find a description you love. Once you’ve got it, share it here along with a short explanation of why you like it or how it works.
Can’t wait to see what’ you’ve g…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 10 – Break in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey Guys,
I’m working on some other stuff today so we’re gonna take a well-earned break from activities this week. (If you’re feeling let down, you could always swing by the critique board and help a fellow Lumenite out.)
Also, one of the things I’m working on is a guild feedback form so keep your eyes out for…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Always Been, Chapter One in the forum Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Sorry for the delay in reply! I’ve been out of town. 🙂 Thanks so much for giving this a read!
The characters do fall into those age rages so good job 🙂
Haha! I was thinking of renaming the island so this is great motivation to do so. Apparently I like names that start with K 🙂
I’ll be working on tiding up the beginning. I…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 9 – Opening Detail in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey Guys
Um… no announcements today.
Cool.
And the assignment I have in mind is pretty chill too. I want to try to keep making these so that they help you write your WIP (is that what you guys want, or do you want a weekly break from your WIP?) so… this week we’re literally going to write your WIP.
Go to your first scene. That opening s…[Read more]
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Brandon Miller started the topic 2018 Week 8 – Description Video in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey Guys!
How was the week without me? Seems like Rolena did a fantastic job of keeping everything rolling smoothly. (Big shoutout to her for that.)
We have three new members (yay!)
@star, @graceabounds2129 and @wordsmith
y’all know how to give them a proper welcome.
Finally, this week’s activity is easy.
yay
I found this great K.M. We…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic 2018 Week 7 – Death Scene Details in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey, guys, so I know you have all been popping in and out of the doc. I finished a draft of the story, but I kind of stink at endings. What do you guys think? Do you have any changes you want to make or is there anything you don’t like? Can you think of a better…[Read more]
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Rolena Hatfield started the topic 2018 Week 7 – Death Scene Details in the forum Annual Theme Discussion 8 years, 3 months ago
Hey Rillumenites!
It just so happens that our beloved guildmaster is away for the week (doing many exciting, writerly things). So, a thousand pardons, but y’all will have to put up with me again. 🙂 So if you have any questions over the week, go ahead and direct ’em my way.
This week’s activity will be simple since we’re working hard to finish…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 3 months ago
@pookiemonster Hahaha. XD Thanks for the party welcome.
@gracelivingston Happy Summer! School definitely gets crazy at the end of spring! Don’t know why they can’t space out the crazy and let us be! XD
Hey, we could do something on TeeSpring. Create your own custom design and then everyone could grab one that way. I think the idea of a mossy…[Read more]
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Coralie replied to the topic Welcome to Rillumen! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 3 months ago
@pookiemonster Um, that profile pic is epic. Howdy! I believe we’ve met in the docs of Google.
*raises glass for Lewis* Love that man *shakes head* Just love that man!
I adore your goal. Life goals right there. So well stated. And your skills cracked me up!! It takes some mad skills to take care of kids, especially so many! I have four yo…[Read more]
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