J.A.Penrose

@j-a-penrose The plot twist at the end of the Wingfeather saga series is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. 🙂

@j-a-penrose Thanks for the update and I’ll keep praying! No one would want you to drop dead! <3

Wow! That’s was hysterically amazing!!!! xD

I agree with @j-a-penrose … that was the best part.

So sad it’s over! :'(

Hey, everybody! Sorry it’s been so long since I posted the last installment of “Raiders of the Lost Arc,” but my tablet has been doing weird things and I can’t interact with the site properly. (FYI, the only reason I can post this is because I blackmailed one of my family members into letting me use their device just so y’all won’t die from the su…[Read more]

@j-a-penrose  Sorry to hear that.  🙁

@j-a-penrose Fantastic 🙂

@j-a-penrose Aha. Well, now that I’ve gotten it wrong for the 100th time, I think I’ll remember 😉 Thanks!

@j-a-penrose Wait, I thought effect was the verb and affect was the noun? *scratches head*

When to use a comma with two adjectives

IF placing an ‘and’ between the two adjectives sounds natural, use a comma.

Example: I tiptoed through the treacherous, shadowed alley towards the lamppost, its lonesome, welcoming glow urging me onward.

A…

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@j-a-penrose When’s the deadline?

I’ll be helping to improve the writing style as soon as Iam free and well … I hope Ill be free and well tomorrow …

You guys did a lot of hard work ,keep it up .

@j-a-penrose I think we should wish each other to get better soon 😉 (u didn’t tell me u were sick when I told you I was :/ )

@j-a-penrose that’s great! We’ll keep up the good work.

@j-a-penrose  Hey Jess!  Hope you’re feeling better.

Glad that you’re so happy with the way it’s coming along… this has been my first time doing this and I cannot believe how much fun it’s been!!!

Thanks @scarletimmortalized! XD 😀

@j-a-penrose Thanks! (Lol. It would be so fun to put my parody to music… XD) Sure! That would be a fun thing to add to the story!

So I wrote a poem last night, and I was hoping for some feedback about it. I write a lot of poetry late at night when I have trouble falling asleep, and lately I’ve been messing around with a sweet and simple feel portraying things a young child would go through or do throughout their day.

I like to sing to my Grandma,

She likes to hear my…

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@j-a-penrose I really enjoyed writing for the “Plotting with Purpose” lesson. Ever since you gave the example with the Period of Despair and Surge of Strength and all that, I’ve been noticing those stages in the books I read. It’s been very helpful.

Also, what’s the Story Analysis category for? I have a question that might fit there.

@j-a-penrose I’ve been praying! Hope you feel better soon.

@j-a-penrose What I really need help with right now is brainstorming for the plot (especially the twist), developing villains, and writing a blurb (seriously, they make me cringe more than my first drafts from a year ago). But none of those really fit under the theme.

As far as suspense goes, I want to know how to keep readers asking questions…[Read more]

Okay, guys! I did what I could. @j-a-penrose, how’s the telling now?

Good suggestions from everyone. We make a great team, Parimis!

@j-a-penrose Oy, yeah, sometimes they do seem to take forever.

Ok, sounds good!

*sends chai tea*

@evelyn Whoops, I guess the link got lost way back there xD Here it is.

I agree that Shakespearean doesn’t really fit the story. By meter do you mean the amount of syllables in each sentence? *knows nothing about poetry* I doubt we could make it work here, but it sounds really cool!

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