@jared-williams
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
reference clues
– loxors are the giants of my world.
– A tannink’esh is my world’s version of a dragon, but slightly different – such as it starts as an aquatic animal, then flies to high altitude volcanos to mate. It has a pair of fins as well as a pair of wings, and it doesn’t create fire, but can hold molten lava in its stomach, which is just…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
He desires the strength to protect those he loves and his word is his bond. He has a strong work ethic and moral backbone, but he also has a fun-loving side – especially when it comes to his adopted young siblings – where he can be downright silly sometimes.
He recently saved the princess he thought was dead for five years from imprisonment. He…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
2nd Character
Abirami (ah- bee- ram -ee)
https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aygiff.html
general description in the link.
Man is his father, who was killed five years ago by the emperor, who is also after Abirami. In the picture, father is wearing traditional aygiff garb. Abirami, age 18, is wearing what is called a gaaban, a magically-imbued…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
why why why why why why why??? I even changed browsers.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
arggggg (tearing hair out) sniff sniff (tear)
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
WHYYYY !!! It didn’t post my second character. …
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
okay… third try.
https://worldofkaphar.weebly.com/aelacrin.html
First character is an Aelacrin – named Ku’Aya (Coo – eye – ah) who prefers the nickname Ku. (link to picture of her)
General description in the link.
She is a feisty 12 year old who was orphaned as a baby and grew up on the streets, so she has a feral survival instinct, but…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
agg! why won’t it let me post!!!
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
(weeping massive crocodile tears of sorrow.) Sniff. Sniff. I wrote like an hour worth of cool stuff, and it’s all gone. I got logged out some reason. (tear drop).
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
I think this threw me off. I thought he was not a noble, but pretending to be a noble.
First character… OCD, perhaps a bit of asbergers…? Cynical to the heart. Seeking either revenge or a big score that ha complicated interworking that has her posing as someone else? And she has a hired mercenary fellow who is helping…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams posted a new activity comment 4 years, 1 month ago
Haha. Yes. Hulk is a good example.
You can call me Trip or Jared, either way.
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic What is the most bizarre creature you have created for your WIP? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
very interesting that you mention the leviathan, since tannin is Hebrew for sea monster and is typically tied to the leviathan.
My aemirok (flying wolf) started in my head, then its name was inspired by an Inuit legend of a giant beta wolf who would eat any hunter foolish enough to hunt alone at night.
The anqingon and saliero had no foundation…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
Thank you so much,
and
It’s super challenging getting into the head of this antagonist, because he’s being forced into villainy against his will… Perhaps too subtle, but if you noticed, on top of still being attached to his former student, whenever he thinks about not killing, trying to save, or finding some…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
I really… REALLY don’t know how this is going to go… this is my antagonist… and it’s a bit complicated… like major, massive twists that make the worst Disneyland rollercoasters look like toddler play-things. (Okay, maybe I’m exaggerating an intsy-tiny smidge.)
I apologize if parts of it are a bit choppy… it got kinda long and had to…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
Looks like Noah got to it first, but I just had to say – I Love your characters! Awesome job!
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
So, is Will from earth and gets in some form or fashion teleported back and forth? Similar to Ted Dekker’s book, Black? From the sound of the gunslinging, I would hazard a guess, Wild West or some sort of post-apocalyptic?
guessing he’s a pre-teenager (12-14ish) who has a lot of anger which he displaces on his…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
oh… I just reread the bullet pointed directions again…
I had too much introspection, didn’t I…
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
well done! a bit hard to read due to the shortness, and odd vocabulary, but it does give credence to their creaturely intelligence. Having read a description of your character elsewhere, it probably wouldn’t be quite fair for me to make guesses, but I think you did a good job of giving it a distinct voice. Very interesting!
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic Character Voice Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 1 month ago
Interesting… Here’s a first draft bid with a few current WIP character…
Character 1
He’s back.
My heart fluttered, yet the pit in my stomach grew. Where the tales true?
I’d cried at his wife’s funeral, but to hear what he’d done in the vaelintrien capital? Even if they were our enemy, no one deserved that. I still couldn’t believe it.…[Read more]
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Mr.Trip Williams replied to the topic What is the most bizarre creature you have created for your WIP? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 1 month ago
That’s ingenious! Very cool. At first, your description reminded me of the Ra’zac in the Eragon series, but your Kragvora are certainly original. I like how you combined the concept of vampirism with its other aspects.
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