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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
<p style=”text-align: left;”>@calidris</p>
the action of firing a revolver is actually pretty simple. Take a fully loaded revolver, aim it at the target, and pull the trigger. Don’t pull the hammer back afterwards, or you’ll have skipped a round. Just pull the trigger again.(stops self from writing 500k word essay about revolvers)
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I absolutely love seeing all the different reactions to the battle scene =)
I know life is busy… hope your finals went well!!!!
I really want to give Ku’s reactions, but wanted to wait for your response to Ku’s question about love. =) I’m really interested in his reaction… Feel free to write as much or as little as you…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Haha you’ll fit right into the group, I can tell!!
btw I love your quote 😉
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@ethan-leonard @jared-williams I’m going to change Kit’s part a little bit – for the sake of his dignity (and his chance with Val) I’m going to have to tone down his stupidity XD He’s hotheaded and impulsive in his own story too, but it’s in a much more modern setting so…idk how real any of this really is to him tbh. I’m going to try and prod…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Jade
”Quiet, wench!” shouted the weird fire guy, swinging his metal-gloved hand at Jade.
She ducked in time to avoid the blow, but not the fire that suddenly burst from his hand. Searing agony licked the side of her face. She dropped to her knees in shock, cupping her cheek in her hand and screaming. Then she fell silent, and something dee…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I really, really love how Jade has started to see past Ophelia’s apparent shallowness. It makes me so happy to read!! It also means I’m writing her right, and that makes me happy too 😀
And I love how Jade just marched up to Saevus and told him to shut up and sit down XD That gave me such a laugh!
Yes, and it’s good for Jade, too! She sees most ot…[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Isaias
Woah. What kind of crazy was this place? A seven foot Protector on fire? Abirami turning into a wolf? That was kinda cool.
Isaias turned to look at Jade, who’d gone rigid. “Did Abirami really just turn into a wolf?” He bounced on the balls of his feet.
Jade gave him a curt nod. “Yes, long story. Stay with Ophelia.”
Stay? Then was s…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
😂I bet. You can see why I’m trying to develop his character so that he is not just boom town everyday
You did a good job, but two things (1), he doesn’t really control the elements, it’s more that he uses witchcraft, and (2) he doesn’t take his helmet off. Uses it for intimidation purposes. Also his powers…he is so strong th…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
lol. I wish you could “like” posts in here. Would make it easier, I think.
that was awesome!
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 – Room B in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a slightly more in-depth thing about Bonds👆
Which reminds me… I totally forgot to tell y’all about the “bonds” part. Whoops😅. In short, a main theme throughout the trilogy is bonding through friendships/marriage🙂I seem to have miss typed your thing so…
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I have an idea for Cal as well, but I don’t know if I’ll be able to write her today. I’ll just start with Ophelia and try to do Cal soon. I’ve been sorely neglecting her XD
Ophelia
Abirami was finally getting the hang of it. I grinned, thrilled with the development.
He hurried off to go get the others and I stayed behind, anxiously rocking from…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
bwahahaha new victim 😂😂😂 I love it
Hhrrrrrmmmm…I’ll pick him up and drop him into group 2. Unannounced. No warning. See how they react to a king wearing maybe 250lbs of armor suddenly dropping into their midst.
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
FOUND A NEW VICTIM FOR THE CASTLE GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jk @ethan-leonard, welcome aboard!!!
You have two places your character can land in! One group, with Nithel, Nathair, Blaze and Sherlock are in a room inside a mirror being forced to admit their “greed and selfishness” or else…
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I step back. I’m not sure what I’d do if he tried pulling that on me, but I don’t think it’d be pleasant. Is it ok to slap a kid? It certainly sounds awful, but so is touching people without permission.
XD Conroy does seriously need discipline.
It’s so sweet to see Abirami slowly adopting Conroy. 🙂
CONROY…[Read more]
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Rose replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
*Hurries in way too late* Greetings people! I have sort of survived XD I have some catching up to do…
It’ll be fun to see Conroy again! I don’t remember much of him, but I look forward to seeing what you’ll do with him!
Hi Ethan! Welcome! Saevus is really cool! I love that art of him!
My characters are Ophelia and…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
oh, and @ethan-leonard
…. wasn’t sure all the abilities Saevus had, so I just went with best educated guess from what I’d seen so far… hope that’s okay. Change the fight scene to your whims if you wish…. =) I tried to do him justice…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
hahahhaha!!!!! oh, that’s great. and…. gives me a wicked idea. (mischievous grin from ear to ear, putting the grinch to shame)
hahaha! so funny.
haha. that was awesome!
Okay…. so, this is gonna be……… interesting.
Hopefully this is good with you all, but I’m really going to throw a wrench in the works.
(oh, and just in case,…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@inkhorn @jared-williams I’m going to change a few things from Val’s POV!
@inkhorn feel free to change Conroy’s parts 🙂
“What’s your name?”
“I can’t tell my name to strangers,” the boy answers abruptly. I pause. Is this some kind of joke?
“Alright then. What would you like me to call you?”
“You can call me CF if you want.”
CF?[Read more]
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Jade
Ugh.
Her plan had been as perfect as circumstances would allow. Everything was even ready. But as Jade stretched at the back of the stage, a wrench threw himself into her plan. Given the weird metal clothing the guy wore, ‘wrench’ described him perfectly. In and of himself, he wouldn’t have been a problem. Now that he was staring down Abira…[Read more]
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