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@scarletimmortalized I loved it! I think you really nailed the first draft. There’s things to work on, but that’s the point of it. 😉

Gather around everyone, and let’s get to editing! I think the main part to work on is a touch of character voice and some more emotion, but the core is there already. So fire away. HERE is the link to the doc, so you don’t have to go back to the first page again. 😛

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