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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a painting of Basil!

He has a soft red turtleneck Eli knitted for him – it’s his favorite sweater in all the world and he wears it all the time. He’s probably wearing it in the castle, since I’m guessing he just got sucked in from home XD
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@inkhorn yeah, Basil’s interesting to me because his concept is dark and kind of disturbing, but he isn’t self aware enough to realize it XD He certainly lacks awareness, but even if someone were to point it out to him he couldn’t care less. I think that’s one reason why his interactions are so funny to me – he doesn’t know he’s rude/socially a…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I…don’t actually know. He probably told them/got caught and admitted to it at some point because his brother and his best friend are still trying to get him the help he needs for that. But did he actually tell anybody about the ring
*turns over to Ehud: Yo! Did you ever tell anybody about the ring
Ehud: sobs louder.
Me: It’s ok baby…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh no…poor Ehud! Has he told anyone that he took the ring? Or is he keeping it to himself?
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Ok! Deepest regret…
*Me: sorry Ehud*
*Me; EHUD WON’T TALK TO ME HE WON’T STOP SOBBING I’M SORRY MY BABYYYY 😭😭😭😭😭*
Content warning: Toxic family, violence, cussing (*** out but…) oh and mention of drugs
Ehud was in shock, or he would’ve been screaming at Lord Castle. But he was completely in shock. Ku…
And then one after another ove…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m going to have to side with what @lady-grace said. Enydd would hate me forever if I let her die in here. XD
ENYDD: You were actually considering it! And after I’ve been so cooperative too!
ME: Irrelevant.
ENYDD: Irrelevant?! I swear that I-
ME: And into the book you go!
That post was hilarious! (also rather sad…[Read more]
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@lady-grace hehe thanks!
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Alright, here’s Basil’s formal re-introduction to the castle! For those of you who knew him before, he’s changed a bit and really developed (but don’t worry he’s still a socially awkward brat XD)
Basil:
– Tall, (6’3″), super pale white skin, thick black curls. He’s got a very uncanny, almost disproportionate frame – you’d notice it and feel <…[Read more]
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I don’t have much say here since I’m not pulling a character right now, but my opinion is no. Even the castle isn’t allowed to kill people 🤷♀️
That was both sad and funny. Good job👏
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Reintroducing an old character!
Content warnings: there’s some lab scenes – nothing super graphic, but my poor boi is basically a living experiment so take that as you will 🙁
Kit:
“Subject 1711 – divulge your deepest regrets.”
“No.”
I turn to my right to see a tall figure fiddling with his restraints. Pitch black curls bounce around his…[Read more]
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Ethan Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I have a question for those pulling characters out of the castle.
Do you mind if I have Saevus kill them on his rampage he’s about to go on?
Also, I’m gonna drop in Saevus’s top general, General Durun Sollers, right after the rampage of Saevus.
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.5 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
It’s ok, he wasn’t offended, this wasn’t the first time he died.
Nathair awoke in another room much like the room for the first mirror, not a drop of blood on him, and that was a first. Well, it wasn’t a first it was just very rare. Especially when he blacked out.
Dying was awkward, dying was never not awkward. It required a lot more explana…[Read more]
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Inkhorn replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@everyone
I’m going to pull Enydd out. She’s grown a lot here, and I don’t think I’ll uncover more about here. (Not to mention that she’d probably have a nervous breakdown at the beginning of the fight. XD)
I feel for this new character of yours. XD
Your Character: Where exactly am-
Castle: Deepest regret! Go!
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C. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
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Sydney Witbeck replied to the topic Character help wanted!!! in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
Thanks a bunch for the advice! It really helped me to know that other writers have worked through the same problem I’m having! (And that it worked for you when you shifted the perspectives of your MC) Payton is the first get-under-your-skin, can-be-kind-of-annoying-at-times character that I’ve written – I think that’s why I like him XD He does get…[Read more]
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
*Peeks up from coffee* Oh, right! Yeah I’ll get Ehud, I think he’s the last one! XDD
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
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calidris replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
@jared-williams @e-n-leonard I have one more character to do (this is going to double as his re-introduction to the castle), but after that I’m ready to move on!
I’m going to try to finish his tonight!
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m done with my characters’ regrets. After they’ve finished any interaction with Avin, I’m going to pull them out during the beginning of Saevus’s battle and plop Mara into the middle of it (she’ll love that).
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E. N. Leonard replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 8 months ago
You’re welcome!
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