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@pookiemonster @scribbles @wordsmith

(hey, Wordsmith, sorry I never replied! I’ve been out of town a lot this month 🙂 I couldn’t seem to find your feedback. 🙁 I so appreciate your willingness to help this writer out!)

Hey guys!

Taking your thoughts and feedback from my critique partner I’ve rewritten chapter one.

If you’re interested in seeing what it went from, to what it went too… help yourself 🙂 Thanks for helping me make this story stronger! (also, feedback and critique comments on the rewrite are so welcome!)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VPy_HGANc2M4FykiULnkIyIqCT3fsMtkZB5MBP88DsY/edit?usp=sharing