Pearl F.

@arindown

Hey!

Oh cool…what’s your YA book about? (If you mind me asking 🙂 )

So, do you mean you’ve already started writing them? If so, how long are they so far?

Well, my advice would be to:

1. Choose a genre that you want to write in mainly (I’ve chosen to write historical-fiction at the moment for my novella series I’m hoping to…[Read more]

@abigail-rebekah

Oh wow, the exact same thing happened to my current WIP!  I originally planned it to be a short story of 6,000 words (and I hoped to sell it to a children’s magazine) but after about, oh, 40,000 words, it became apparent that it was going to be a novel XD  And no problem, your explanation wasn’t long-winded.

Abigail Rebekah w…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920 @abigail-rebekah

Hey ya’ll.

I’m currently working on a YA novel…but I have two MG or Kid’s books that I’d like to finish. Do you guys have any advice you’d like to share for someone who’s just starting?

My idea is to do something like Chronicles of Narnia, only with more pictures. Something that’s easy to read and exciting…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920

Aw thanks 🙂

I use YWW (Young Writer’s Workshop). Are you part of it?

Ooh cool!

Yes, definitely…they did a really good job.

Aw thank you! The genre for my novella is historical-fiction (with a little clean romance in there too 😉 ).

This is the synopsis or premise:

World War II is sweeping across Europe, stealing the…[Read more]

@abigail-rebekah

It’s so nice to ‘meet’ you too!  Thanks so much!  I like your name too! 🙂

Which writing website do you use?

I can’t tell much, but my WIP is about a brother and sister who find a lost phoenix and have to return it home (it’s much more complex than that; this is just the gist).

And yes, I saw the Giver movie; the visuals and h…[Read more]

@imwritehere1920

Hey Lily,

Nice to “meet” you 😉

I love your name btw; it’s very pretty!

That’s all good…I’ve been mainly using another writing website recently so haven’t really done much on here.

Ooh cool genre! What is your WIP about, if you don’t mind me asking?

I loved the film for The Giver. Have you seen it? That genre is really…[Read more]

@abigail-rebekah

Hi there! *waves back*.  I’m Lily.  I know this is coming really late (I signed up for the forum, oh, about a month ago?  Idk, quarantine has messed up my ability to keep track of time XD).  Anyway, I haven’t really visited this forum much, because it didn’t look like a lot of people used it recently; but then I figured since I’m…[Read more]

@eitan

Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah

You portray characters very well.

Thanks!

It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.

I have an idea of how I can fix that. Thanks! (:

Don’t use brackets in a story…<…

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@kimlikesart

Good job! You excellently ”prepare a way” for the surprising arrival of the actual Messiah 🙂

You portray characters very well.

Hmm… A 16 years old boy teaching the crowds? It’s way more likely that the teacher will be an older, charismatic man, who enraptures young, hot blooded people like Ruben.

Don’t use brackets in a…[Read more]

@eitan

No, you’re good!

I’m so sorry about the POV! I tried to put a break whenever it switched, and got rid of a lot of thoughts several people had… Do you think I should just leave out Rachel’s part or something?

Hebrew words,.. I changed all Eloha to G-d.

I like the idea of the nick-name. I will have to think of one. I am embarrassed, (to…[Read more]

Awesome!! Will read this soon!

@kimlikesart

I think it’s a better idea, so people can comment on each chapter without comments being confused.

@eitan @beth20
<p style=”text-align: center;”>~a time to be born, and a time to die; a time to plant, and a time to pluck up that which is planted~</p>
<p style=”text-align: center;”>II</p>
Joab ben Elizer, of the tribe of Judah owned a large, one roomed home with a wide guests’ courtyard in Bethlehem. It was a small, though not unimportant t…[Read more]

@eitan

Oh! Do you want me to start a new topic for every chapter?