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  • Joelle Stone started the topic Concept Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago

    Hi all! I might have yet another question. Ahem. 🙂

    So I recently did a webinar with the amazing Brett Harris on a good publishing path, and one thing he mentioned was having multiple stories to show an agent or whatever when you’re trying to get published. I realized I really only had one, possibly two ideas, so I started coming up with more.

    Another thing that he said (and that was repeated in the newsletter, I think) was that getting feedback on a story’s concept before writing it. So here’s a concept (or two) that I’d like feedback on! (Also, anyone else feel free to post concepts you’d like feedback on here too!)

    Leaper:

    A story about a girl from Earth getting a visit from someone from another world asking for her help. She finds out that she has the power to “leap” from world to world, and that there are 2 (or maybe 4, I can’t decide yet) other talented people out there in the worlds that she needs to connect. The villain has managed to somehow clone or something 3 (or 5) people with the exact same talents as said Leaper and pals, and he uses them to try and stop them (for what nefarious purposes I haven’t yet figured out.)

    As you can see, it needs some more brainstorming. 🙂 But from that little bit, what do y’all think?

    @mischievous-thwapling

    @zee

    @crazywriter

    @wingiby-iggiby

    @rusted-knight

    @this-is-not-an-alien

    Thank you!

    • Why one extra person in the villain’s cloning? Why did that world call for a girl from Earth of all places? It sounds like a really cool idea if ya execute it well! I like it! 🙂

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