Mel

@mischievous-thwapling

Thank you so much, Thwapling! You are totally NOT interrupting! I’m so glad you think it’s good; it helps to hear you say that since it can be a rather tiring thing to try to think of stuff and more stuff and other stuff. Thank you for your beautiful encouragement, for I really like the way you phrased it 😀 And don’t fee…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Really?! Yeah, I would love to! But would I be intruding? I would feel like I am sorta just barging in.. XD

@winter_rose

Aw, you’re welcome. 😀

@melodyjoy

Hello!!
I haven’t read the Collaborative Story Details Posting page actually.  Heading over there now!!

@melodyjoy

His name is Cassian Andor, he’s from Rouge One. The only reason I noticed is because a site says there’s going to be a series about him soon.

Thanks! It took me a little while to get them the way I wanted, but I really like the results.

@melodyjoy

Thank you! 😀 I’ll try to get it on the computer, but I’ll probably have to ask my dad to do that, because he knows everything and I know very little 😛

And yeah! “B” is fine with me!

Oo-oo-oo! The Final Battle is going to be so cool! I had another idea then, that for the battle, Kix could ride an arkaina. *big smiley*

I’m good with…[Read more]

@melodyjoy @wingiby-iggiby

Thanks for the feedback. Option B it is then!

Wing

We should definitely have that final battle and motive reveal. Do they know through the whole story that they’re related? Or is it a big surprise to everyone?

Earlier we said Andor has the players kill the man who murdered his parents… the new idea would be in pla…[Read more]

@joelle-stone  @winter_rose  @melodyjoy

JR

Thanks! 😀 And yeah, names are difficult, especially with villains! You want something evil, yet not too obvious…

Bixwort (brother of Maxwort? Former criminal?)

Bandy

Barthis

Those are awesome!

Also,  I saw your question here, and I had forgotten to ask you exactly what you meant.

Maybe the or…

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@wingiby-iggiby @joelle-stone @melodyjoy @arindown

I can’t decide which look I want for my character, Osiris (Egypt). Could you guys tell me which one you like better? As soon as I color him I’ll get his and my other character’s bios up.

@melodyjoy

Okay… so basically Mr. B is the crime lord. He wants to get rid of Andor and rule the galaxy. He tells people he’s helping them by getting rid of Andor and Andor’s ways, but he’s really just a tyrant. Andor sees the error in his own ways, and joins the good guys to defeat Mr.B. Hope that helps!

Okay, we ONLY have EIGHT games. Origi…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby @winter_rose @melodyjoy

Wing: I love your idea! I love secret villains and stuff. The only problem is that now we have to come up with a name for B. *groans* Actually, I really love working with names, but I’m terrible with villains.

Bixwort (brother of Maxwort? Former criminal?)

Bandy

Barthis

Etc. 🙂

Really good ideas! I’m…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

Thank you! 😀 I’m an ok swimmer, but I’ve never actually had to swim for my life…

As for all these branches with their games and everything, whew! Maybe we should focus on them one at a time; first sort out the scientific branch, and then the technology branch, etc. Thank you for outlining them, because that gives us something to…[Read more]

@joelle-stone

I really like your Technology, Diplomatic , and TOU connection ideas.

Maybe there could be a written test? Would that take the place of one of the other competitions if we really can’t get Judicial to work?

@melodyjoy @wingiby-iggiby

Actually, we should probably add the written test. There will be more than eight games because w…[Read more]

@melodyjoy,

Don’t save my brain juice! I drain it once or twice or a dozen times a day, and have found a vending machine that supplies me when I’m drained. 🙂 I want this to be the best it can, which means nit-pick, trash, and shred my ideas to your heart’s content!

Whatever the case, I appreciate your concern. 🙂 And your quote. That’s…[Read more]

@melodyjoy

All those names: what is 16 plus 16? 32 names?! I love ’em!

@winter_rose

From a a post WAY back at the beginning, someone mentioned having Andor pick one of the players to be his puppet. He causes them to win almost every game because he has access to the programmer of the game boards. The player could maybe be willing to work with…

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@joelle-stone

@melodyjoy

Elite Unit works for me.

I’m good with your 16 Judge names, and I already threw together a few Judge ideas, so maybe I can give their personalities to the new names.

From a a post WAY back at the beginning, someone mentioned having Andor pick one of the players to be his puppet. He causes them to win almost every g…[Read more]

@winter_rose

@arindown

@wingiby-iggiby

@melodyjoy

Jedi people name: I’m good with Crystalbolt Hunters, although I also really like the Elite Unit (maybe Elite Patrol) if we’re not doing a crystalbolt thing.

Isn’t Andor one of the High Judges? And then maybe Aleena and Maxwort are the others? (BTW, Maxwort is awesome. Maybe the contestants…[Read more]

@winter_rose

@arindown

@wingiby-iggiby

@melodyjoy

Jedi people name: I’m good with Crystalbolt Hunters, although I also really like the Elite Unit (maybe Elite Patrol) if we’re not doing a crystalbolt thing.

Isn’t Andor one of the High Judges? And then maybe Aleena and Maxwort are the others? (BTW, Maxwort is awesome. Maybe the contestants…[Read more]

@melodyjoy

I’m still here. A little behind maybe, but still hang’n around.😄

Is there something I should be doing?

@melodyjoy

Your info all sounds great! Btw, Thanks so much for gathering all of the scattered ideas and organizing them, it’s so much nicer for everything to be in one place!

I believe that we are still doing Menace64, but since it happens near the end of the story I’m not sure what else needs to be developed quite yet.

@melodyjoy

The last branch was one that Ella made up, called The Operative Unit, or TOU for short (The agents are called TOUs, as in twos). It’s basically spies and a undercover government agency, kind of like the FBI or CIA.